Gravitation Fan Fiction ❯ Cats, Crutches and Babies? Oh My! ❯ The Box ( Chapter 8 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
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Bright morning sunlight met with lazy eyes, as Shuichi slowly grew conscious. He blinked a few times than sat up and looked around.
There was a chestnut wardrobe with gold handles and knobs to his left and a big, over stuffed arm chair and reading table to his right. Directly in front of him was an oak railing and a big sunny emptiness beyond that. If he hadn't glanced down to his right side to where Yuki lay, dozing peacefully beside him, he might not have known where he was.
When he looked at his lover's smooth complexion, all the wonderful memories of the previous night came hopping to attention like obedient little soldiers.
`That's right,' Shuichi thought sleepily, `We got up to the hotel room and Yuki told me that …he loves me.'
As if on queue the singer's eyes welled with tears as he recalled the three marvelous words his boyfriend had mumbled softly into his ear the previous night.
`I can't believe he actually said `I love you'.
Shu sighed as he carefully lay back down in the warm, soft, downy bed and snuggled his back close to his lover. The sleeping novelist slowly and clumsily curled his body around the pink haired boy and buried his face in his sweet smelling hair.
The kid was in complete heaven. He had gotten just about everything he had ever wanted in the span of three days. His newest single had grabbed and held onto it's number one spot, Yuki had finally confessed his love verbally, He was on vacation and he was snuggly warm to boot!
The high spirited vocalist couldn't imagine being happier than he was at that exact moment. Shuichi closed his large violet eyes as he thought about all the good things in his life. Before he knew it he had drifted back to sleep.
`Hmmm?… something…smells just… like…'
Yuki was slowly being coaxed from his restful repose by the sweet scent of ripe strawberries. When he opened his eyes he was blinded by a forest of shocking pink strands. He leaned up quickly on his elbow to survey the scene and, after realizing it was just his lover's outrageous hair, he relaxed.
The calm novelist turned back onto his side and contentedly watched the blankets as they gently rose and fell with Shuichi's small chest.
“He must not have woken up yet,” Yuki deducted as he continued to monitor his Shu-chan with soft, caring eyes.
The author wasn't sure exactly why he was laying awake watching his boyfriend sleep, nor did he have any clue as to why the sunlight coming in through the skylights over the living room hadn't managed to force the boy awake.
If he had learned anything from living with Shuichi, it was that once the sun had fully risen, the little pink ball of energy couldn't stay asleep for very long. The singer was so accustomed to waking up early to go to the studio that he had developed a little internal alarm clock that wouldn't let him get more than nine hours of sleep, no matter when or how tired he was when he went to bed. Eiri on the other hand had no such device and could happily hibernate the entire day away if he was left undisturbed, which was something that rarely ever happened.
The blonde turned his head as he put his palm softly on his lover's face and he wondered why he had waited so long to tell the boy how he really felt inside. Feelings were something that had been dead and gone to him for so long, and now that they had decided to make a grand re-entrance into his life he didn't quite understand the exact reason he had said what he had. If Shuichi asked, he wouldn't know what to tell him.
`Is he going to expect me to say it all the time now or what? What if he wants some kind of explanation for it. What do I tell him?'
Eiri sighed heavily and rubbed his temple as he decided that maybe it was finally time to put some serious thought towards the things his mind had been chewing on for the past few months. He knew Shuichi loved him more than anyone had ever loved anyone else and now the kid knew that his feelings were, for the most part, returned.
`I'll see how this week goes and then maybe…'
The baffled writer was shaken from his thoughts when a small, warm, hand covered his own and began to stroke back and forth softly with the back of a thumb.
“Good morning…,” Shuichi said quietly as he turned skillfully to lay his head against his lover's chest.
The older blonde man looked down into the two deep pools of color and emotion that were Shu's eyes and his decision seemed to be pushed further toward a yes. Those eyes were so irresistible sometimes.
“Morning brat. Did you…sleep well?” He asked, trying hard not to sound genuinely concerned as he removed his hand from the boy's chest and kicked the dark green, dania-down duvet off his legs so he could get out of bed. The singer sat up and folded his hands in his lap on top of the puffy blanket.
“Yes, I slept very well actually. This bed is really…,” Shuichi paused. Something didn't make sense.
