Gravitation Fan Fiction ❯ The Surpise Arc ❯ Yuki's Surprise ( Chapter 2 )

Yuki's Surprise


Fic by: Otakugirl
Rating: NC-17.... which means: LEMON-ALERT!!!!!!!! ^_^;
Pairing: YukixShuichi
Warnings: Shounen ai / Yaoi. Did you really expect anything else? It's Gravitation we're talking about! ^_~

"blah" = someone talking (duh!)
'blah' = someone thinking
[blah] = translation of some sort
~*~*~*~ = flashback

Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to Gravitation... *SOB!!!*

Author's notes: In this chapter, the long awaited (at least I hope it is) shower scene will occur! ^o^ I hope it's not too confusing, aaand… was there anything else? *thinks* Oh! Please, write to me whether you like this chapter or not! I really appreciate it! Ok, I'm finished, go ahead and read… *nervous*



The mirror had gone foggy once Yuki managed to tear his lips away from Shuichi's and nudge him inside the shower. Shuichi was a bit reluctant to let go of his blonde lover, but after a slightly too hard pinch at the pink haired singer's buttock, they stood under the hot spray.
"Why'd you go and pinch me for? I bet it'll leave a mark! Please Yuki, take a look and see if it's bruising." Shuichi pleaded and turned around with his hands on the wall, pointing his butt at Yuki, who had a very hard time to keep his hormones under control.

`Is he teasing me?!' he thought while trying… hard, to keep himself under control. `Well, if he thinks he can get away with that, he's got another thing coming!'

"Point that thing somewhere else, will ya?" Yuki said with feigned irritation. Ignoring Shuichi's "pout-attack", he grabbed the shampoo-bottle and started to muss it into his lover's pink hair. Yuki smiled secretly as he looked at how his younger lover would squeeze his eyes and fists together tightly to avoid getting any suds into the violet orbs.

When Yuki had finished rinsing his hair, Shuichi returned the favour. He loved to toy with his sexy lover's blond strands, so different from his own. Since he was taller than Shuichi, Yuki had to bend down a bit for Shuichi to be able to reach his hair, and he used his current position to his advantage to the fullest. He placed small nipping kisses along Shuichi's jaw and neck. He sucked at all of Shuichi's sensitive spots and grabbed and kneaded Shuichi's asscheeks.

Shuichi gave away small mewling sounds, the feeling of his lover's mouth on him and the simultaneous pounding of the warm water on his skin was incredible! He found it hard to concentrate on the task. He gave away a sharp gasp as Yuki nipped at the juncture of his neck and shoulder. Pleased with Shuichi's reaction, Yuki withdrew and shook his blonde locks; the shampoo had been rinsed out a long time ago.

Yuki toyed with his lover's brown nipples. He relished in the mewling sounds that escaped Shuichi's mouth. Shuichi was in heaven and hell at the same time. The smallest lick on the rock hard pebbles on his chest would send flashes of pleasure through his whole body. When Yuki noticed that his pink haired lover's knees were about to give in under him, he decided to let him catch his breath.

Yuki turned off the water and reached for the conditioner, letting Shuichi use the small break to come to his senses once again. Yuki poured a small amount of conditioner into his palm and turned to face his lover, who had placed his hands against the wall as to steady himself. As he rubbed the slippery substance into Shuichi's scalp, he teased him by sliding his erection over his ass cheeks. He grabbed hold of his lover's locks and used them to pull back Shuichi's head and gave him a firm kiss.

Shuichi turned around and wrapped his arms around Yuki, deepening the kiss. Yuki' hands were still entwined in Shuichi's locks of hair, but as the kiss grew more passionate he brought one hand down to cup Shuichi's round butt. Their tongues began a wrestling match with each other; in the end Yuki managed to pull Shuichi's tongue into his mouth and proceeded to suck on it with raw passion.

The spacey bathroom was echoing with the wet sounds of sex, squeals and moans of pleasure. Yuki's slippery fingers were digging their way into the crack of Shuichi's ass. They soon found the small hole and began teasing it by lightly pressing against it, but not completely sliding in.

"God damn it Yuki! Don't tease me!" Shuichi growled.
"My, someone's feeling aggressive tonight." Yuki remarked, but pressed his fingers harder against the small pucker.
"Hnn, that feels so good!" Shuichi panted. He writhed in Yuki's arms and sucked and bit at his nipples.
"Ah, baby, just like that!" Yuki moaned hungrily. His lover's skill in pleasuring him had become good, too good, he noticed that he was getting closer to the edge. He gasped as Shuichi's fingers crept downwards and started to toy with his swelling cock. Unable to stand all the teasing, he took hold of Shuichi's hands and dipped his head for a rough kiss. When they broke for air, both were panting heavily for air.

