| "Arena of the NFA" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: DTB
Reviewed By: DDD123 On: December 07, 2004 10:12 CST
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This fic sucks you stark raving pervert! For the sanity of us all delete all your stories! I shall never forgive you for soiling my brain!
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Reviewed By: Mr Wobbi On: November 03, 2004 02:45 CST
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HELLO PICCARD i have read the arena fic and i hope you (don't) update and take no ones idea into consideration (such as) the whole guy vs illidan :D cus that would be a match not worth fighting and watching
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Reviewed By: FlamingWaldo On: November 03, 2004 02:35 CST
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lol you suck
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Reviewed By: Dr.Stein, Master of The Rings On: September 28, 2004 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You ought to go into a little more detail with the characters. I have no/little idea who/what they are. The fights themselves need more detail cus it's all very vague at the moment. I just rated this as average cus of those faults, xcept originality cus having your characters fight other characters is such an old thing that everybody wants to do
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Reviewed By: Keeper Azrael On: September 18, 2004 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO PICCARD i have read the arena fic and i hope you update and take my idea into consideration the whole me vs illidan :D cause that would be a match worth fighting and watching
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Title: "And I'm loving this so-called 'Iced Cream'"
Reviewed By: Master of Iced Cream On: August 07, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
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Theres some dodgy spelling here, you need to proof read more. Oo. Oh and when doing scripts, don't label characters as "???" - it looks so cheesy and crap. Well whatever this story was fairly disappointing. One problem is that I don't know what the hell is going on - its like you have this big world of characters in your head, but you can't be bothered to tell the audience anything about them (example: when Carter "stabs his Emerald Blade into the ground" so what's the Emerald Blade? Why is it special and why does it deserve capitol letters?)
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl( not signed in) On: March 30, 2004 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
luv it! Kaiki
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl( not signed in) On: March 25, 2004 15:59 CST
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that was awesome! *smiles*
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: March 23, 2004 18:58 CST
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awesome.. can't wait for the next one and if you don't know why you're a little of the ball.. he he....Kaiki Sena (my real name is Kyla)
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Reviewed By: lady pyra On: March 23, 2004 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice to see that you've started on the arena fic, you know me and i want to challenge all comers lady pyra
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 01:25 CST
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i love the idea and everything! Kyla...
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