“How did I get up here anyway, Eiri?”
Yuki didn't even bother to stop digging through the suitcases in search of his and his lover's bathrobes to answer.
“You fell asleep…or…passed out from shock, one of the two, and I carried you up here and put you to bed.”
The energetic vocalist smiled inwardly at Eiri's simple attempt at making fun of his own emotional inability's and agreed with him that it was probably a mix of shock and exhaustion that had caused the sudden crash.
“You must have been really tired,” The older man stated further as he pulled both of the fluffy robes out of the suitcase on his left, “Because you didn't even wake up when I put you in your pajamas,”
Shuichi's face glowed red as he glanced down at the white T-shirt and plaid sleep pants he was wearing.
“Yuki …I just wanted you to know that I appreciate everything you've done for me, and…well…I'm really glad that you said what you did. You should know that it means the world to me to hear you say that.”
The boy smiled softly and traced the swirling patterns stitched onto the blanket with his index finger.
Eiri was touched by his lover's statement. He always knew the feelings had been inside of him, but his false wall of impassiveness had prevented him from sharing those feelings or admitting truthfully that they were real.
The younger man felt a shift on the bed and he looked up to see Yuki sitting next to him.
“You've known how I felt about you since you first came to live with me,” Eiri confessed thoughtfully as he reached over and cupped his lover's cheek in his hand, “You saw me through my wall. I guess, whether I liked it or not, you were bound to chip a hole in it sooner or later.”
Shuichi thought he was going to explode. Never in his wildest dreams had he ever imagined his lover would ever say anything remotely similar to what he just had.
The author put his hand on Shu's and rubbed his thumb back and forth, feeling the veins and tendons as they pulsed and flexed under his sensitive fingertips.
“You let some of the light back into my life. It wasn't very much, but it was enough. It… helped my feelings and…my love, grow into something worth letting you see.”
The pink haired singer didn't really know what to say to that, he was at a total loss for words. They never really talked much about their relationship and sort of just took it in stride as it came at them, one thing at a time. He knew that what Yuki had said was true, but he just wasn't emotionally prepared to deal with it. The singer was almost at his meltdown stage already and he just knew he was going to burst if his lover said or did anything else. He could barely stand it.
“Eiri, that was…That was the most beautiful thing…anybody has ever said to me… I…”
The novelist didn't wait to hear the rest. He leaned in swiftly to close the short distance between them and captured his lover's mouth in a fiery kiss.
That was it. Shuichi couldn't take it any more.
The kids passion and feelings took control over his muscles and he launched himself off of the bed onto his lover, sending the ill-prepared man sprawling backwards and onto the thick green carpet.
Shuichi showed his complete obliviousness to the situation as he continued to ravage Yuki's neck and mouth with firm little bites, licks and kisses in his attempt to release some of his pent-up love.
“Shu…I…hold…wait a…Stop!” Yuki managed to squeeze in between the attacks on his mouth that were coming continuously from the young man sprawled cat-like on top of his body.
The singer paused his kisses abruptly and instead, amused himself by running feathery touches up and down the inside of his lover's right thigh as he sat back on his heels.
“Awww…What's the matter?” The pink haired boy asked cutely as he pouted in a seductively innocent way.
Eiri had no intention of continuing forward on the floor. The carpet was soft but he knew it was going to be killer on their knees.
Without answering Shuichi's question he scooped the boy up in his arms bridal style and tossed him up onto the bed. The blonde didn't even give the singer a chance to complain before climbing up with him and pulling his shirt off over his cute little pink framed ears.
Once the annoying piece of fabric was gone Yuki was free to again take up his rightful position. He asserted his power by laying a trail of possessive kisses leading from Shuichi's neck all the way down to his belly button. It always amazed the novelist to find that, no matter how many times he used the same technique, he always managed to draw a different kind of sound from his ticklish lover. This time it sounded like a cross between a squeal and a moan and it was complimented with a slow arching of the boys back and gentle wriggling of his hips.
Eiri eagerly moved his tongue back up Shuichi's chest to his nipples and started to suck and nip at them. The brat `mmm'd and sighed as he lay there with his eyes closed, all his energy and senses focused solely on the wonderful sensations bathing his upper torso.
