| "Cynder" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
O_O Awesomeness-ness-ness!!!!!!!!!! OMG you better update soon!!!! This is TOO GOOD to discontinue!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! or i'll send my wolves to devour you!!! Dee/Ryo 4ever!!! Ja ne ~Jet
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Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.... can u put up da next chapt soon!!!!!! or many mor than one chpt soon!!!!! itz so so so good!! plz!!!!
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Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: kitty in the box On: January 26, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL THING YOU! THIS FIC IS DAMN HOT! YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS REALLY SOON OK!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Lady InuKira On: December 09, 2004 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this. I love that you use Rock Music and maybe if you continue mybe you can use some My Chemical Romance music. Or Chevelle. Keep writing. Love it. Later Rocker.
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Reviewed By: Devil666sc [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 20:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it and there is a lot you can do with it but the only thing i have a problem with is how you go "he did this and then he did that." Add detail and don't go so fast with the story. It kinda getys hard to read. Anyway work on it and little bit and post soon.
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