Final Fantasy - All Series Fan Fiction ❯ Abducted Love ❯ A Dreaded Ride... ( Chapter 2 )
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By: FloralBlackMoon 
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Non Anime: Final Fantasy - All Series Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Drama / Comedy | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 08.15.2002 | Updated On: 08.19.2002 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 282 | Status: Work In Progress
Read the title ^_^
Non Anime: Final Fantasy - All Series Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Drama / Comedy | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 08.15.2002 | Updated On: 08.19.2002 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 282 | Status: Work In Progress
Thanx for ALL the reviews. Thank You! Below are the reviewers and my response.
This Story(idea) is Copyrighted (c) 2002 FloralBlackMoon. All rights reserved.
Disclaimer: I do not own or in any way is afflicted with Final Fantasy 8, I take no claim over it, I am merely useing it to entertain others. To also promote it. I am not making profit off this. It is cop-written to it's respective owners.
"......"= Talking.
*......*= Thinking.
*****
Abducted Love
inspired by
Trixie-chan - http://www.dbzromance.com - dbzromance@hotmail.com -
Orginal author's story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=378100
I was granted permission to use the orginal author's Idea.
NOT MY ORGINAL IDEA
Quistis POV
Quistis stared at the figure with his back toward her. She wanted to spit at this man. This man that had took her from her home. She wanted him dead.
*I swear, the day he dies; I will visit his grave and laugh. *
She narrowed her eyes. She could try to get off the horse right now. But it was riding to fast, She could seriously hurt herself, not to mention give Mr.Almasy a good laugh. She sighed; for now she could pretend she gave up. When they stopped, she would run for it.
"Fine..." She said stated and tossed her hair around. "Now, can I please try and sit on the horse. It does not feel good to be tossed over here like this."
She heard his moaned in annoyance and slowed down his horse, giving her enough time to try and sit down.
* I could try and escape now...heh heh, what a fool*
Quistis then jumped off the horse, falling off. She looked at him, he looked angry. She then got off her behind and started running away from him. She stopped. All he had to do and ride his horse and grabbed her dress and she was back on that God forsaken horse!'
She turned around to find him smirking. She plastered on a smile and looked at him." You haven't won yet, ya scoundrel!"
"Listen, little lady. I've already warned you." He sneered grabbing her arm.. She arched am eyebrow. "I know"
***
Seifer POV
Seifer got off the horse, and started pulling Quistis toward him. This girl was proving to be a bit trouble. But that was the fun for him. She would try to be strong, but in the end he would win. He was Seifer Almasy; things always worked well for him.
He pushed her to the horse, telling her to get on. She was a little hesitant, but she quickly realized she could do nothing in her position.
*She knows when to back off, then eventually she'll know it's futile to even try and escape.*
She finally mounted the horse. Now the problem was, to either go infront of her, or the back of her...that was no contest. The back.
*Lets see how she'll try to resist.*
He then started mounting behind her; her eyes widen and started pushing him off. He was so surprise of her strength he fell down.
"Why the hell did you do that?!" He yelled. How the hell did this petite woman have such strength?
"I will not sit with you, in such a position! I don't know you. So you better put your ass somewhere else, or ride. Cuz honey, I ain't sitting with you like that"
"Now you listen woman, I could sit anyway I please."
"I do not think so, mister. I will fight to no end."
"Oh believe darling, there's gonna be a end"
He then grabbed both of her hands and started mounting, she then flipped one leg that was on the other side of the horse and kicked him in the stomach. He took a sharp intake of air.
*Shit! I didn't count on this kind of resistant*
"Now woman, you better let me on that God Damn horse, right now"
"Never! You could just go walk and go kill somebody! I am not sitting with you like that. You got that, I'm might be a woman, but honey I don't play."
He smirked. "Now, looks like I have to restrain you."
"Wha? What are you talking about? You better not lay your mother---" She stopped when she saw him take out a rope on a sack on the horse.
He then started tying her legs. "What! Stop that! I command"
He threw her over his shoulder. "Ya like the view there, honey?"
She gasped, "Why You!"
He then threw her on the horse and started tying her hands. Listening as she let out a string of curse words, while also fighting him. He then grabbed her legs and opened them as far as he could and slowly put her legs around the horse's neck.
"Stop!! You will stop this none-sense right this second! My Goodness!!" Quistis shrieked. She soon started struggling.
"Let me guess. "You'd be damn before you cooperate, huh?"
She turned to him, her eyes showing great anger. " I am not here to be made a mockery off. I'll will tell the sheriff and send ya ass to jail."
"Well than darling...ya damned"
He walked to the horse and mounted behind her. He felt her stiffen. This was going to be one hell of a ride...
During the whole ride Seifer had heard every curse word ever said. The entire offensive words anyone could call him. He had almost decided to turn around kill of Quistis father but it was then she complied.
The rest of the rides were a silent one. She eventually fell into a restless sleep. It was then he decided just what kind chick did he bag.
