Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Breaking Free ❯ What To Do? ( Chapter 10 )

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Chapter 10
What To Do?

Its for all you B/V fans who have been waiting for this moment when the sayjin prince meets our Chinkyuu genius. And a little side note for malimillions I think your a little confused about the last few chapters. There was no Turles Corps, he's not in this at all. They were all just slaves and nothing else.

NC-17: Lemon, Language

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Vegeta had wore himself out after nine straight hours of training and decided it best too get a little food before going out for another nine. Sweat still dripped from every pour on his body as he walked into the slum town. He was no stranger too the lower classes of the universe where money was key over all. Things could be bought and sold for the right price, as well as any body for the right price so long as you spoke right. But the prince wouldn't lower himself too common whore trash. He deserved pristine young flesh for his royal body. Which unfortunately he hadn't found recently as the urge for too spend some sexual tension had built up for the past few years. But training took hold of his lust and threw it down deep into the darker parts of his mind. No distractions must interfere with his training.

He walked calmly into a restaurant that didn't seem to disgusting. His usual arms crossed over his chest and predominant scowl across his face as he entered giving the slow lingering gaze over everyone just daring to piss him off. Those inside clearly took the hint and looked back at their food trying to ignore the fierce eyes of
the sayjin. Vegeta only walked forward and up too the bar sitting himself alone from the others and glaring at the bartender who came over instantly. " Give me food
until I say stop, or I will kill you and every other person on this blasted planet." The bartender only nodded quickly rushing back too the kitchen too inform their chefs
of the guest they would be serving.

" Damn Frieza sending me out here to find some stupid bitch...." Vegeta muttered to himself as the predicament was foolish. Sending him of all of his warriors to
handle such a simple task that didn't even need too be done. There was no other Legendary, he was the only super-sayjin. Vegeta's evil gaze looked up to the
bartender who brought out several plates setting them quickly in front of Vegeta then quickly scurrying away too avoid his wrath. " Feh fucking cowards." Vegeta
grumbled as he dove into his meal quickly scarfing down every morsel food only to be severed even more. ' Just wait you little bitch i'll enjoy making you suffer for
humiliating me like this!'

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Bulma's ship crash-landed none too gently as she hit her head on the side of the ship leaving a decent sized bump. She mumbled a few choice words as she rubbed the
sore area slowly getting out of the ship. She looked around for any signs of life and was greeted with a small town off in the distance not much more than two miles by
what she could see.

Though that wasn't her only worry as the thought of none to friendly aliens quickly damped her thoughts of actually going into the town. ' Well I am stranded anyhow,
not like it really matters where I land so long as I can find some way too help Chi-Chi and Gohan.' Bulma gathered up her few capsules putting them in the short
hemmed skirt which barely covered her ass, ' You figure for as many clothes as that asshole had he would at least have a longer skirts, or a pair of pants.' She
grumbled in her head as the clothes that Broly had before they had tried too leave were very limited. All of his clothes were long pants and all spandex which she
absolutely refused too wear but kept a pair and a smaller set of armor with it just in case. She was just holding onto it at least so long as her other clothes couldn't last
so long. But all of the women's clothing were completely indecent to even walk around in the room in! She had little too nothing but she fortunately found something
tolerable.

She grabbed one of her remaining storage capsules and threw it at her ship encapsulating it in a flash of smoke as it soon fell back into her hand. With a sigh she
headed into town.

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( Meanwhile)

Chi-Chi came too for once in a long while. Her eyes dimly waking up to see the world around her. She felt herself on a comfortable mattress a thin shit over her body.
Slowly her senses felt the black hair in her hands she looked down seeing Gohan. Her little boy was back in her arms and sleeping comfortably. She thought she'd
never see him again, after all Broly swore she never-!
Her breathing hitched as she felt two strong arms pull her and Gohan closer. Almost petrified with fear she almost didn't turn her head, but she managed and saw
Broly's sleeping form right next to her. A smile on his face as he held them both. ' I have too get out of here! I need too get-!' Her thoughts stopped as she saw one of
Broly's eyes raise open.

' Escape my dear? Oh you can't escape me anymore my mate but don't worry I won't let you go again.' She heard him speak without even moving his lips and he
smiled more. ' Oh did I not mention since you drank my blood you and I have a mental link now? Yes my mate are thoughts are no longer separate, I can hear, see,
and imagine everything you put in your beautiful mind. Nothing can be held back from me now......' He opened his second eye and looked up and down her nude
body and stopped at her eyes.

