Card Captor Sakura Fan Fiction ❯ Cardcaptors MSTs: Sakura, Syaoran, Tomoyo, Eriol and Kero ❯ 'Your Downfall' ( Chapter 1 )

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The gang do their first MST viewing of a fanfiction written about them. And they don't seem to like it...

I do not own Cardcaptors. Nor do I own Harry Potter. If i did, neither of them would come to an end!

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Anime/Manga: Card Captor Sakura Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 07.10.2007 | Pages: 9 | Words: 4.8K | Visits: 537 | Status: Work In Progress

Sakura, Syaoran, Eriol, Tomoyo and Kero all enter the Viewing Room. Each of them takes a seat in the very comfy chairs.

Eriol: All right. This week's story is by a girl named `fairies-fear-fruit'

Kero: Well, you learn something new everyday.

Sakura and Tomoyo: Amen!

>i don't own cardcaptors.

Syaoran: Thanks for sharing, but I think we already know that.

>CLAMP does. if i did own it, chances are i wouldn't be writing this story. and there would be millions more episodes.

Sakura: Sheesh, the authors of these fanfictions really want us working hard!

>anyway on with the show!

Kero: [singing] Life's a show, and we all play a paaaart…

>#your downfall#

Tomoyo: I like the title. It's intriguing in a lower-case type of way.

Syaoran: Heh.

>“sakura are you okay?” syaoran called out to her.

All: WOAH!!

Eriol: First sentence in; no capitals, no punctuation-

Sakura: Bar the question mark and the full stop.

Tomoyo: It's already looking bad…

>wincing from where she lay on the ground, sakura replied “yes i'm fine!”

Syaoran: [Sakura] I've only hurt myself a lot, please, go about your daily business!

>syaoran ran over to her side “where are you hurt?” he asked worriededly

[Long pause]

Kero: [squinting] …is that…Is that even a word?

Eriol: Is it even English?

>“it's just my side. I'm okay.” she told him.

>syaorann sighed. “come on then. let's get you home.”

Sakura: Wait, aren't we going to find out why I was lying on the ground in pain?

Syaoran: Nah…it must be one of those authors who leave out the important details.

>syaoran needed to support sakura as he half carried her home.

Tomoyo: As opposed to half dragging her home?

Sakura: Ouch.

>“thank you for worrying about me syaoran,” sakura said. she leaned up to him a kissed him on the cheek.

Syaoran: [Syaoran] It's no problem baby. If you keep doing that then you should get hurt more often!

[Sakura hits Syaoran's arm]

Syaoran: Ow!

>“errm” syaoran said, as he blushed profusely.

Everyone: [Groans]

Kero: Why does every single author insist on Syaoran blushing 10 sentences in?

Tomoyo: [darkly] Oh but he's not just blushing…he's blushing PROFUSELY!

[Sakura, Syaoran, Eriol and Kero sweatdrop]

Syaoran: You're scary sometimes, you know that, Daidouji?

>“you're welcome.”

Sakura: [Sakura] Thank you for welcoming me for thanking you.

Eriol: [Syaoran] Yes, well you're welcome for thanking me for welcoming you for thanking you.

Sakura: [Sakura] Ah but-

Syaoran: Stop it…

>“i'll see you tomorrow in school then.” she said before walking into her house.

Tomoyo: That must have hurt.

>syaoran watched her go and sighed.

Sakura: O, look; squiggles!!

>next day at school.

Tomoyo: Time just flies when you're having fun.

Syaoran: It explains why this is going slowly.

Kero: BOO YA!

>“good morning li-kun”

>“morning daiuodojui-san” syaoran replied to her.

[Silence]

Sakura: You've got to be kidding me…

Tomoyo: This person can't even spell my name?! Why would you write a story if you can't even SPELL?

>tomoyo was about to sit down in her seat when eriol wrapped his arms around >her waist.

>“don't I get a good morning?” he asked, pouting slightly.

Eriol: I do not pout! [pouts]

Tomoyo: [giggles] You're so cute when you do that.

Eriol: Do what?

Tomoyo: Never mind.

>tomoyo giggled. “i'm sorry; good morning, eri-kun”

Syaoran: [Sniggers] Eri-kun…

Eriol: What are you laughing at, Syao-kun.

[Syaoran glares at Eriol]

>eriol blushed profusely

All: GAH!

Kero: Again?

>at her use of the nickname that she had given him. just then sakura walked in >to the room and rolled her eyes at the display of affection which tomoyo and >eriol were displaying.

