Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Copulation ❯ Rejection ( Chapter 3 )

Disclaimer: sighs i don't own DBZ

Reviews:

I love it .Updte soon , I want to know what will happen . Keep up the good work :) geta-gfan

From: Queenoftheskies16

I like it keep writing.

From: The Chichi Slaughter House2:

I really liked this...especially the last four lines;) Please, update soon, and please more, more, more! I'm a huge hentai you see lol! I'd like more, whenever you get the chance

From: Chizuko-chan

Yay for nervous Vegeta, Yay for Sex, And Yay for Goku X Vegeta. keep up the good work

From: Moonlight-6056

Okay! I am intrested, whats going to happen next? I cant wait to find out, please update soon.

From: The Chichi Slaughter House2

You stopped THERE? Gah! You're evil! Did you know that? Pure evil! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

Reviewed By: moonlight6056

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I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please

Reviewed By: 68568516

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It's good so far, but you need conflict. Also, when two people talk separate the dialog with paragraphs.

Title: MONKEYS
Reviewed By: NEZA

Comment/Review:
well i liked it. but yes, if you are gonna continue this story you need conflict. but if your going for a fast yaoi sex story then your doing good. I would have thought that it would make the story more interesting if they talked more in the begining and had a fight were they wouldn't talk to each other. and then later put in the sex scene.

From: Lil' Miss Tipsyiwuvyaoi( ) ...Holy CRAP i think i love u... or at least this story NEway. but WTH happend to everyone,did they die? whys goku all alone? and hes so depressed! ...BUT damn it that was HOT! please tell me it only gets hotterO I know i got a filthy mind but you got 2 admit that was pretty damn STEAMY. update soon okiday!

From: Cyborg-22

I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

From: kaka4geta( ) I don't know what I think. But I will say this, WHY DID YOU STOP MID-LEMON! Otherwise it good fic.

From: geta-gfan

Yeah, you are evil.But anyways it was great,I love it.I am dying to know what will happen so please, please update soon. ;)

Chapter Three-

3rd Person POV

Goku moaned in utter delight as the prince crushed those soft lips against his. The small pink tongue ran across the taller sayians teeth wanting entrance. Granting the older man what he wanted Goku opened his mouth, lust overwhelming him. Tongues entwined, the want to be the dominant partner controlling both of the men. Vegeta broke the demanding kiss. Looking into Goku's heavy lidded eyes he smirked wickedly.

"I'm going to bed." he said as he stepped out of the shower.

Goku watched the older man step out of the shower. Confusion overwhelming him. Sighing he turned off the water, he then stepped out of the shower grabbing a dry towel to wrap around his waist. Confusion written clearly written on his face he walked into the princes room. His eyes narrowed at the other man.

"That's it?" He asked "Were you just teasing me?"

Vegeta looked at him and simply looked away. He didn't know what he wanted anymore. He didn't want to hurt the younger man, in any way. He was still confsued himself. Sure he felt something for the man but he wanted to hold off until he knew for sure that he loved him.

"Answer me Vegeta." Goku growled

"What do you want me to say Kakarott?" Vegeta snapped "Do you want me to say I love you?"

"It would be nice."

Vegeta sighed and turned his attention to the taller man. Confliction shining brightly in his oynx eyes.

"If I said I loved you it would be a lie." he whispered

Goku glared at the man angrily.

"Then WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED IN THE SHOWER?" he yelled "WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU TRYING TO DO?"

Getting no response from the man born with royal blood, Goku scoffed, not believeing what had just happened. He honestly thought the other man loved him back. He let his guard down to show the man how much he loved him. Now he was getting rejected, it hurt so badly. To have the one you love acknowledge you then WHAM you find out he was blinded by his own lust and greed, to know that you were a simple toy he used to get his release, it just hurt. Tears welled up in Goku's eyes as he looked at the man who owned his heart.

"How could you?" he whispered

Vegeta looked up at him a puzzled look on his face but spoke nothing.

"How could you lead me on like that! To make me actually believe that you feel something for me as i do you!" Goku continued

"Kakarott I never meant to hurt you." Vegeta whispered

"Could've fooled me." came the bitter reply

Vegeta's eyes widened at the sudden coldness of the usually cheerful man. Did he want the sex to be just that? Wouldn't he rather have him make love to him? What couldn't he understand? Why couldn't the younger man understand he was just confused at the moment?

"I was a fool to believe that you actually loved me."

Vegeta narrowed his eyes at that comment. Before he could protest Goku teleported out. Leaving him by himself in his room. Thinking about what had just happened.

"Fuck." he muttered "This is just fucking great!"

Laying down on his bed he buried his head into the soft royal blue pillows.

"Kakarott I am confused. You deserve so much better."

A/N; sorry for the short chapter but i have 3 more fics to work on. And as you wanted i added conflict! Well tell me what ya think! Please review!