Fan Fiction ❯ Art of Detecting? ❯ Part 2- What Problems? ( Chapter 2 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
Part 2- What Problems?
Scene Opening:
The scene fades back in, as you see Jack in a police office with other officers and detectives doing work in the office, he is walking by a couple of desks on his way to the Commander's office as people working there slowly stops as the people notice who is walking into the office as they looked on as he passed by, then suddenly a detective with ash brown hair, and wearing a gun vest noticed him, and says-
Detective: So, what building did you wreck this time?
This gets a couple of laughs in office, as the detective gives high-fives to the other detectives sitting by him, this catches Jack's attention who just smirks as he's walking by and waves in a blowing him off fashion-
Jack (While waving off the guy): Your mom's house.
The people in the office started to laugh and ooh as Jack puts his hands in his pocket as he is strutting down towards the Commander's officce, as the detective that got put down is being held back by the same people he sitting by-
Jack (Before knocking on the Commander's door, turns back to the irate detective): Oh, and tell her to stop calling me over…I'm not a licensed repairman.
The detective is trying to fight through a crowd of people, but is being held back with about 8 people-
Commander: JACK!!! GET YOUR ASS IN HERE!!!!
Jack tenses his shoulders up and thinks-
Jack's thoughts (Sighs): Glad to be back.
Jack chuckles followed by a really cockily smirk on his face as he stops in front of the door-
Scene change:
The scene changes to the big detective, as he walks into the police office that looks like the same type of office that Jack has just walked through, and again, as he walked through the office, almost a hush came over the room as people were looking on, but everyone was very hesitant to say anything, as he looked like he was about to kick someone's ass, as suddenly, a beautiful woman with short blonde hair that is pulled back into a ponytail and holding some papers comes to him-
Woman: Ryan?
Ryan quickly snaps towards the woman-
Ryan: WHAT?!?!
The woman became scared and dropped most of her papers, as Ryan started to realize who it was-
Ryan (Going to help pick up the papers): Dammit. Couldn't you have talked to me after my reaming?
Woman (Picking up her papers): Well, it's the only way I could give you the info you wanted….And about tonight.
They both get up while holding papers, as there are people still looking on. Because there has been a rumor going around for sometime about these two being a couple, and the woman actually is the Commander's daughter, it gets more play than most movies there.
Ryan (Looking at the crowd): WHAT?!?!
Some people are whistling at them in the background, as Jack gets this blank smirk on his face while shaking his head from side to side.
Ryan (Bends over to the woman and whispers): How does 8 sound?
The woman smiles, and hands him some papers, then suddenly-
RYAN!!! GET YOUR ASS IN HERE!!!
Ryan (Looking at the woman): Well, I'll see you later.
Ryan walks past the woman, as she looks back and is smiling like a giddy schoolgirl, as some of the people left looking on were shaking their heads from side to side, she notices this and says-
Woman: WHAT?!?!
Scene change:
The scene changes to a split screen shot of both Ryan and Jack knocking on the door-
Both commanders (From inside their office): WHO THE HELL TOLD YOU TO KNOCK?!?!?!
They both tense up their shoulders when they hear both of their commander's yelling at them and they both open the door, as the scene zooms in on Jack-
Commander: Don't report, close the door, and sit your ass down!
Jack: Wow, what crawled up your ass?
Commander (Pulls out a stack of papers, and slams it down in front of Jack): Just shut up and read the freakin' papers jack-ass.
Jack flips the first page, and starts reading out aloud-
Jack (While carelessly flipping through papers): Breaking and entering-yadda-yadda-yadda-exxessive force-blah-blah-blah-broken windows (Yawns)…So, what crawled up your ass, sir?
Commander: DAMMIT JACK! Don't you realize the crap that you have put me in (The commander frantically pulls out a cigarette and lights it up), fuck, do you know what fuckin' top brass above me wants a piece of your ass?!
Jack's commander anxiously lights up his cigarette, and the scene changes to Ryan as the commander reaming Jack flicks his cigarette ash into his tray-
Ryan: What's up, sir?
Commander (With a confused look on his face, after putting his cigarette back to his mouth and pulling back what hair he thinks he has; he's bald by the way): What's up is your ass closing the door, and sitting your ass down RIGHT NOW!!
Ryan tenses up again, slowly closed the door, and took a seat that was looking at a blank white wall-
Commander: Explain to me what the fuck is this!!!
The commander grabs his black remote, and clicked a button on the remote as the scene goes back to a camera picture outside the building, as it seems to be above the main door, as it shows him tackling the guy through the glass window, and a security guard looking like he got show out of a car, which cuts into a flashback of when it actually happened.
Scene change:
You see Ryan on top of the thief who is on his back, Ryan then gets to his knees, shakes his head, and after flipping the thief onto his stomach-
Thief (Half-way unconscious): Fuckin' PIG!!!
Ryan was holding the back of his head, but got pissed with the last remark, and responded by picking up the thief by his hair, then drilling the thief's face into the ground-
Thief: FUCK!! MY NOSE!!
Ryan: Now that was for the `pig' comment!! (Rams his head again into the concrete) THAT'S for flipping me off!! (The thief looks busted wide open, as he grabs the back of the thief's hair) Now tell me what you stole, and who for, I might let you go with a busted nose and not a concussion?