" I swe-!" Her yell was ended as Broly crushed his lips against hers. ' Don't scream! You'll wake Gohan and he's not fully understanding of our relationship.' She
heard him say as she was about to begin thrashing and stopped as Broly pulled back. He licked his lips enjoying her sweet taste. ' Your going to be an enigma my
mate, your to tempting to resist.' Broly chuckled with a smirk. His tail uncoiling from his waist gently sliding up Chi-Chi's thigh and wrapping around her loose tail.
Chi-Chi's dark eyes burned with fire as she growled mentally too him. She could faintly see fear across his eyes like Goku had when she did that but it vanished. '
Listen hear!' She yelled mentally, slapping his tail away to his displeasure. ' I am not your mate! I never will be, so let me and Gohan go now!' Her tone ringed out
anger but Broly could change that.

' You can love me you know. There are many things you won't ever have too worry about if you bite my neck. Fully bind us together Chi-Chi!' Broly grabbed her
pulling her up against him but deeply hugging her. ' I could not exsist again without you! Every moment I regretted what I did to you and Gohan....' Chi-Chi could
actually feel his words seeping in. It was the truth in her mind she couldn't say otherwise. Broly's face was buried in her shoulder. ' I am.... sorry.... I am.... so sorry
Chi-Chi, I didn't know what else too do then, but now I can see my faults. I won't force you into this Chi-Chi, not anymore this will all be done of your free will.' She
on the inside only rolled her eyes not buying his words but as droplets of water ran down her shoulder it changed her thoughts. He was crying. She could feel his tears
running down his face and onto her.

' I'll tell Gohan you are his mother, everything he will learn about you again he will be your little boy again.' Broly said sadly and pulled away. Pain was evident, as he
wiped away his tears and rolled his back to her. She saw him curl up in a ball and resettle back down. Broly hugged his knee's, understanding these unhappy feelings
that ran away freely within him was unsettling even for him.

Chi-Chi almost felt sorry for him, but she only narrowed her eyes and turned back around and held her Gohan protectively. She slowly herself went back to sleep
leaving Broly all alone again.... ' SHE'S NOT YOUR MATE YOU DUMBFUCK!' His inner personality screamed angrily snapping Broly's eyes open. ' YOU'VE
ONLY BONDED YOU FOOL! KAMI!' It groaned. ' I THOUGHT YOU KNEW THIS SHIT!' Broly only closed his eyes as his inner voice berated him, but on
the inside truly Broly just wished he could of never woken up when he held Chi-Chi and Gohan in his arms.

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Bulma finally made it into the town almost dying from the heat, this planet was like a desert! Even with her 'limited' clothing it was still hotter then she imagined. But
she was reliefed when she finally made it in. The inhabitants paid no real interest to her. She was simply looked at then shrugged off. They weren't hospitable but at
least they weren't hostile. She made her way into one of the buildings a restaurant she found out as she went inside and she looked around. Nobody really cared
about her as she went inside. All of the inhabitants were humanoid obviously although there were some major differences in species. But first things first as she located
a restroom. The languages and signs were much different then on Chinkyuu but she could tell the difference. She got a fresh drink of water and finally was able to use
the bathroom since ten hours ago.

She wiped her hands with a paper towel and headed back out into the restaurant. She looked around hoping too find at least someone that could be similar enough to
a Chinkyuu-gin. She looked all around until a form sitting by the bar caught her eye. Long flame upswept ebony hair, a tight fitting spandex suit and armor generously
showing the built structure of his body. ' Well he is the only thing close to being Chinkyuu-gin, just hopefully his hospitality is good.' She sighed as she headed towards
him.

