Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ You Can't Always Get What You Want ❯ Response to a reader..... ( Chapter 18 )

Oooooooooooooh, this just really pissed me off..... okay, here's a comment, rather flame from a reader....


Not to be mean but you or you two need to SERIOUSLY rethink this entire fic. It doesn't make any sense, the POV's are constantly changing, bad spelling and grammar and frankly, this reminds of the stuff I used to write in second grade. You need a plot...you need to pick a person (first, second third, etc) and stick with it. If you're gonna go with POV, pick one person's POV and stick with it. Maybe explain how Tai and Yuka are saiya-jins and demons...also pick one or the other. This is coming WAAAAY too close to Mary Sue-ism. Revise and repost.

Ok, well, heres my response to your comment....

Okay, if you have rude comments like that, please keep them to yourself. People like you on fan fiction places make writers feel like shit. And that's just what your typing. If you don't like the story than don't read it, and if you have some grudge against it, then don't read it. Okay, no we don't have the best grammer in the world, but it's not like you probably have the best spelling either, so please keep your rude comments to yourself because other writers like Tai and myself don't apreciate you leaving them. Not to be mean, "Revise and report", what the hell is up with that? you make it sound like we are in a fuckin boot camp. This is not boot camp, and this is not harvord.. This si just two girls havin fun makin a fan fic. There's a reason why they call them FAN FICTIONS.. THEY DON'T HAVE TO GO BY THE SHOW. And another thing, don't read our story if you have a bloody problem with the spelling and grammer because i highly doubt that your mrs. or mr. perfect. So go snogg with some rocky mountain oysters for all I care...... Oh, Revise and report. ^_^

Bloody hell, that annoys the hell out of me, you bloody retards.