Card Captor Sakura Fan Fiction ❯ The Loyal and Loving Girl ❯ Chapter 5 ( Chapter 5 )
Kazeko: Hello everyone! Someone told me that the author's notes are about as long as the chapter itself………to me, that's not necessarily true, but still true…it's about three pages long of author notes, while the fanfic is like 4-5 pages……thank you for pointing that out.
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Always, someone asked me a question that said if Sakura is the only maid in the whole fanfic………the answer is yes…………for this fanfic, the maids from before were either fired or they quit, because if Syaoran's attitude.
Doesn't everyone hate the fiancée of Syaoran? Don't worry, they ARE NOT a couple, they are needed to help throughout the fanfic, but they will break off the engagement eventually…………just not now! And there's another surprise in this chapter ^ - ^!!
The Loyal and Loving Girl
By: Kazeko
~~~Recap of last chapter~~~
Sakura was having so much fun dancing that she didn't notice Syaoran at all. She kept twirling and twirling until she accidentally hit something softly. She turned and saw Syaoran's face.
"Hi Sakura. Now, why do you want to cancel our little meeting?"
"There was nothing to talk about, I already know the answer to the question I was going to ask. I have to go back inside, I need to shower. Ja ne Syaoran."
Sakura left the gardens and Syaoran watched her until he couldn't see her.
`That Sakura is dense! And she's going to get her first punishment soon. And boy, it's lucky that it's not as bad as the third punishment when she gets there.'
Syaoran saw that the Sakura blossoms were still falling and it was truly a miracle, because he thought that the tree died a few years ago, but it just needed energy to provide the cherry blossoms.
He walked back inside the palace and went to call up Qing-Ying.
~~~End of Recap~~~
Chapter 5: Party!
~~~Party day: Afternoon~~~
Sakura just finished cleaning out the laundry and folding them. She took two piles of the four sisters' clothes and went into each of their rooms to put them nice and neatly into the drawers. She went back downstairs and carried Yelan's clothes to her, because Sakura still doesn't know where the heck Yelan's room is…………
After Sakura spoke with Queen Yelan, she went back to the laundry room and looked at Syaoran and Qing-Ying's piles of clothes.
Just as Sakura was about to pick up the piles of folded clothes, Syaoran popped into the laundry room.
"Don't worry about mine and Qing-Ying's, I'll put it back."
Sakura shook her head, not saying anything like last time she interrupted.
~~~Flashback from last chapter~~~
Sakura walked towards the kitchen, seeing Syaoran in front of the door, she handed him the flowers.
"Good job Sakura, now I want you to come with me and wait for my fiancée, so you can be the servant of us while we're here. After that, you're free to go and then I'll meet you at the………"
"Forget I said about the meeting, I changed my mind, I'll just serve you and your *fiancée* for the rest of the night."
"You know you just broke one of the rule?"
~~~End of flashback~~~
"Come on Sakura! I'll do it, or you'll get another punishment!"
Sakura freaked on the inside, while staying calm on the outside. She handed Syaoran the pile of clothes and left sadly, not being able to help.
Syaoran looked back at Sakura, seeing her limping and sense that Sakura isn't happy right now.
`Why do I care about her!! I have a fiancée I knew for about a year, and I only know my servant for about a week! I have different feelings for both of them, but I'm confident that I love Qing-Ying!' (Wrong Syaoran!! Other, other, other!!! It should be Sakura!! Don't worry!! Sakura will be his soon!…………..or maybe not………………)
Sakura walked out of the gardens and thought about her feelings.
"Do I love anyone? What if it's…………nah………he'll never fall for me…………I don't want to go to the party tonight……………my birthday's a hazard tomorrow. And no one's even going to remember it anyway………not even my brother or Tomoyo…………"
Sakura hugged her legs together and sobbed silently, trying not to let anyone hear her sobbing. She was so sad that she's alone to celebrate her birthday again, like for the last few years when she doesn't have any friends.
She wasn't aware that Syaoran was down below at the tree, and he saw her hugging her knee, and crying something out loud. Syaoran couldn't make out the words but he heard Tomoyo.
Sakura jumped off the tree from a high distance, and then she ran out on the dirt path, but she bumped into something warm and comfortable.
"Pardon me."
Sakura excused herself and ran into the kitchen, up the stairs, and to her room.