Shuichi half moaned and half whined when his lover hooked his fingers in the tops of his pants and began to slip them down over his growing arousal as a hot mouth ran up to capture the one underneath his own.
The older man moved back down after their brief kiss and Shu almost lost it when Yuki took hold of the base of his cock with his hand and started to run his tongue slowly over the sensitive tip.
The singer gasped and arched his lower back, trying to force more of himself into Eiri's mouth. The novelist smiled slyly at the effect he had on his lover and started to stroke the young man's shaft with his hand and suck harder on his head.
Shuichi's submissive side immediately took over as Eiri began to take more and more of him slowly into his mouth, tasting him and teasing him all at the same time.
The singer's already loud vocalizations grew from sharp, quick little pants to full blown cries and moans as Eiri continued to suck and roll his tongue over the boys drooling cock.
The author stopped using his mouth just long enough to suck on his fingers for a second but it was long enough to cause the boy to notice and make his disapproval known. Eiri ignored his lover's irritated whining and continued with what he was doing. Said novelist wanted to get the singer warmed up for round two while his senses were at their peak; it was simply more fun that way.
Just as Eiri had predicted, the baka nearly lost it when the older man began probing at his tight entrance with slicked fingers. He moved them slowly in and out as he continued to suck on the younger man's cock, each time going in a little bit deeper and a little bit harder. He angled his index finger upwards so that it would deliberately brush against Shuichi's prostate and the effect was incredible. The brat jerked suddenly with pleasure and surprise and moaned as he thrashed his head on the pillow, fisting his hands into the blankets involuntarily.
“Eiri! I'm--!” Shuichi gasped out just as his muscles tightened around Yuki's fingers and his cum spilled hot and sweet inside the blonde's mouth. The older blonde could hardly wait for those tight muscles to be clenched around a much more sensitive part of his anatomy, one that was beginning to feel rather restricted in the gray sweat pants he was wearing. The novelist bitterly remembered the first time Shuichi had came in his mouth and though the memory seemed somewhat funny now, it had certainly not be pleasant when it had happened.
Yuki had freaked and had made Shuichi feel bad about not telling him before it happened. The writer still felt a pang of guilt whenever the tables were turned and Shu was the one on the receiving end, since he hadn't given any warning his first time and Shuichi hadn't said a word about it.
It had been an odd sensation to start with, but Eiri had grown to love it. Shuichi just tasted so damn good it was hard not to.
The novelist swallowed the sticky, warm liquid that coated his tongue and throat and leisurely licked up and down Shuichi's super sensitive cock like a cat, making the boy squirm and moan in delicious agony.
“You are… so… good at that,” Shuichi gasped out as he rubbed his face with his hand.
Yuki let his lover bask in the warm after glow of his orgasm and crawled down to the end of the bed to reach inside the suitcase for the lube he had packed.
The blonde fished around in the top pocket for a few seconds before his hand finally closed around the cold, smooth tube.
He slipped his pants off before moving back up the bed to where his lover was now laying with his eyes closed, a great big smile plastered across his face.
Eiri leaned in really close to Shuichi's ear and purred, “Ready for the second round?”
Shu's eyes flashed open just as his lover captured his mouth in a seductive kiss.
The singer's thin tongue sought out his lovers and when the two met he tasted himself as well as Eiri's own spicy sweet flavor down underneath.
Minutes seemed like hours to him when Yuki kissed him like that and it made him feel special knowing that his lover only ever kissed him that way.
The novelist blindly flipped the cap on the lube as he continued to plunder Shuichi's mouth. Squeezing some onto his hand, he stroked his cock, leaving it hardened and slick with the clear gel.
Eiri interrupted the kiss when he shifted down the bed so he was between Shuichi's legs again. He had already decided how he wanted to take the boy wasted no time in grabbing his slender hips and gently turning him over.
The singer needed little direction before he knew what to do from there. He brought his slender legs up as he leaned his forearms on the pillows that had been supporting his head only a few seconds before and turned to watch as Yuki moved the tip of his cock slowly up and down over his entrance. Shuichi drew in a sharp breath through clenched teeth and groaned in frustration as his lover just continued with his teasing.