Vegeta's senses picked up a energy heading towards him, even though it was pitifully weak compared too him it caught his interest. He looked out of the corner of
his eye to see a woman walking towards him. Although the mask he wore didn't hinder inside he was grinning. He didn't think this planet had any decent women, let
alone one like this. Long blue hair that had not been cut dangled down around her waist, matching deep ocean eyes that could drown the weak of heart. The generous
amounts of cleavage and her long legs were tempting to the eye as well. The very short skirt barely concealed her plush bottom, and the deep V neck was barely
holding her chest in place.
Of course at first he could assume her a whore, but her body and looks weren't disheveled. There showed no bruises on her white creamy flesh, the rank odor and
smell whores came with did not linger on her. Instead it was fresh ripe enticing smell of shampoo and soap. Rarely street whores or even ones from brothels held their
own personal hygiene in high regards. But even with her looks Vegeta's guard was not dropped, many races would send anything, or anyone to kill him and his
instincts, although they were reacting with some interest, still they told him to be cautious around her. Poison, backstabbing, drugs, and hidden threats were
everywhere.

He continued to eat though, wanting to seem uninterested so that if she were here to kill him she would think him off guard. But as if a simple weak woman could kill
the sayjin prince. His comrades though, they were not the best trained in dealing with a situation like this. Raditz was to stupid and driven by lust and would be dead if
she happened to be an assassin. Nappa was too thick headed but wouldn't be done in easily.
But he watched as she sat down next to him. He could see her general surprise, interest, and curiosity in her eyes but he didn't buy it just yet... " Excuse me but I
wonder if you can help me?" He heard her ask and he could easily tell from her voice and general caution that she wasn't here to kill him. But how stupid was this
woman to come up and to ask him that question. ' Maybe I should just blast her for being so stupid.' But as his eye looked her over again. ' Maybe I could get some
enjoyment, I may need to train but the body does require fulfillment.' A smirk spread across his face as he turned to her.
Bulma sat back a little more deeply as the man turned to her, he was gorgeous! Her thoughts were stopped as the cool smirk across her face gave her warning of
some thoughts this man might be having. She closed her thighs together making sure that he didn't get any wrong idea's. " I need some help and your the closet thing to
my own kind I thought you might be able to." She said although hoping that he would quit that smirk, it was unnerving to be in such a skimpy outfit although he wasn't
a sight for sore eyes either.

" Do you have any idea who I am woman? Please tell me why you would think that I would help you or why I would even bother helping a foolish woman like you?"
He spoke to her as the smirk dropped into a stone look.

" Look all I need is just some help as to where the hell I am. Its a long story as to where I came from and how I got here but I have no clue as to where or what
anything is." She pleaded looking at him but he only snorted and turned away going back to eating.

" Your foolishness and complete stupidity as to who you speak to is laughable woman. I am not a tour guide nor do I have any interest into helping you or any other
creature on this fucking planet." He said glaring at her one last time before going back to his food.

The bartender began to see the sayjin prince irritated by a new stranger and thought it best before his entire restaurant was demolished to step in and keep the sayjin
happy. " Please mam do not bother our patron here as he is far too important to be bothered and for the safety of us all not to speak too him again." He said
motioning for her to move away. " If you need help I will lend my assistance."

Bulma glared at the man next to her before turning to the bartender. " Yes can you tell me where I am?" Bulma listened as the bartender helped her out much more
then the asshole next to her. He told her where she was in the galaxy and although she didn't really understand the mapping system he gave her coordinates on her
location and the ones for her trip back to Chinkyuu. " Thank you so much, since my spaceship crashed here I didn't know if any life was here." The bartender sent her
a confused look but brushed it off as he went back to work.

Bulma let out a breath as she rested in her chair. " Now I just have to get back to Chinkyuu, build another ship and find you Broly...." She said in a sad yet angry
voice. She grabbed her zapper as she knew she could kill him eventually all she needed was some time. " I swear i'll kill you for what you did to everyone on my
planet. Even you are supposed to be some sort of almighty sayjin I will kill you." She said before turning around in her seat and went to step off but the man next to
her in flash grabbed her and planted her against the bar.

" What did you say!?" He growled as fire burned in the back of his eyes. Bulma's zapper fell to the floor leaving her at this man's mercy. " Tell me what you just said
woman!? I will not ask again!" He yelled as he brought his face just inches away from her. The hue of his eyes had darkened, his grip was tight as his gaze burned
straight into her soul.

" Wh....What do mean what I said... I didn't mean that I was going to kill you" She said nervous as his scowl was dangerous and threatening and she knew that he
would kill her if she didn't tell him what she had just said. Though what she said probably meant she was going to kill him but she didn't even no him so why would he
think so even if he was an asshole but now she was at his mercy.