Sakura: Whoa, talk about redundancy!

Tomoyo: And the lack of spelling.

Eriol: And punctuation.

Syaoran: And upper case letters

Kero: Shut up!

>“would you too knock it off?”

Kero: [to author] Would you learn how to spell?!

>she said, frowing at them.

Kero: AHHHHHHH!!

Syaoran: What the hell is `frowing'?

Eriol: It must be in the dictionary next to `worriededly.'

Sakura: Heh.

>sakura then walked over to syaoran and sat on his lap and put her arms around >his kneck.

Tomoyo: …it's not even funny how much the author lacks spelling.

Kero: Maybe the spell-check on her computer broke?

>“good morning syaoran” she said.

>“good morning sakura” he smiled back.

Tomoyo: Good morning, Sakura.

Sakura: Good morning, Eriol.

Eriol: Good morning, Syaoran.

Syaoran: Good morning, Kero.

Kero:…Good morning, world!

>sakura leant her head forwards and pressed her lips against his in a gently but >passionate kiss.

Kero: Oh yeah.

Sakura: KERO!

“would you too knowck it off?”

Syaoran: [Gagging] Lack of spelling…*cough*…can't…*choke*…breathe…

Sakura: [shimmying over to sit on Syaoran's lap] Aw, don't worry; it'll be over soon.

Syaoran: Hmm, [wraps his arms around Sakura] I'm much better now.

[Sakura giggles]

Kero: I may throw up…

[Sakura and Syaoran scowl at Kero]

>tomoyo repeated her best friends words from earlier.

Tomoyo: Yes…yes I did.

>sakura got up and smiled when she saw that syaoran was blushing profusely.

All: ARRRRRRRGGHHHH!!!!!

>just then the teacher came in to the room to start the class. sakura took her seat and started to stare out the window.

Eriol: Well, nothing new there.

Sakura: Hmph!

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>“wh- where am i?”

Kero: You're inside a fanfiction. Don't worry, we'll get you out soon enough.

>sakura asked to no one in particular.

Kero: Oh, it's you; on second thoughts, we'll just leave you in there.

Sakura and Syaoran: KERO!

Kero: Hehehe…

>she was in a grassy field in the middle of no where. sensing something behind >her she turned around and was faced with a tall figure in a dark cloak which >covered it's eyes so she could not see it's face.

Tomoyo: I think the author was hyper when this was written.

Sakura: [Author] WhatareyoutalkingaboutI'mnothyperI'mperfectlyfinecaffeineineedmorecaffeine! !!

Syaoran: That's adorable, sweetheart.

>“who are you?” she said to it.

Eriol: [Darth Vader] I am…your father.

>the dark figure laughed evilly

Syaoran: Well, now we know he's evil.

>and said “I am your downfall, card mistress.”

Tomoyo: Aaaaaaand we have the title.

Kero: I think now would be a really good place to stop…

>the figure then drew out a sword from inside his cloak

Kero: …or not

>and lunged for sakura. sakura was not quick enough to dodge the attack fully >and she ended up getting her arm scratched.

Sakura:[Sakura] Ooo, my gosh! I like, TOTALLY scratched my arm!

>she looked at the cut in her arm

Kero: As it started to bleed profusely.

Tomoyo: He he…

>and it started to bleed a lot.

[All fall over]

>the room started swirling around and sakura felt a hot white pain in her head. >she felt as if her head was about to split open.

Syaoran: What is this; Harry Potter?

Kero: Well, it does have Eriol in it.

[Eriol glares at Kero]

>she screamed.

Tomoyo: [Sakura] The pain…nooooo…it's too much! Take it away! Won't someone please just take it away?!

>!end of part one!

All: Thank GOD!

>well how did you like it?

Syaoran: How colourful would you like your description?

>I hope to have the next chapter up reeeeeeeeeeally soon

Eriol: Save us all…

>so don't go too far away!!!!LOLZ!!

Tomoyo: Lolz?

Kero: Laughing Out Loud…Zebras?

Syaoran: No, no, no. It must mean Lots Of Love Zeus.

Eriol: Or maybe-

Sakura: No! That's enough! Come on, let's get out of here before the next part arrives.

[All exit Viewing Room]

Dear fairies-fear-fruit,

As you asked us, we kindly agreed to read your fanfic and soon regretted it afterwards. We all strongly recommend that you take the time to fix your spell-checker before you write another fan fiction. And to stop the repetition of words. There are at least a quarter of a million words out there, so please, feel free to use them.

Yours sincerely,

Kinomoto Sakura.