Thief (Partially crying): The Orian Crystal…But that's all I know!
Ryan (Lifts the thief's head higher): Bullshit!
Thief (Crying his eyesout): GOD THAT'S ALL I KNOW!!! DAMMIT!!!
Ryan : Okay (Smashes his head into the concrete, and knocks him out) Orian Crystal, eh? (As Ryan is getting up while looking down at the limp thief)
Scene change:
The scene changes back to Ryan's commander's office as the commander took another drag, and turned off the film as he then tried to calm down by taking a deep breath-
Scene change:
As the scene changes back to a split screen shot of both commanders sitting in their desks, smoking a cigarette, as they both say-
Both commanders in unison: Now you only have ONE chance to explain; why the HELL was you in the building to begin with? And to give me a DAMN good reason why I shouldn't fire your ass RIGHT NOW?!
The scene changes to a split screen shot of both Ryan and Jack. As you see Ryan clear his throat, and adjusted his collar on the left; as Jack took a deep breath and smirked again on the right, before Ryan spoke first as Jack's side freezes-
Ryan (Sheepishly): Orian Crystal?
Ryan's side freezes then Jack spoke next-
Jack (Confidently): `Cause everyone else is pussies?
Ryan's side stays the same, as Jack's commander looks freaked out, as he has this weird look on his face as a hair on his head shoots up crooked, as the cigarette he was smoking falls out of his mouth that was as open as a cash register.
And freezes on Jack's side as Ryan's side starts to play-
Commander: Orain Crystal?? WHAT CRACK WERE YOU SMOKING?!?!?!
Ryan tenses up again after that comment.
Ryan (Clearing his throat again): The guy that I caught said that he was after the Orain Crystal.
His commander puts out the cigarette he was smoking. Pauses, then quickly pulls out another, and starts chain-smoking another as Ryan's side freezes and Jack's side unfreezes-
Jack's Commander: Pussies? Well WE'LL SEE HOW BIG OF PUSSIES WE ARE AFTER YOUR TRANSFER TO EMP!!!!
Jack's face is about to erupt, but Jack's side freezes as Ryan's side unfreezes-
Ryan's Commander: You leave me no choice. Because you do not have enough evidence, and `cause I don't want to end your career. I'm going to transfer you to a place where you are out of the damn way. You will be going to Emu Metro Police station in 48 hours.
Both sides are unfrozen as both guys go off-
Ryan and Jack: WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!
As the scene zooms to Ryan, who looks pissed-
Ryan: Sir! Rethink this?! I'm about this close (making a motion with his hands that he is an inch close) to finding out who is pulling off these thefts!
The shot changes to a side shot with both of them in it together-
Commander: Yeah, and about 10 seconds from not also getting YOUR ass fired! But getting the governor to get ME fired! And I'm NOT about to loose my job because of your STUPIDITY!! Now consider yourself lucky your ass is not out on the FUCKIN' STREETS, living as some DAMNED DRUNK! Now get out of here!
And with that Ryan, with a pissed-off look, gets up and determinedly walks out the door, slams the door open, as the commander's daughter springs back, because she was listening in on the conversation-
Commander's daughter: Ryan?
Ryan just dashes past her, and walks on as she gives her father a confused look, as her father tries to ignore her while smoking his cigarette, she then drops her papers, and dashes after Ryan as her father looks up then pounds the desk as he is smoking-
Commander: DAMMIT!! (Speaking to himself)I had to, there was no other choice. One day she will understand.
Scene change:
The scene changes to Jack, whom is limit because of his commander transferring him, and has his hands on the desk of the commander-
Jack (While pointing at the commander): WHAT THE FUCK IS THE DAMNED IDEA?!?! I'M ABOUT THIS FUCK'N CLOSE (Makes the same gesture that Ryan made with pinching his fingers) TO SOLVING YOUR FUCK'N CRIME SPREE, AND YOU SCREW ME OUT OF IT?!?!
Jack's commander gets up himself, and gets in Jack's face-
Commander: AND FUCK'N GETTING EVERY MOTHEFUCKER IN HERE FIRED BECAUSE YOU WANT YOUR FUCK'N GLORY RUN?!?!?!
Jack and his commander are nose to nose.
Jack: WELL MAYBE I NEED A FUCK'N GLORY RUN SO YOU BASTARDS CAN FEEL MORE LIKE SHIT FOR NOT HAVIN' ENOUGH BALLS!!
Commander: WRONG ANSWER YOU DUMB SON-OF-A-BITCH! WHAT THE FUCK YOU CALL BALLS, I CALL STUPIDITY!
Jack: Stupidity…(Jack grabs an autographed baseball that was a gift from a baseball hall-of-famer) FUCK YOU!!!
And with that Jack chucks the ball through the window in the commander's office, and then pissed-off walked out and slammed the door open as he determinedly in a pissed off way walks down the hallway as everyone, including criminals that were being brought in, was looking on as Jack walked out, then the commander popped his head out of the door, and yelled-
Commander: HOPE YOUR ASS CAN PAY FOR A FUCK'N NEW WINDOW?!?! AND YOU HAVE 48 HOURS TO GET THERE ASSHOLE!!!
The commander slams his door shut, as Jack didn't even wait for people to look his way before he was gone.
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