He growled again. " No you dumb bitch. Did you just say almighty sayjin? Tell me or die now!" He drew one of his hands back letting it glow with an energy Broly
used many times around her.

" Yes...." She said meekly as the glowing orb moved closer to her. The world went upside down as she found her face now looking at his ass. She was flung over the
man's shoulder and he blasted out through the roof of the restaurant paying no heed to anyone below him and rocketing into the sky. Before she had blinked twice
and before she could even think to scream they were both alone in the desert completely away from the town and any help for Bulma.

Vegeta dropped the woman to the ground without her best of care in mind. He was furious inside but he kept his anger down, this woman knew something about the
non-existent super-sayjin. " Woman!" He snapped as he glared down at her. " You will tell me who this sayjin is now!" Vegeta demanded as he towered over her
form on the ground.

Bulma although terrified over what just happened got to her feet standing eye level with Vegeta, she wasn't going to let him impose on her though she knew he might
just kill her. " You could of just asked but since im here I guess I can explain what happened." Bulma dusted herself off as Vegeta reformed the ball of energy in his
hand. " Okay! Okay I take the hint! Jeez calm down and i'll tell you!" Bulma said using her hands to calm the irate man down.

" Then speak woman I have little patience." Vegeta growled letting the energy ball disappear.

" The sayjin I am looking for is named Broly, he has my friend and her son prisoners with him." Bulma sat back on a rock, not wanting too really be standing after
making the long walk into town. " He came and purged my planet a month or so back. The entire population was annihilated except for me and few other

Chinkyuu-gins that lived, but now..." She sighed. " Its only me and my friends are all that's left."

" Woman I want to know about the sayjin! I don't give a flying fuck about you or your damn planet, so tell me where the damn sayjin is or I won't have too kill you!"
Vegeta snarled slamming his foot into the ground emphasizing his point as well as strength.

Bulma cringed back as Vegeta drew his foot up from the ground, it was broken like paper as his whole foot was easily shoved through it. But she calmed herself
under Vegeta's gaze. " I don't know much except that he proclaims himself the Legendary Super-Sayjin, has a father, and draws his power from a gem on the middle
of his forehead." Bulma looked up at Vegeta who had relaxed a little.

" Humph... I knew he wasn't a real super-sayjin. A sayjin who gets power from a stone...." Vegeta snorted as he now knew that this so called super-sayjin was nothing
more than a fake. This woman knew his weakness already, but how could she..... unless..... " Woman did you come from this sayjin's ship?" Vegeta questioned as he
reigned in his anger.

Bulma looked away from him. " Yes I was.... I was donned his concubine but he never was really interested in me...." Bulma chocked back the tears as her horrible
ordeal refolded in her mind. " He raped my friend and took her child to be his servant.... then he killed my boyfriend.... He ripped his stomach out!" Bulma began to
sob as she could still see Yamcha's guts hanging out from his stomach, the painful cry he screamed, the splash as his blood sprayed over her feet.

Vegeta didn't pay attention to the wailing female as he clicked his scouter. " Nappa! Raditz! I have the woman with me and have our information." Vegeta said as his
two fellow sayjins picked up his message.

Nappa was the first to send back. " So is he real? Or is this all just a ruse?"

Vegeta chuckled. " No Nappa he is a sayjin but he isn't a super-sayjin, he's just a fake that needs to get power from a stone." He laughed with the sight of such a
thing.

Raditz clicked in. " So we're done here? Can we get off the stupid rocks or what?" Vegeta narrowed his eyes. Raditz was starting to loose his focus as a sayjin, but
then again when they hadn't made any money in the last month it works on you.

" Yes were leaving and return to the bastards planet. I'll join you there shortly." Vegeta snapped cutting off their replies and he turned to the woman behind him. A
devilish smirk working its ways across his face. He strode over as he titled his head up arrogantly. " Well woman its time to go." He chuckled as Bulma looked up at
him.

" What? What do you mean by that? I am not going with you!" She said loosing her tears and regaining her voice. She stood up angrily with this man who had just
dumped her out in the middle of no where. " Listen here you macho prick! I don't care what you say, what you do, what you think I am not going anywhere with you!
Got that!" She screeched.