The pink haired singer didn't feel like waiting for Yuki to finish his little game of `will I? or won't I?' and took it upon himself to lean back swiftly onto the man's cock, burying the novelist deep inside his tight ass. This time it was Eiri's turn to gasp as Shuichi moved himself back and forth on the older man's cock, despite the obvious discomfort the boy was in.
A primal instinct took over him and Eiri grabbed his lover's hip roughly with his left hand and leaned forward to take hold of the boy's shoulder with his right. This position allowed him to penetrate deeper and still keep control of his actions.
Shuichi gasped as Yuki thrust in and out and he immediately began to move in rhythm with him.
The novelist appreciated the fact that his boyfriend was more than willing to comply to his needs. Eiri moaned as he urged his small lover to keep pace with him.
“Just…ah! Just a little…faster-ah!…Yuki!”
Shuichi moaned as he reached on hand under his stomach to stroke his stiff, weeping cock.
Just seeing what his lover was doing would have been enough, but when the boy began to beg Eiri could barely hold on. The blonde began to move faster and faster, each time going deeper and harder as he moved toward climax.
He adjusted his angle slightly so that more of his thrusts hit Shuichi's prostate, both coming in and going out, causing the boy cried out in ecstasy.
All at once Yuki felt his lover's muscles start to tense up around his length and that was more than enough to bring him to the edge of completion.
Though Shuichi was the first to cry out, Eiri's deep, velvety smooth voice was soon blended in with his young lover's as the man gave one last mind-blowing thrust. He used both hands to pull the singer back onto his cock, knocking the wind out of Shuichi and making him see spots and fuzzy stars. Eiri panted hard as he emptied himself deep inside his lover and for just a moment they stayed there, frozen while the after shock of that final plunge took it's time leaving.
Both men were panting heavily as Eiri slowly pulled out of his lover and turned him so that he could kiss him. The boy wrapped his hands around the blonde's neck and kissed him as deeply as he knew how, as if trying to communicate how much he loved him.
It was now more then obvious to Eiri that Shuichi really was the one he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. He had found the one person he could actually love, though what the boy possessed that drew him in was beyond the authors comprehension.
The blonde decided that now was finally a good a time to find out if his lover felt the same way about him.
“Shuichi,” Yuki whispered softly into his lovers ear when the boy had finished off the kiss, “I want you to close your eyes.”
“Why? What are you-”
“Shh, just relax and do what I told you,” The blonde said a little more firmly as he took two of his fingers and dragged them over Shuichi's eyelids as if the kid didn't know what he wanted.
The perplexed little vocalist shrugged, but did what Yuki told him to do. The novelist got up off the bed and went around to his suitcase. He made sure that the brat on the bed wasn't peeking by waving his hand in the air in front of him before reaching into the top pocket of the case to retrieve it's precious cargo.
Eiri gently unwrapped the tiny black velvet box from the pair of socks it was hidden in and held it in his hand. Though the ring weighed only a few grams the emotional weight that that single piece of jewelry held made it seem like it weighed fifty pounds. Eiri rubbed the soft velvet with his thumb and sighed.
`No turning back now…'
“Eiri, can I open them yet?” Shuichi asked impatiently as Yuki moved back around to the right side of the bed.
“No brat, not yet. Just be patient,”
The nervous young author placed the box carefully on the bed and took both of Shuichi's hands in his own. He got off and pulled the now giggling young man around until his legs where hanging over the side. Kneeling down, he took the box in his right hand and gently cracked it open. What he revealed was the glittery fourteen karat white gold ring. Its two and a half karat, round cut diamond reflected the morning sunshine coming in through the skylight and the forty two, one eighth of a karat stones surrounding the center jewel in clusters on either side, as well as half way around the doubled band merely seemed to be specks of shimmering light.[1]
To Eiri, it looked like a tiny glittering bird nestled beautifully among the folds of rich black velvet. It had taken him months to pick out the right style and even longer to find out what size ring Shuichi wore.
To Eiri, it looked like a tiny glittering bird nestled beautifully among the folds of rich black velvet. It had taken him months to pick out the right style and even longer to find out what size ring Shuichi wore.
The novelist hadn't wanted to come right out and ask ,for fear of the brat becoming suspicious.