The softest blond hair, it was a bit curly. Beautiful White, smooth, soft skin. The figure was one in a million. Long luscious legs from what he saw. He almost wanted to take her then and there...maybe he would...
*...Nah! Who knows what kind of fight I'd endure. I have to break her first...yeah. But if she doesn't stop squirming I won't give a damn!*
Finally they reached his destinations. He abruptly got off the horse. Since she was leaning on him, she automactially fell on the horse on her back hard. Her crystal blue eyes opened immediantly.
"Wha...?"
"Get it together, we're here" He said, untying her legs.
"Where's here?" She asked, shaking her head making her blond hair fly behind her shoulder.
"You'll know when you'll inside"
"No, I will find out now, or I will not go, and baby I promise that"
"Well then sweetie pie, I'm going to have to make you go"
She burst out laughing, "We'll see"
"No, we'll see now" He walked to her and held her waist, putting her feet on the ground. While she struggled with him the whole way there.
****
Very short, huh? I tried to make it longer. Tell me if your still interested in the fic, probably not. Next chapter will be better, I hope. To join my update list go to http://www.topica.com/lists/floralblackmoon-fics OR send blank e-mail to: floralblackmoon-fics-subscribe@topica.com
Response to reviews.
Quistis88: I know Seifer being rude. But it works wit the story! Yeah, but Irvine isn't part of romance, eh? Thank you for the review!
Sasha: Really? Ya don't see where it's going? Good, then you'll be more into it, I think? Oh, I forgot you don't circle in a stand, lost my mind. Seifer gonna turn good? Read and find out.... thank you for the great review!
______: I don't know your name cuz you didn't leave it, but oh well! Thank you for the review, and I'll be sure to update as soon as I can!
Sara Starr: Thank you! I don't think my story is awesome, but I am really glad someone does!
Voice of Mystery: LOL, I didn't know my Disclaimer said DBZ! Thanx for telling me that. I also write DBZ and I was updating my other one...so you could see, right? Yes you are soooooooo helpful! So did she put up a more fight in this chapter?? I hope so! Oh and I didn't leave the same last name because I don't really like it.
Fujin: Wind Princess: My story? Potential? I've had a few flames, so I don't know. Thank you so very much!!
Lady Storm: Is it cute? I dunno. lol. The whore part nasty? Hmmmm....yeah it does fit the story. Really? This story comes on when you just saw a western show? What a coincidence. How do you propose I keep Seifer from becoming sll Clint Eastwood? Thank you for the encouraging review.
Quistis' twin sister Sunny- Do you honestly like it so far? Really? Ya think I got it right? Yup! Seifer is a bad bad boy. Iz it hard to follow conversations? Was this chapter easier? I hope so. Thanx, I'm happy someone thought I did a good job!
This Story(idea) is Copyrighted (c) 2002 FloralBlackMoon. All rights reserved.
Disclaimer: I do not own or in any way is afflicted with Final Fantasy 8, I take no claim over it, I am merely useing it to entertain others. To also promote it. I am not making profit off this. It is cop-written to it's respective owners.
"......"= Talking.
*......*= Thinking.
*****
Abducted Love
inspired by
Trixie-chan - http://www.dbzromance.com - dbzromance@hotmail.com -
Orginal author's story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=378100
I was granted permission to use the orginal author's Idea.
NOT MY ORGINAL IDEA
Quistis POV
Quistis stared at the figure with his back toward her. She wanted to spit at this man. This man that had took her from her home. She wanted him dead.
*I swear, the day he dies; I will visit his grave and laugh. *
She narrowed her eyes. She could try to get off the horse right now. But it was riding to fast, She could seriously hurt herself, not to mention give Mr.Almasy a good laugh. She sighed; for now she could pretend she gave up. When they stopped, she would run for it.
"Fine..." She said stated and tossed her hair around. "Now, can I please try and sit on the horse. It does not feel good to be tossed over here like this."
She heard his moaned in annoyance and slowed down his horse, giving her enough time to try and sit down.
* I could try and escape now...heh heh, what a fool*
Quistis then jumped off the horse, falling off. She looked at him, he looked angry. She then got off her behind and started running away from him. She stopped. All he had to do and ride his horse and grabbed her dress and she was back on that God forsaken horse!'
She turned around to find him smirking. She plastered on a smile and looked at him." You haven't won yet, ya scoundrel!"
"Listen, little lady. I've already warned you." He sneered grabbing her arm.. She arched am eyebrow. "I know"
***
Seifer POV
Seifer got off the horse, and started pulling Quistis toward him. This girl was proving to be a bit trouble. But that was the fun for him. She would try to be strong, but in the end he would win. He was Seifer Almasy; things always worked well for him.
He pushed her to the horse, telling her to get on. She was a little hesitant, but she quickly realized she could do nothing in her position.
*She knows when to back off, then eventually she'll know it's futile to even try and escape.*
She finally mounted the horse. Now the problem was, to either go infront of her, or the back of her...that was no contest. The back.