Vegeta had to clamp his hands over his ears to drown out that high pitched scream. The once sly smirk quickly changed into a dark scowl as he lashed out grabbing
Bulma by her throat. " Listen hear you little bitch! You don't have a choice, under orders I have my right to do with whatever I want with you. And since that other
sayjin is busy with your friend...." He trailed off to lick his lips. Bulma didn't need to be a genius to figure out where he was going with this. She was terrified again, she
had just freed herself only to be subject to another. " I think i'll take you." He threw her over his shoulder and blasted off too his ship.

Bulma flailed wildly as she tried to free herself from Vegeta's grasp but to no avail. His grip was firm and she knew that without her little zapper she was now under
his whim. Vegeta landed still carting Bulma over his shoulder as he ducked into his space pod. He planted Bulma on his thighs and wrapped his arms around her chest
trapping her in his grasp. His right foot pressed the launch button and the spaceship fired up into space.

Now they were both alone in space and in cramped quarters. Bulma was now terrified, she couldn't do a thing to stop this man. Now she needed to find a way out of
this before she became his whore for real. She could feel his hands already roaming over her body. The rough feel of his gloves over her flesh was uncomfortable as
he breathed in the smell of her hair and she could almost feel him grin against her. " Please no..." Bulma whimpered as one of Vegeta's hands brushed aside her
panties. She could feel him trailing along the outside of her folds with one finger, he was toying with her wanting to draw out her whimpers. " I'll do anything but not
THIS!" Her voice cried as he plunged two fingers home in her depths working her insides with skill not even her boyfriend had. Her whole body tensed in shock as
Vegeta worked her folds.

Vegeta only growled huskily. " No woman you don't have a choice, you have nothing else to offer me besides your body. Relax and enjoy it woman..... Im sure you'll
be very satisfied in the end." He nipped her ear drawing out more whimpers from Bulma and unknowingly leaned back against him. " I am Vegeta woman, the prince
of all sayjins no woman can resist me, even if you tried i'd get what I want." He chuckled lightly making Bulma shiver in fear.

" I...I am a scientist... I can make you anything you want... I was a genius on my...." She couldn't finish as she couldn't keep herself from enjoying what Vegeta was
doing. His hands were already making her heat up, he found one of her pleasure spots and tortured her with it. Her back arched and she hated it. She could feel her
body trying to clench around his hand. It was so degrading for her body to betray her like this. His other hand reached through her shirt and grabbed her breast. She
bit her lip as he began working it in hands, his fingers pinching her nipples almost painfully but enough to make her whimpers increase.

" A genius woman!?" He said with mock surprise. " Please great genius enlighten this foolish prince in what you can possibly do for him." Vegeta's sarcasm even made
himself chuckle. ' This woman a genius! Hah! Its amazing how cheap there lies will go just to make me stop the inevitable.'

Bulma was able to reach into the top of her skirt finding one of her storage capsules that held her some of her clothing. She clicked it and dropped it to the floor. The
plum of smoke caught Vegeta off guard as his feet moved up on instinct. He was no stranger to bombs and other devices that could injure a person. Though as he
looked down he caught sight of a pile of clothing that was definitely not there before. " There capsules and this isn't the only thing they can hold. I have two other ships
inside of these things. One twenty times bigger than this." She said panting as Vegeta stopped his hand.

" Hmmm..... You have peaked my interest but these will not do. I need training equipment and other things to help me become stronger. I need to have something to
train in, if I can become a super-sayjin woman I will let you go. " Vegeta said although displeased he wouldn't get to bed her. But the ultimate goal of super-sayjin was
far to tempting.

" How do I know you will?" Bulma said as Vegeta withdrew his hand from her warmth much to her relief. " What can you promise me that you will keep your word
and let me go?"

Vegeta only chuckled again. " I can only offer my word woman. But what assurances do I have of your ability to make what I need? If you can prove to me that you
can make something, then you have my word that I will let you go. My honor cannot break my word woman." Vegeta said as Bulma relaxed.

" Can I ask one more thing of you? If you do this for me I give you my own word that I will give you what I want." Bulma asked as Vegeta gripped her tightly.

" Ask but I may not give it woman."

" If you kill Broly, there are two people I would like to leave with. My friend Chi-Chi and her son Gohan. If you bring them back alive and let me escape with them to
the planet we choose I swear that I will make you what ever you want and more." Bulma crossed her fingers inside hoping that he would. ' Please, please let him say
yes.'