She left Syaoran stunned by the Sakura tree and he too return back in the palace. He sat down on the couch in the living room and decided to call Qing-Ying to check up on her.
~~~Phone Call~~~
Qing-Ying (QY): Hello
Syaoran (S): Hey Qing-Ying…………
QY: Oh hello Syao-kun!
S: Are you ready for the party tonight?
QY: Yeah definitely my little Wolf!
S: I'm ready to. Do you think that other kingdoms will make it?
QY: Of course they will! It *IS* A party you know!
S: Yeah, I just need to convince my servant to come, but she's crying now and I don't know what to do.
QY: Just leave the fuckin' servant alone! If she doesn't come, then she doesn't come!! She's not the star of the party or anything!
S: But I'm inviting my best friend from another kingdom to see my servant, while he brings his fiancée to the party.
QY: Just leave the fuckin' servant alone! He can always see her after the party if you invite them alone!
S: But………
QY: No more excuses!! JUST LEAVE THE FUCKIN' SERVANT ALONE!!! SHE'LL BE FINE FOR THE LAST TIME!! It matters only you and me, no one else in the way!
S: Okay Qing, Ja ne…………
QY: JA NE!!
~~~End of Phone Call~~~
Syaoran put down the receiver, because the phone call is done and Qing-Ying hurt his ears from yelling at him.
He quickly looked at the time and it was almost time for the party that he must attend.
`I got to announce my marriage tonight! I must be there, and I have to bring Sakura!'
Syaoran went upstairs and to the third floor. Syaoran knocked on Sakura's door and he heard a small murmur that said. "Come in………"
Syaoran went into Sakura's room and saw her lying down on her bed, while writing something in her little book she owns.
"You need to dress up for the party now Sakura!"
Sakura just looked at Syaoran and looked back at her book and continued writing.
Syaoran started to get a little pissed off at the fact that Sakura didn't look well and that she won't dress up for Syaoran's reunion party.
"Why aren't you dressing up!!"
Sakura stopped writing and closed her book. She stares at Syaoran and stood up from her bed.
"You don't need me to attend with you to the party, so I figured that you---"
"What are you talking about? I have to bring you to it so you can meet my friend from another kingdom. He's bringing someone, so I figure you can meet *HER*!"
Sakura sighed and nodded, escorting Syaoran to the door. She closed the door and Syaoran left to dress himself for the upcoming party soon.
~~~Party Time~~~
Sakura and Syaoran got out to the limo with Qing-Ying and walked into the crystal palace where the party is held. Syaoran held Qing-Ying's hand and walked through the aisle with Sakura following behind the *lovely* couple. (I don't think they're lovely -_-. The fiancée is another version of bad Meiling -_-)
As they enter the palace, there were tons of crystals and gems all around the whole palace. Sakura seems scared of the palace, because everything in the palace was all expensive-looking.
Syaoran and Qing-Ying were waiting at the punch table, for the awaiting of his old friend. (Guess who? People have been demanding that they want two special people to appear.)
As Syaoran and Qing-Ying been getting a drink at the table, someone tapped on Syaoran's shoulder, and he turned around.
Syaoran saw a dark-navy blue hair person with glasses and his mischievous grin, with another girl that has amethyst eyes that glitters and long violet hair.
"Hello my cute little cousin."
Syaoran grew annoyed at his old "nickname," since they were related to each other. (In my fanfic, pretend that Eriol and Syaoran are cousins.)
"Will you ever SHUT UP???"
"Nope. I like to introduce my semi-servant and semi-fiancée, Tomoyo Daijouji."
Syaoran shook hands with Tomoyo and she did the same.
Syaoran waved to Qing-Ying and signal her to come over. Qing-Ying walked over to Syaoran and introduced herself, "I'm Qing-Ying Liu, and nobody, and I MEAN NOBODY, can ever call me Qing-Ying, except my family, fiancée, and husband, which I don't have a husband at the moment."
Syaoran sweat-dropped after hearing Qing-Ying's long introduction and the meeting with Eriol and Tomoyo.
Eriol extended his arm/hand towards Qing-Ying and she did the same.
"I'm Eriol Hiiragizawa, and this is my fiancée Tomoyo Daijouji."
The women shook hands, while Syaoran was wondering who was missing.
`Let me think, I know that someone is missing here. Let me see, there's me, Qing-Ying, and………………………… 8230;……………………oh my God!! I forgot about Sakura.'
