| "Sailor Mars-ofuda" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: arg- quickie
Reviewed By: SunnyLin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 21:57
Comment/Review:
nice! i love the sailors' style. the only thing that i would adjust would be the shape of the head. yous eem to have stretched out the top of the head over to the left. i suggest drawing out the basic circle shape for the head before drawing the features |
Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Meghanna_Starsong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 18:13
Comment/Review:
good job with the upclose of sailor mars. however, i think that the hand is proportionally too small with the rest of her visible body. make it larger, and give the fingers more suppleness. nice texture...this would be great with color too. |
Title: Fan---A.R.G. Me
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 08:43
Comment/Review:
The character is nice. The fingers look a little stiff, but she is holding the paper in a strange way. What does it say? Her eye is nice but the lid above it is too thick and uniform try tapering it at the ends. Overall nice drawing. |
Title: Arg
Reviewed By: Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 20:55
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done, however try working on her fingers a tad bit more, they seem to be bending in an unnatural way. Nice job on her hair except that maybe you should have been more consistent with what ever medium you were using. Overall very nice job with her espression and the shading. Destiny |
Title: ARG!
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 15:45
Comment/Review:
Very nice hair. Maybe thicken the fingers more. Maybe move the paper to show more of her face. (just enough to see a little bit of her other eye) This would look really nice colored. Also, either srtaighten the ring finger or bend the pinky. That looks a little unnatural. Good job with the Japanese characters. Very nice :) |
Reviewed By: DTN [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 14:45
Comment/Review:
Rei so pretty! ^_^ Nice with the characters, even I can't do that and I'm CHinese. Lovely job! |
Reviewed By: SykoPants [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 08:29
Comment/Review:
ooo pretty! it looks like the old fashioned manga art, her fingers r beautiful, tho i would widen her hand a bit. thats all i really haveta critique about this one. great pic! |