Hiro-kun had been helping him big time since the beginning and Yuki had threatened to castrate the guitarist with his bare hands if he gave Shuichi even the slightest hint about what was going on. The young musician had assured him several times that the proverbial bride-to-be was completely oblivious to everything and that he wouldn't tell a soul what he knew.
Eiri swallowed and closed Shuichi's hand in his as he took some deep breaths to calm himself.
“You can… open your eyes now.”
The singer's eyes flew open and looked around excitedly. They finally focused on Yuki and, on the open ring box in his hand.
“Oh…Oh my god…” Shuichi stammered under his breath as tears immediately welled in his eyes and his hand flew to cover his gaping mouth.
Eiri swallowed hard and began to speak.
“Shuichi, I love you. `Good, good you're all right.' You mean more to me than anything else and… I didn't think those shitty lyrics of yours were really all that bad. `Oh smooth one mister romance novelist, `your lyrics aren't really shitty' That's a best seller for sure.' I guess… what I'm…trying…Oh fuck it, Shuichi Shindo will you marry me?”
The blushing singer was overwhelmed with feelings and tears and he thought of more things to say than he could say in a year. He settled for launching himself off the bed for the second time that morning and latching himself around Yuki's neck like a giant living necklace.
“Yes! Yes! Yes! Oh Yes!!! Of course I will! Oh my god I can't believe this!! Yes!!!! I love you so much!! Oh my god! Oh my god!!” The singer screamed as he crushed his newly appointed fiancé in his seemingly endless embrace. Yuki pried Shuichi's left hand off of his neck and, after removing it from it's box, slid the glittering engagement ring onto his wedding finger.
The novelist had anticipated that his lover's reaction would have been something along these lines and it made him even happier that the kid hadn't actually passed out like the evil, pessimistic part of his brain had said that he might.
Yuki's shoulder was now drenched with tears and the wiggling, laughing, crying brat was still clinging to him, spitting out incoherent things and random colors spaced out by `oh my god's' and `I love you's.'
Shuichi's left arm kept moving off his back and closer to his neck so he assumed that the kid kept checking to make sure that the ring hadn't disappeared on him. Obviously Eiri had made the right decision because he hadn't heard any complaints about it, though he doubted he ever would. He could have proposed with a plastic ring and the author knew he would have gotten the same reaction either way.
Though understanding Shuichi's `freak speak` was extremely difficult for the untrained individual, Eiri was a well weathered veteran and was able to discern the shouts and muddled words as wedding plans. He couldn't really pick out specific words however, because they all seemed to blend together into one big, loud lump of continuous sound. The some hoe exhausted novelist just sighed happily and thought about how much of a challenge the next year or so was going to be; How much fun planning their wedding was going to be.
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[1] To see a picture of Shu-chans ring go here:
http://www.photobucket.com/albums/y260/Chi22/Avitars%20by%20Chi/?
This particular ring is a size seven and has a retail price of 29,857 U.S dollars.
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Fairykayzee: lol.. I was little hyper when I wrote my last review..lol.. thet was prolly obvious.. but I was sooo glad when I saw u updated.. I enjoy this story ALOT...lol.. but yeah..
That's okay!! Yes it was very obvious but who isn't wired these days! Thank you for liking my story so much. I really appreciate your enthusiasm kate!
Inumoon3: This story is too cute, and from the title I'm guessing that Shu-chan is either going to become pregnant, or they're going to adopt a kid! Well I hope you update soon, I love this fic so far, and good job at keeping Yuki in character, cause in most stories I've read authors have a hard time keeping Yuki in character!!! Well update soon, k!
Thank you for reading!!! I would just like to pint out that Shuichi is a boy and currently only females can have babies! Adoption had crossed my mind…I had something more sadistic in mind but that would work if the sadism falls through. Anybody a big fan of Tohma or Mika? *looks around * Thankyou for your comment on how I keep Yuki in character!!! I was wondering about what you guys thought and I figured I was doing a pretty good job, considering the events.