" Okay woman I will do it if its possible, after all I may not even be the one to kill Broly, there are no guarantees but if you grant me something else I may try harder to
get what you seek." He purred letting his hands tell her what he wanted. Her body all for him.

Bulma had no other choice in this situation. She swore revenge, she wanted Broly to suffer for what he had done to her and her friends. She wanted him dead. She
turned around in his lap as she was now straddling his thighs and she could see the smirk on his face and his dark black eyes. " Fine... do what you wish so long as
you get my friends back and make Broly suffer I don't care anymore. Just take it." She turned her head away from his as he laughed. It didn't matter what he did, she
just wanted her revenge.

" Alright woman...... Ride me." He said maliciously, his smirk even wider and much more pleased. Bulma turned to him shocked but Vegeta nodded. " There isn't
enough room to do it any other way woman." He gestured the small space with his arms as he easily touched the sides of his space pod. " Besides woman. I want you
to enjoy yourself." Of course that wasn't true at all, she was a woman that would just let a man take what they wanted, so long as she got what she wanted. But
making her do just the opposite and give him what he wanted. He chuckled mentally. It was much funner and pleasurable.

Bulma felt like crying, but she wouldn't she was doing this for her friends. She pulled down the spandex revealing a half aroused sayjin prince. " Don't be afraid
woman, im not up 'par' just yet." He chuckled and Bulma could only pity herself now as she slipped him inside of her. Slowly she raised herself up and slid back
down. She felt the sayjin prince begin to swell and as she did it a few more times her insides were stretched to the max. Her breath was caught as she couldn't move
without it hurting.

Vegeta smirked and let his hand travel to her folds and find the hidden little nub. He toyed with it almost savagely, but he saw the heat streak across the woman's face
and he knew she was almost ready. His other hand removed her shirt and skirt easily. He couldn't help but stare at her chest, her nipples were hard and demanding
his touch and he barely knew her. But then again no woman could ever not want his touch. His mouth suctioned itself around the demanding peak, while his other
hand which had removed her clothing went to cup her other breast.

Bulma bit back her moan of bliss. She wasn't going to let this man know she was enjoying it, even though she hated her body for betraying her. But her body
slickened in mere moments as Vegeta ministrations were blissful to her. She began riding him harder and Vegeta relinquished himself from her chest. Vegeta tensed as
waves of pleasure ran through him. This was the best sex ever had.

Bulma's moans and cries of pleasure slipped out as she couldn't stop herself. Vegeta's hands went to her hips and helped her along. The speed at which her body was
moving drove her pleasure far from what she had ever felt. She threw her head back screaming in bliss, the heat was built up in her legs as her hips pounded on
Vegeta's legs. His hands moving her even faster and harder. Though through the firestorm of pleasure she cried in the back of her mind. She was giving her body up
and she was enjoying it. Finally the dam broke as her body reached its climax, she screamed as her juices burst out from her. Her inner walls clenching around
Vegeta's manhood sending him to his own climax. His deep grunt was all he gave as spilled his seed within her womb. Bulma collapsed against Vegeta's chest panting
from exhaustion. " That was excellent woman." Bulma heard him purr. " Lets do it again." She could only gasp as he raised her hips again and slammed them back
down.

Through her haze she could feel Vegeta's manhood still aroused completely inside of her. " Surprised about that woman?" Vegeta said noting as her body tensed when he did so. " We sayjins can go for hours if we wish it. But don't worry i'll do it myself." Vegeta growled huskily in her ear. He pushed her to her back letting her legs settle on the padded chair of his spaceship awkwardly. Vegeta began to drive himself deeply within her as Bulma could only cry out in pleasure, she was too spent to hold herself back. So she simply let Vegeta use her and relish in her cries.

' I'll get my revenge Broly.... I don't care what I have to do.... I will see you dead for all of this...' She thought as her body reached her second climax but the sayjin
currently pistoning in and out of her like a machine was far from done.

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Well thats a first, never really done anytype of B/V before. Hope you liked it. Sorry this took so long. I was on vacation and I just started another story * Tribes * if you want you can check it out. Its good from the few people who have looked at it.

R&R how am I doing here? Questions, comments, concerns, critizim, or other idea's im open for them.