| "WHERE ARE THE MENS" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: F.A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 17:15
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good call on the sad truth of yaoi art. XD The coloring of the skin on this piece is fabulous. The hair and robe could be a bit more developed - even with "flat" colors, there is room for adding more hues and shades (as you did with the skin tone) to build up the color and make it richer and more vibrant. Building highlights into the color/shade scheme will also help to liven up your image. Nice work!
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 20:32
Comment/Review:
The shading is really awesome on Bakura, your skillz rock mad. As for the anatomy of Bakura, There's his right forearm, it seems a bit too thin compared to the other arm. Especially at his wrist. And overall, I, too, had to chuckle when I first saw this. XD
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 10:53
Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Dice, the outer arm in the detail of the paper Bakura is holding is bent in a un natural mannor. I think holding it closer to the body would look better. The shading overall looks very nice to I can tell there is a roundness to his behind and its not flat. I have to say this...I love the expression on Bakura's face. Stunned is not quite it, shock is closer to what is conveyed. And I must mention that you feminized Atem superbly, I had to chuckle when I saw it.
| Title: FARG Review
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 12:10
Comment/Review:
As requested, I will only critique on the coloring and anatomy of Bakura. As far as coloring goes, I'm not very good at critiquing on traditional coloring but I see a bit of shading on the Bakura in the thought bubble and on their hair. His left arm (not the one 'touching' Atem) seems a bit out of place. Maybe if you could move it in, it'd look a bit better to me. It's quite a funny image, nonetheless.
|
|