Carrot : Hmmm, well I think it about time I stop by, just for fun you know. Plus this is the first time I've actually caught you on a day you updated so I'm quite pleased with myself. As a reward I choose to leave a review. I've got to say I love your story and the fact that you stayed nicely in character when it came to our pink haired friend. I can actually imagine everything you describe him doing. I mean a lot of people try to capture him and do a really poor job of it, they just go with the classic annoying thing. I mean of course he is annoying at times, it's one of his major characteristics. Yet people always use the wrong kind of annoying in my opinion. Of course my opinion isn't universal, but hey I'll blab it around as much as I can. XD Anyway! You have captured Shuichi perfectly. As for our cold hearted seme, you've got him down pretty darn good as well. I really like how the entire fic has a very cannon feel, at least I thought so. Also the fact that the fic is jumping with random bursts of explosion and wow factors where the author tries to make the fic more "interesting" yet only succeeds in creating a burst of unrelated events strung together only by the fact that the main characters somehow end up having sex ... ah the mysteries of fanfiction. In other words I thought you fic was an easy read not over-flowing with events which just aren't needed to enhance the story. Let's cut to the chase, nice fic, good characterization in my opinion, please continue.
Lol!!! I love your name!!! It is so cute!!! Sorry had to tell you that! Thank-you! I love to hear that you think I keep my characters cannon!! It is always a challenge but what can I say? I'm blessed with good taste!! Lol that had nothing to do with what we're talking about! Sorry! Yes I do find that they go the annoying route a little to often with him and I really wanted to stear away from that when ever possible because I see him from and outside Pont of view and he is really a very strong charismatic character, especially when he's singing! He has a real flare for attention but he is also playful and sexy! I try to capture those aspects of him instead of the annoying ones. Really you think my fic is cannon!! Oh sweet! That is exactly what I wanted to hear from you guys!!! Thank you!!! I try my best! I am sleep sleepy na no da so I will just say that I know what you mean about the jumping and stuff. Try not to do that. I try to blend the edges of my paragraphs together so that the story flows nicely. Other than your brother screaming in your ear while your totally enthralled in a story the worst way to jar you from that alternate reality when your really into a story is when the jump between stuff just doesn't make any sense., I bring you back to reality and reminds you that you are just reading fiction. I try to avoid that and if you see it happening please let me know and I will rectify the situation promptly. I shall definitely continue!
GravityPull: oh...my...GOD Chapter 7 was fuckin awesome!! i can't truly EVER say just how much i love your fic... i've laughed, i've cried (well i think i did), i've had tears of pure joy... damn this fic is just beond(sp?) amazing! and the damn overall rating only goes to 10 well i'm giving you a 30 anyway!! PLZ KEEP WRITING Q_Q
Thankyou for the comment on chapter seven! I understand how you feel. I totally worship the author of my favorite Inuyasha/Kagome Rin/Sesshomaru fic and I stuck by her side through six monthes of her not being able to post but when she did I was the first one to review! I'm glad I could make you laugh and cry and feel pure joy! That is my single goal in life, as I have said before: I live for my readers. I live for your reviews! Thank you so much for your gratitude and thanx for the thirty! That is just to cool that you enjoy my work this much. I was hoping that you'd all ike it and appreciate it but this was just an unexpected side bonus!! I really am truly grateful for your comments and I sincerely hope you enjoyed this chapter.
LoriUWolfGirl: i love your fanfiction alot, and i hope you update soon. i'm a writer on mm.org but i only got one fic, and it's no where near done. anyway, i love your fanfic and can't wait to read more of it.
Thank you for the comment!! I love to hear from everybody and know what they think!!! Keep working on your fic and it will get done!! This chappie took a long time to write but I went through a sort of creative change in my mind the other day and I ended up re writing the entire sex scene as well as most of the rest of the chapter! Ride those waves when they hit, no matter what time it is!
I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
A word to everyone!! I love your reviews and I can't wait to hear from you about this chapter and all that it contains!! I know some of you may be very happy but others not. I don't think there will be to many not happy people but you never know, mabey there are some of you who are reading and not reviewing and are not happy with it or something! I don't know!! I had lots of fun writing this chapter and you may notice that the lemon was bit different this time. I went through some kind of change and I am now totally capable of writing just about anything, drawing anything and playing anything! It was sudden and out of the blue but regardless of how when or why it happened it did and I am very glad!!! I hope you all continue to read my fiction and continue to review!! Sorry about the long wait for this one everybody!! Ciao until next time everybody!!!!!