Gundam Wing Fan Fiction / Beyblade Fan Fiction ❯ The Od Riders of the apocolipse ❯ chapter four ( Chapter 6 )

Chapter Four: The second rider:

() = Ray talking/thinking

(()) = Author babble

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The second domain Duo enthusiastically bounced off to was the domain of lost souls (u know, the one with that weird river in? Yea? That's the one!)

Duo had managed to corner one of the few lesser demons not destroyed by Heero, and had `persuaded' him to tell him which domain was in the worst condition.

The terrified lesser demon had hurriedly replied that the area around the river of lost souls was rumoured to be really bad. Many had been drowned or possessed. Therefore, Duo `logically' decided that would be the best place to visit next (His actually words were something along the lines of `Wahoo!! I FINALLY get to try out my super cool scythe!!! YEA!!!' before dropping the terrified demon he had been `persuading'.)

However, what he did see when he reached the river of lost souls, was DEFENATLEY not what he had expected to see.

Hundreds of demons sat and stood in various states, trapped inside what appeared to be tornadoes of water,

Some of the demons looked calm, happy. Most were, however, despairing, crying out for help, or trying to fly out of their aqua prison, just to be violently thrown back down again.

Huge torrents of water sprung up in terrifying collums, the spirits of the damned and lost visually floating just below the surface, bagging to be released.

The river its self, was, however, completely calm.

A tall, elegant figure stood at the edge of the raging calm that was the river of souls.

He was quite a bit taller then Duo. He had long, waist-length platinum blond hair, see-through Aqua wings, and ice-blue eyes that stared out across the endless flow of the damned. He wore a blood red peasant top and tight fitting black leather trousers.

An invisible wind whipped around him, a cluster of small, dark clouds above.

He looked to be no more than about eighteen, nineteen years old (meaning he was at least 1800-1900). He was muttering something under his breath, his eyes shining with sorrow and despair.

Duo sighed loudly, muttering something about unfair life-erm, hell, was, and never getting a chance to try out his new `toy'.

" Um, hello? U ok? I'm Duo. I run, I hide, but I never tell a lie!" