"The Surpise Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: That was good Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:46 CST Comment/Review: You should totally write a sequel and dont forget to check out my new fic called Escaping R&R
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Reviewed By: Lissete On: December 18, 2003 18:53 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: mmmmmm....I love Shower Lemons.......... yay me happy!
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 03:45 CST Comment/Review: This is so good! Very very hot! I want more!
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Reviewed By: Inori-Sakura On: November 28, 2003 11:14 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kawaii desu yo~! please UPDATE SOON! love ya! Ja ne~
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Title: yay Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 16:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i want more i want more i want more i want more i want more i want more! Please make another chap as soon as possible! i cant wait..il keep an eye on you ^_~! good fic!
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Title: plz continue Reviewed By: ah pao On: October 22, 2003 23:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: u only have minor spelling mistake(s) and plz cont. i wanna know who's that mysterious person is thank you
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 19:26 CDT Comment/Review: ah! so cool!!! yah!....I have no ideas...still stuggling on how to start my second Lemon! AND UR ON UR THIRD FOR THIS FIC!!!! I hate u!
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Reviewed By: eep On: October 15, 2003 21:05 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: dude, if they were to like, accidently have sex on camera or soemthing, wouldn't that be cool?
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Title: Review Reviewed By: Hijiri Hitokiri Battousai ((Hijiri_Hitokiri_Battousai@hotmail/msn.com On: October 14, 2003 03:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ...I loved your story so much, I had to give you a good reviwe.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 23:02 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You will get a high rating for just writing a lemon. This was soooo good. Love the lemons always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 17:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Man as far as lemons go, this was one of the best that I have read in a long time. The tounge ring thing was pretty funny, as was the shower. Maybe you could do the tat/ryu thing next because they are my favorite couple. Well keep up the good work.
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