"Yuki, I didn't put conditioner into you hair!" Shuichi suddenly remembered. Yuki blinked. He actually still cared about the shower? He was about to say something fittingly ironic and mean to his panting lover, his lover who had hickeys all over his chest and neck, his lover who's cock stood hard and proud, pointing straight at him… suddenly all thought of malice had disappeared from his mind as drool started to fill his mouth.

"Doesn't matter, give me that sponge will you?" Yuki said with a lust-drenched voice. Shuichi shivered as he recognized the low note his lover's voice had taken. It was the voice of one who demanded sex. Not sweet lovemaking, but hot, hard fucking whatever the circumstances may be.

Shuichi recalled in a flash some of the places where they had fucked; the toilet of a 7-eleven, an elevator during blackout, in the make-out area of the park nearby, in the sleazy bathrooms of countless clubs and bars, and the list went on…

Yuki noticed his lover's lack of attention as he lathered up the sponge.
"Baka, what are you thinking about?" Yuki inquired.
"Just about how much I love you." Shuichi replied with a smile.
"Is that all? You spaced out for quite a while there."
Shuichi gave his lover a teasing smile that made shivers of expectation run down his spine.
"I was just thinking about how wonderful it is to be together with you. It seems like, whenever we feel like having sex, we do it. I just love the fact that neither of us can wait until we get home. It's such a turn on to know that the people who hear us know exactly what we're doing, but they can't do a thing to stop us." Shuichi said breathlessly. Yuki had gotten a small blush as well, for Shuichi's confession brought up memories of previous… sexcapades.

"I can't help it, you're so sexy, I can't keep my hands off of you." As if to prove his words, Yuki began to rub the wet sponge against Shuichi's soft skin. Shuichi sighed as his lover ran his hands all over his body.
"No shit. When I bought that outfit for our last concert, you kept going on all through the night, you were unstoppable." Shuichi growled the last bit as he nibbled on Yuki's earlobe. Yuki almost smiled as he recalled the… event. It had been the night before Shuichi was supposed to leave for the awaited concert. (A/n: See last chapter!)

Shuichi had bought a stage outfit that consisted almost only of skin-tight leather. When he had returned home from his daily shopping trip for beer and cigarettes, he had found Shuichi in THAT outfit in front of the mirror. He had dropped the plastic bag and stared open-mouthed. Shuichi wore short-shorts that left an almost indecent amount of skin on display, a short, black top made out of some flimsy see-trough material and on top of it all he wore a leather coat and black combat boots. Needless to say, in the morning the outfit was in no condition to wear on the concert, and neither was the artist himself. K had had a fit when he had seen the "damage" to his artist.

Yuki smirked at the memory. He had put hickeys and love bites wherever he could reach and made a total mess out of his lover. He'd been forced to dodge several gunshots and had received a lot of flames from disappointed and angry fans that had wanted to see the concert. But it wasn't like he cared about them, what mattered was that Shuichi had looked so beautiful; covered in sweat and all of his sweet spots sucked on thoroughly.

By now Yuki was kneeling down and cleaning the area between Shuichi's toes, making the pink haired singer giggle slightly. Now his lover had been cleaned everywhere, except where he wanted for Yuki to touch him the most.

"Umm, Yuki-koi, I think you missed a spot." Shuichi squeaked. Yuki was licking the spot where leg and hip joined.
"No, I didn't. I just don't like the taste of soap." Yuki replied.
"What? I don't understa- AH! Yuki!" Shuichi moaned as Yuki sucked on the head of his erection. Shuichi's legs turned weak and he quickly reached out to touch the wall in front of him for support. The sensation of Yuki's warm mouth on his rapidly stiffening cock was driving him out of his mind. While Yuki had cleaned him with the sponge, he had gone slightly cold, but that was soon forgotten. His whole body felt like it was on fire. He was obvious to everything. The only thing that he cared about now was his boyfriend's wet, hot mouth on his aching dick.

Yuki swirled his tongue around the head of Shuichi's cock and started to pump the shaft with his right hand, while the other kept Shuichi from thrusting into his mouth. He liked taking his lover to the edge, and then keep him there until he begged to let him come. Yuki started to go down on his boyfriend, going deeper and deeper by every dip of his head.

"Ah! Yuki, don't tease me!" Shuichi moaned as he pulled his lover's blonde head away from his need with an enormous effort. Yuki looked questionally at his panting lover. Shuichi gasped for breath and kissed Yuki lustfully until they both panted deeply and growled throatily:
"I've been waiting long enough, now fuck me damn it!"

