| "Copulation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: MONKEYS
Reviewed By: NEZA On: January 31, 2005 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i liked it. but yes, if you are gonna continue this story you need conflict. but if your going for a fast yaoi sex story then your doing good. I would have thought that it would make the story more interesting if they talked more in the begining and had a fight were they wouldn't talk to each other. and then later put in the sex scene.
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Title: Animecans Unite!
Reviewed By: 68568516 On: January 28, 2005 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good so far, but you need conflict. Also, when two people talk separate the dialog with paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: moonlight6056 On: January 27, 2005 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please ^^
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