Fake Fan Fiction ❯ Cynder ❯ Concert ( Chapter 1 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

My first FAKE fic. I've never seen or read the it so yeah. Sorry if everything is screwed up. hope you like.


Chapter 1
"Please take me Ryo," Carol begged. Ryo sighed. The teenager had been asking him all day. "Why can't Bikky take you?" the young man asked. "He's sick," was her simple response. Ryo sighed again. "Who is it?" he asked "Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!" she exclaimed.

"I didn't say I was going to take you," Ryo said in an irritated tone. Carol just bounced around the room happily. "They're called Cynder(1). Carol answered to his previous question. "They play heavy metal," the teenager added.

~Damn. Why? Why me?~ the young man thought. 'Alright, I'll take you. But just this once," Ryo said. Carol's eyes sparkled with happiness. "How long is the concert?" the half Japanese man asked. "About four hours," the teenager replied. "Four hours?" Ryo asked, not believing it would be that long. Carol nodded her head happily.

~This is going to be hell~ Ryo thought. "The lead singer is so ho~t" Carol exclaimed. Ryo watched as the teenager clasped her hands together and stared off in space. "Dee..," she sighed. Ryo cleared his throat, tying to get the girl's attention. Carol snapped out of her happy place and looked at him. "When is it?" Ryo asked.

Carol stared at him before she finally moved. She looked at the clock on the wall and panicked. "Only two hours!" she exclaimed. Carol ran out of the room. Ryo shook his head. He heard crashing noises and curses from Carol's room.

Ryo stood up and walked into his room. He opened his closet and scanned his clothes. He pulled out a black shirt and a pair of black pants. ~May as well go along with it~ he thought. He laid his clothes on his bed and walked to his bathroom. He quickly hopped into the shower. After he got out of the shower he cleared the mirror of fog.

Ryo picked up his brush and brushed through his honey brown locks with it. After he had finished brushing his hair and his teeth he walked back into his room. Instead of the clothes he had laid out for himself, there was a pair of baggy black pants with chains and a long sleeved black fishnet shirt along with a black T-shirt with writing on it. He walked over to his closet and opened it. It was empty. "Carol!" Ryo shouted. "What?" came her reply. "Where the hell are my clothes?!" he yelled.

Carol opened the door a little ways and poked her head through the gap in it. She looked at Ryo. "They're on the bed," she replied. Ryo glared at the teenager. "My clothes in my closet and the clothes I had on my bed, where are they?" He said in a deadly tone. "Oh com on Ryo just wear the clothes I got you," Carol pleaded. Ryo glared at her again. "Leave," he said. Carol quickly shut the door.

"Bet she had this all planed out," he mumbled under his breath, a scowl marring his face. Ryo looked at the clothes on his bed. He shook his head and went to his dresser. He pulled out a pair of boxers and slipped them on. He walked back over to his bed and picked up the pants. He stared at them for a little, then put them on.

The young man then put on the long sleeved fish net shirt. Ryo then grabbed the T-shirt and put it on over the fish net shirt. He fidgeted the walked into his bathroom. He read the shirt. The first line of the shirt said 'Too Sick to Dance', the second line said. 'Suicide Note', and the third line said 'Forever Fucked'. Ryo shook his head. ~Why does this have to happen to me? And who in the hell comes up with these clothes?~ he thought.

"Come on Ryo, we're gonna be late!" he heard Carol yell. He sighed and grabbed his car keys. They got out to the black car (LoG: Be imaginative, I don't do cars) and headed to the concert. It was loud all the way there, considering the fact Carol was listening to a CD. Of course the teenager had the music turned up really loud.

All Ryo caught of the song was this: A guy was singing about pushing his fingers in his eyes and how the pain never ends, along with something about how you can't kill what you did not create(2). He didn't understand at all Carol was just sitting next to him, head banging and singing right along with the singer.

They finally got to where the concert was being held. Of course it was packed and they had to park far from the building. When they finally got to the building, Ryo groaned. There was a long line and he didn't feel like standing in it. Carol noticed. "What's the matter?" she asked him "Long line," was his simple reply.

Carol laughed. "I've got back stage passes," she bragged. Relief poured over Ryo like water. Immediately his shoulders relaxed and he sighed in thanks. "I want you to wear this," Carol said to him. Ryo looked down to see the teenager holding a black collar with metals rings around it. "Why?" he asked. "Just wear it, you'll look better," she said.

The young man just sighed and did as Carol said. Ryo kept reaching up and brushing his fingers across the collar. He couldn't help it, it felt weird to wear it. Of course they got in easily because of the backstage passes, along with many glares from the females in the line. Ryo really didn't care, he just wanted to get inside.

Carol was so excited, Ryo could practically see her excitement radiating off of her. They got to meet the band. All except the singer. JJ was drums, Rose was guitar, and Diana played bass. Dee, the lead singer was currently not there.

Ryo excused himself and went to find the bathroom. By the time he got back the concert was starting. "What took you so long?" Carol asked. "Got lost" Ryo replied. Carol snorted in laughter and shook her head. Her attention turned to the stage when she heard the band start. The crowd immediately became alive, like someone turned on a light switch.

"I felt the hate rise up in me. Neal down and clear the stone of leaves. I wander out where you can't see. Inside my shell I wait and bleed(3)"

Ryo's head snapped up and his attention focused on the stage. He was stunned. The lead singer was beautiful. Black hair haphazardly flew in every direction. He had long bangs and some of it clung to his face from dampness. His fierce blue eyes burned with an unknown emotion and his expression was indescribable. He wore a black shirt that clung to his form and black baggy pants with a few chains on them.

Ryo was entranced. The sensual voice of the singer floated to his ears. He loved it and didn't know why. ~What's his name?~ was his thought. He racked his brain trying to remember. Then it finally clicked. ~Dee~ echoed through his head.

Dee was his name. Ryo continued to stare. He noticed the flush on Dee's face and the way his skin gleamed from sweat. Dee suddenly flung his head back and his hair went flying. To Ryo, it was in slow motion. Dee looked beautiful. He just wanted to jump Dee then and there.

A blush spread across Ryo's face as images of him and the beautiful singer naked and doing many things. During a pause in a song, Dee glanced over, looking in Ryo's direction. The singer stared at him for a second before smirking and winking.

Ryo's blush deepened. He listened to the rest of the song then went to get a drink. Luckily the show had an "intermission" and was that going on right now. The half Japanese man walked down hallways and past numerous doors.

~I'm lost~ he thought. "Lost?" asked a sensual voice.

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Hope you liked. REVIEW PLEASE. I need to know if I should continue. Rating may change later on.

(1) I realize that there is a band called Cinder spelled with an 'i'. There is also a band called Cynder spelled with a 'y'. The band spelled with a 'y' is not official. Though they are competeing for a spot on Ozzy Fest 2004.

(2) This is a song by Slipknot called DuaLITY. These are the lyrics:
(3) This is also a song by Slipknot called Wait and Bleed. These are the lyrics:
Well, I hope you liked my story. See ya.
Ja ne
Lamb of God