| "Abducted Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the most part, this was a good fic, but the grammar made it difficult to read. Now, I'm not complaining about things like the use of words like "ain't" in speech, because that makes it realistic. You had numerous fragments out of speech. Although in a small number they can be effective, you included so many fragments that it became hard to read. Also, you often switch between tenses when you shouldn't ("Quistis exclaim. Rinoa rolled her eyes") I think getting a beta reader would really help-- and changing only the grammar will make EVERY aspect of the fic seem even better.
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Reviewed By: Marron_11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! i liked this alot yepperz i thought i reviewed this one but this is like the best one even the ending was good and creative whoa im talking like an old smart person oppz but i liked it expect like the very last like super very last was a lil weird but it was still good and i loved it and i cried when i like yeah but great job!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester (not logged on) On: October 11, 2002 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
^__^ It's like I said. DAMN you're good! And I don't think you really needed the warning.
sr |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 16:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN you're good! O__O
lil |
Reviewed By: Sue On: November 10, 2002 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
I don't know why, but this is the right fanfic for me.
I love Quifers and this is maybe the best of them, so...I don't know what to say...keep up the good work..
Love:Sue |
