Fan Fiction ❯ Arena of the NFA ❯ Don't get in the way of his 'obsession' - Magnus Vs Cmndr Carter ( Chapter 2 )

Arena of the NFA

Chap 2: Prologue to the violence: Magnus Vs Carter!

By: Piccard

I agreed to do this one before I started this fic, so I thought I'd get this out of the way, and then start on the requests!

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Fighters info.

Magnus the hedgehog: Half Demon half hedgehog who's overly obsessed with women's chests. Attacks with a two handed sword and various forms of black magic.

Commander Neil Carter: Last and least likeable member of the 1st NFA. Frequently starting fights, Carter strives to cause trouble. Attacks with the emerald blade and can hover in the air for short periods.

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Piccard: We gotta have a pre-tournament challenge.

The NFA were talking back stage, it was the first day, and the crowd were starting to get restless as they heard a voice over the com link.

???: Guys, commentator one here!

Piccard smiled as he tapped his badge.

Piccard: Okay Lightstriker, what do ya want?

Lightstriker: I have an idea to get them out there ready for this. You see, I have a friend who wants to take on one of your number, and if I say my mates name maybe you can guess.

Dark: Well tell us then.

Lightstriker: Okay, my friend is Magnus.

Piccard: :No hesitation: Carter, you're up!

The commander looked slightly annoyed.

Carter: Why me?

Piccard: You stopped him getting his, ahem, assets that time in the dungeon, now get out there and show them what the NFA's made of!

With a hefty push from the others Carter was in the arena.

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As Carter moved forward, he noticed the crowd starting to cheer lightly as he heard two voices over the commentary tannoids.

Lightstriker: Welcome to the tournament everyone! I am Piccard Lightstriker, master keeper of Harmonia.

Marth: And I am Marth Aranto, a master level hunter and adept at what's about to go down tonight.

Lightstriker: To kick off this tournament we have a special match just to show you what the NFA fights like, and here in the ring is Cmndr. Carter, the first of their number to fight here!

Carter struck off a few poses and inwardly smirked when the applause seemed to get quieter.

Lightstriker: And fighting him to kick off this tournament is a friend of mine. He's the yellow keeper of our realm and shows an obsession with women.

Marth: As do you!

Light: Well, here's Magnus the hedgehog!

The demon hog ran through the entrance, did a few flips and landed a few feet in front of Carter, hearing the crowd go wild as he pulled out his sword. However, Lightstriker looked on Magnus's head and his face went red.

Lightstriker: Magnus, you still got them on your head?

Magnus: :Calling up: Yea, Amy's starting to get petchy, she wants them back!

There was a light cough as Magnus looked forward and saw Carter glaring at him.

Carter: You came to fight right?

He slammed his emerald blade into the ground.

Carter: Then fight me!

Magnus: Of course!

As if to spite Carter, Magnus held his blade high before lunging and trying to slice Carter in half.

Carter: Wait, we haven't changed to MY arena yet!

Carter clapped his hands as the holo-projectors kicked in, and an area like a prison appeared, and Carter smirked as he saw Magnus looking around in confusion before Carter told him.

Carter: This is the brig of the USS Lebanon, the ship I took from the governor. Didn't hold control for very long, but I'll make sure to capture you by the end!

Magnus: You'll have a hard job, commander.

He cupped his hands and started forming a ball of black energy as Carter only smiled.

Carter: Oh no, you got me with that in the combat pit.

Magnus fired a black dragon, and Carter readied the emerald blade,

Carter: but I've been training!

Quick as a flash be bought the blade forward, and managed to deflect the spell, much to Magnus's shock.

Magnus: H-how?

Carter: I'm more than a fun breaker!

Magnus: I know,

He drew his sword and lunged at Carter.

Magnus: But I have my methods!

He quickly slashed upwards, leaving a large dent in Carter's armour as he rolled behind him.

Carter: Bastard!

He clicked his fingers and took to the air as his arm turned back and he pulled a photon rifle from behind his back.

Carter: Luckily I always have a backup!

Magnus: Shit!

The demon hog started running as Carter tried blasting him with high power rounds, but he dodged nearly every one as he formed more energy.

Magnus: To stop you floating would be insane, but to hit you in the air.

He released a black dragon and hit Carter head on,

Magnus: Is worth it every time!

Magnus had to smirk as he watched Carter writhe in the air, and as he started floating down, Magnus lunged and bashed him with his shoulder.

Carter: Feeling exquisite pain here!

Magnus: Good, because you're gonna get more!

Another dragon followed as Carter smashed into the iron floor, and as he flipped up he reformed the blade.

Carter: That does it, no more nice commander!

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In the commentary box, the duo were looking slightly agog.

Lightstriker: Do you know what that fighting style is, because I'm damned if I do!

Marth: What? You mean Carters? I think it's called the flash flop!

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Magnus: Carter, can you fight me now?

He had a hand on Carter's head and was keeping the slashing marine at arms length, much to the humour of the crowd.

Magnus: I mean seeing people insane is kinda funny. But that's only when it's me!

He thrust Magnus back and blasted him again before Carter stumbled to his feet.

Carter: :Muttering: I cant lose.

He morphed his other arm and started spinning faster and faster towards Magnus.

Carter: The Emerald spin blade is my ultimate move, no one has ever countered it!

Magnus: Carter, that's your one big weakness.

He fired another round of energy and thrust his blade forward, causing a massive clang to emanate around the arena as the spin stopped and Carter fell to the floor, obviously exhausted.

Magnus: Overconfidence!

Carter: :Shocked: How can this be?

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Lightstriker: Our winner is: MAGNUS THE HEDGEHOG!!!

Marth: Anything you wanna say?

As Magnus took a deep breath, Lightstriker whispered something to Marth, and the hunter chuckled slightly as Magnus took the mike.

Magnus: All your boobies are belong to me!

Lightstriker: Told ya!

As Many of the crowd roared with laughter, Carter sulked off backstage, and came face to face with an old friend.

???: Remember me Carter?

Carter: How could I forget you, avatar!

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Piccard: Magnus, I trust you'll be sticking around with the other keepers in the audience?

Magnus: You bet, wouldn't miss a tournament!

Lightstriker: He stands more chance of not groping women for a week!

Suddenly they heard a ring, and as Marth answered and took down the details he turned to the others.

Marth: A new challengers come forward.

Dark: Really? Who is it?

Marth: His names Sauron, he's a dark lord!

Xerxes: And who does he want to fight?

Marth turned to Jar'din, and the sylvan smiled as he got the message.

Jar'din: Tell him I'll be ready in an hour, I need some last minute training.

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That was my first fight, hope ya liked it but after the first chapter was rubbish I needed a fight to show you what I could do before I started on requests. (In case I buggered them up) Still, next chapter is the start of the requests, and I already have enough ideas to keep me going til about chapter 7! Anyway, how did you like that? Good, Bad, Ineffective? Please review!

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