*Lets see how she'll try to resist.*
He then started mounting behind her; her eyes widen and started pushing him off. He was so surprise of her strength he fell down.
"Why the hell did you do that?!" He yelled. How the hell did this petite woman have such strength?
"I will not sit with you, in such a position! I don't know you. So you better put your ass somewhere else, or ride. Cuz honey, I ain't sitting with you like that"
"Now you listen woman, I could sit anyway I please."
"I do not think so, mister. I will fight to no end."
"Oh believe darling, there's gonna be a end"
He then grabbed both of her hands and started mounting, she then flipped one leg that was on the other side of the horse and kicked him in the stomach. He took a sharp intake of air.
*Shit! I didn't count on this kind of resistant*
"Now woman, you better let me on that God Damn horse, right now"
"Never! You could just go walk and go kill somebody! I am not sitting with you like that. You got that, I'm might be a woman, but honey I don't play."
He smirked. "Now, looks like I have to restrain you."
"Wha? What are you talking about? You better not lay your mother---" She stopped when she saw him take out a rope on a sack on the horse.
He then started tying her legs. "What! Stop that! I command"
He threw her over his shoulder. "Ya like the view there, honey?"
She gasped, "Why You!"
He then threw her on the horse and started tying her hands. Listening as she let out a string of curse words, while also fighting him. He then grabbed her legs and opened them as far as he could and slowly put her legs around the horse's neck.
"Stop!! You will stop this none-sense right this second! My Goodness!!" Quistis shrieked. She soon started struggling.
"Let me guess. "You'd be damn before you cooperate, huh?"
She turned to him, her eyes showing great anger. " I am not here to be made a mockery off. I'll will tell the sheriff and send ya ass to jail."
"Well than darling...ya damned"
He walked to the horse and mounted behind her. He felt her stiffen. This was going to be one hell of a ride...
During the whole ride Seifer had heard every curse word ever said. The entire offensive words anyone could call him. He had almost decided to turn around kill of Quistis father but it was then she complied.
The rest of the rides were a silent one. She eventually fell into a restless sleep. It was then he decided just what kind chick did he bag.
The softest blond hair, it was a bit curly. Beautiful White, smooth, soft skin. The figure was one in a million. Long luscious legs from what he saw. He almost wanted to take her then and there...maybe he would...
*...Nah! Who knows what kind of fight I'd endure. I have to break her first...yeah. But if she doesn't stop squirming I won't give a damn!*
Finally they reached his destinations. He abruptly got off the horse. Since she was leaning on him, she automactially fell on the horse on her back hard. Her crystal blue eyes opened immediantly.
"Wha...?"
"Get it together, we're here" He said, untying her legs.
"Where's here?" She asked, shaking her head making her blond hair fly behind her shoulder.
"You'll know when you'll inside"
"No, I will find out now, or I will not go, and baby I promise that"
"Well then sweetie pie, I'm going to have to make you go"
She burst out laughing, "We'll see"
"No, we'll see now" He walked to her and held her waist, putting her feet on the ground. While she struggled with him the whole way there.
****
Very short, huh? I tried to make it longer. Tell me if your still interested in the fic, probably not. Next chapter will be better, I hope. To join my update list go to http://www.topica.com/lists/floralblackmoon-fics OR send blank e-mail to: floralblackmoon-fics-subscribe@topica.com
Response to reviews.
Quistis88: I know Seifer being rude. But it works wit the story! Yeah, but Irvine isn't part of romance, eh? Thank you for the review!
Sasha: Really? Ya don't see where it's going? Good, then you'll be more into it, I think? Oh, I forgot you don't circle in a stand, lost my mind. Seifer gonna turn good? Read and find out.... thank you for the great review!
______: I don't know your name cuz you didn't leave it, but oh well! Thank you for the review, and I'll be sure to update as soon as I can!
Sara Starr: Thank you! I don't think my story is awesome, but I am really glad someone does!
Voice of Mystery: LOL, I didn't know my Disclaimer said DBZ! Thanx for telling me that. I also write DBZ and I was updating my other one...so you could see, right? Yes you are soooooooo helpful! So did she put up a more fight in this chapter?? I hope so! Oh and I didn't leave the same last name because I don't really like it.
Fujin: Wind Princess: My story? Potential? I've had a few flames, so I don't know. Thank you so very much!!
Lady Storm: Is it cute? I dunno. lol. The whore part nasty? Hmmmm....yeah it does fit the story. Really? This story comes on when you just saw a western show? What a coincidence. How do you propose I keep Seifer from becoming sll Clint Eastwood? Thank you for the encouraging review.
Quistis' twin sister Sunny- Do you honestly like it so far? Really? Ya think I got it right? Yup! Seifer is a bad bad boy. Iz it hard to follow conversations? Was this chapter easier? I hope so. Thanx, I'm happy someone thought I did a good job!