Qing-Ying was talking to Eriol, and kind of flirting with him. Tomoyo was aside, leaving Eriol and Qing-Ying to their flirting conversation.
Syaoran was out looking for Sakura, and he couldn't find her anywhere inside the palace.
`She's supposed to be in the palace!!! Boy, if she goes home, she's getting in trouble BIG time!!'
Syaoran went outside of the crystal palace and saw a limping figure with another figure sitting on the rocky benches.
"Get away from me, you flirting jerk!!"
"You're too pretty for me to leave you out of my sight."
"Fuck you!! Get away from me you son of-----!!"
The guy kissed her forcefully and gripped her from getting away from him.
Syaoran heard and saw everything that happened. He came over to the *unlikely* couple and he punched the guy on the cheeks.
The mysterious man fell to the ground, leaving a very scared and shocked Sakura on the rocky bench. She slapped him on the cheek and saw that Syaoran saved her from the terrible man.
"Domo Arigatoo Syaoran." Sakura bowed to Syaoran and she looked down at the ground.
"Why are you outside!! You're supposed to be in the palace!!"
Sakura answered sadly and not truthfully, "I was afraid that I might break something. When I was about to go to the punch table, that *man* grabbed me from behind and took me outside, and you probably know the rest."
Syaoran was still in anger, but has a very little bit of sympathy showing in his eyes, but it showed a lot of anger.
"If you want to slap me really hard, go ahead, I deserved a slap on the face."
Syaoran raised his hands and swing really fast towards Sakura.
Sakura cringed a little, and felt his hand on her cheeks, but no pain.
Sakura looked up to see Syaoran smiling more and than anger in his eyes. He came closer to Sakura and his face came really close to Sakura. His lips softly landed on Sakura's and they form a sweet kiss.
`Sakura's kiss is a lot different than Qing-Ying's, but Sakura is my servant, so it's illegal to married non-royal families. I wish that Qing-Ying's kiss is like this……………so sweet, nice……………GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF SYAORAN!! You have to like Qing-Ying better!! Sakura is a lower class than you, and she will never be a higher class ever.'
Syaoran stopped the kiss and looked at Sakura in the eyes. Her eyes show apology and sweetness. Syaoran took Sakura's hand and walked with her back inside the palace.
~~~Inside the palace~~~
Sakura and Syaoran were walking together back to Eriol, Tomoyo, and Qing-Ying.
Qing-Ying took Syaoran's hand and drag him to another section of the palace.
"What did you go Syao-kun? Why is *SHE* here!! She's---"
"Qing-Ying, you let Sakura out of the palace with that disgusting man??"
"Oh no!! I didn't, Sakura left the palace by herself, then she got in trouble by the man, so I have nothing to do with it!"
"How do you know about it?"
"Um………I saw Sakura leaving the palace!!"
Syaoran discovered in himself that he couldn't choose to trust Sakura's saying or Qing-Ying's saying. He thought in his head that he's going to ask Sakura about the saying, and either way, she's going to get another punishment.
~~~Meanwhile~~~
Sakura was waiting at the punch table for Syaoran and Qing-Ying to finish talking. She kept staring at the girl with the violet hair and wondered that if she know her, because she looks so familiar.
Sakura walked up to the girl, tapped her shoulder, and said, "Do I know you from anywhere? You look really familiar…………"
Tomoyo turned around and look at her, realizing that it was her old friend from this village.
"Sakura-chan? Is that really you?"
Sakura looked in confusing at Tomoyo, and saw that it was Tomoyo, her long, best friend!!
Sakura and Tomoyo hugged each other and talked all of the night.
(Sorry, but I don't want to do the talking…………it's going to be sooo long to do it -_-)
~~~Back at the Li palace~~~
Eriol and Tomoyo are living together in the Li palace, because his family didn't prohibit the marriage between his servant and himself, so he had to move. Luckily, Queen Yelan agreed to give those two a home.
Sakura was wide awaked in her room, counting down the seconds till it's her birthday.
"5, 4, 3, 2, 1, Happy birthday to me…………" Sakura said to herself softly.
~~~To Be Continued~~~
Kazeko: Sorry for not updating for a LONG time, I was busy with summer school, and I kind of slacked at the ideas for the parties. Don't worry about the next one, next chapter will be put in a one or two days; three days at the most -_-!!
Please review!! I was so happy that I got a lot of reviews for last chapter ^ - ^!!