Yuki's cock twitched as he heard his lover's needy command. Shuichi's voice had gone slightly rough from all the moaning. He rose to his feet and kissed his lover while he reached for the bottle of soap again.
"Anything for you, my Shuichi." He whispered with a raspy voice. He coated his fingers with the slippery substance and went around Shuichi.
"Bend over and place your heads against the wall. Spread your legs." Yuki told Shuichi, who complied.

He looked over his shoulder as Yuki poured soap directly into the crack of his ass. He shivered slightly as the cold substance coated his most secret place, but he bore it, in expectation of what was to come. Yuki slid in two fingers at once, impatient but alert for any sign of pain. Shuichi just gasped and moaned through clenched teeth for Yuki to hurry.

Yuki complied and shoved in a third finger while lubricating his bulging dick. Finally, he was satisfied with the amount of lubrication and Shuichi's prepared state. He aimed the head of his cock at that small enticing hole and slid the entire head in.

Shuichi moaned at the sensation of being penetrated by Yuki's big thick cock.
"Are you ok?" Yuki gasped. The walls of Shuichi's ass were pressing onto his dick, making him bite his lip from the effort of not start to slam into him right away. Shuichi gasped and stayed still for a while. It always hurt so much! Had Yuki become bigger? Yuki noticed a slightly pained groan that escaped from Shuichi and started to tease his nipples to distract him from the discomfort of penetration.

Soon Shuichi became used to his lover's size and started to wriggle his hips to pull him inside of him. He wanted all of him! All that he could get! Yuki started to move slightly, sliding in further by every thrust. He teased Shuichi by sliding almost completely out and then slam back inside. Shuichi was almost sobbing in frustration, it felt so good to have that thick cock up his ass. Soon Yuki was all but ramming into Shuichi, who could only brace himself against the tiled wall as Yuki took him.

Yuki changed the angle of his thrusts continuously, and as Shuichi gave a loud mewling sound he knew he had hit his sweet spot. Shuichi's screams grew louder as Yuki began to repeatedly hit his prostrate. Yuki saw stars as Shuichi became impossibly tighter, and gripped Shuichi's hips in an iron grip that was sure to bruise him, but at the moment he didn't care. He noticed that Shuichi was close to coming and grabbed Shuichi's dick to prevent him from going over the edge.

"Ooh! Yuki, more, please! Fuck me harder!" Shuichi howled as Yuki continuously hit his prostrate.
"You like that, don't you? You little slut, I'll fuck you right through the wall!" Yuki growled out as he started pumping his dick roughly.
"Yuki! Please let me come! Nnh! I need it!" Shuichi screamed as Yuki pounded into him. Yuki felt himself coming closer to the edge. He pumped his hips harder and faster into Shuichi and relished in the moans and screams of his lover.

Shuichi felt as if all of the heat and excitement poured right down between his legs, building and at last, bursting in an explosion of ecstasy and immeasurable pleasure. For a heart stopping, mind-numbing moment movement ceased and twin cries echoed in the spacey bathroom.

Yuki pulled out carefully and turned Shuichi around, leaning him against the wall. Hot mouths, wet and savouring, collided before both lovers fell into the abyss.


///Some time later… in bed…///


"That was nice."

"Hn. Is that so? By all the noise you were making it sure sounded to me like it was more than just "nice"."

"You know what I mean! You're always so grumpy… my sexy grumpy writer… *kiss*"

"…just who did you call grumpy?"

"And edgy too, *lick*."

"Leave my ear alone, kusogaki!"

"Ne, Yuki, tell me you love me?"

"Not in a million years."

"Meanie! Well, it's ok to be shy. Just remember that I love you!"

"*Blush* I know that, and I am not shy. Now shut up and sleep."

"Ok, I'll just take out my piercing."

"I still can't believe you got that thing."

"Oh yeah? Well, I didn't hear you complain, in fact, if Miyamoto-san (A/n: A neighbour… -_-;) doesn't call tomorrow and complain, it'll be a miracle."

"No, you shutting up would be a miracle."

"Make me."

"My pleasure…"

*smooch*


And as Yuki observed his lover melting into a Shuichi-resembling pile of goo, a dark clothed figure stood nervously in front of the building which held his beloved, swallowed hard and rang the door bell, thinking:
`I sure hope he appreciates my surprise for him…'



TBC! That is, if you (points at the reader's screen) want me to!

Author's notes: *skims through the text* OMG, I can't believe I wrote that! *blush* Anyways, pwease tell me whether I should continue, if it was awful, or if you have any special locations you want for any couple to… "enjoy" themselves! ^_~ Just remember that I am a die-hard YuxShu and TatxRyu fan! So NO mixing with those pairings, thank you very much! ^_^;

I had a third chapter going on for this fic, but then blaster wormed it's way into my computer and the story was no more… Anyways, thank you so much for the support you've given me this far! I truly appreciate it!

Ja ne! /// shake_it_buddy