| "In The Morning light" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: F.A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 09:36
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
:D This is a fantastic improvement over some of your earlier works - it's amazing to see how much you've improved. The sketchy quality of your line art really sets a mood for this piece. One thing I would suggest with the coloring is to experiment with matching your style - try adding a sketchier quality to the highlighting and shading as well, and use a smaller brush tip setting so the edges aren't quite as large and round. The airiness of the color application will still work, but it will give it more of a connected, finished look. Keep up the great work!
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 07:06
Comment/Review:
Very Wow - yes you have improved - a lot. I like the interesting style you are working on there. The sketch looks good overall, except for the length of her upper shoulder between the neck and the top of the arm joint. I think I'd have removed the circles you used as a guide for the elbow and rist joints, they don't add to the image and draw the viewers eye away from the focal point of the image which is the fantastic faces on the characters. The only suggestion I have for the colouring is if you could give it (the colours layer only) more of a watercolour look. Nice job!~Fanilia
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 14:30
Comment/Review:
Shasta. Wow. Holy crap--you've totally and completely improved since I have seen your art last. Sloppiness? What sloppiness? The lineart gives off a very nice feeling to the couples, as though their love for each other is raw.The anatomy looks right on, and I love how you did her hair. They have form, and so voluminously. The choice of colors are also very nice. Though, I'm not too sure if the shading itself looks that great, I think the shadow lines on their arms should be blurrier, or smudgier. Other than the shadowing on their arms, I really enjoy looking at this piece and quite surprised by your fast progress. Something clicked, didn't it? ^_~
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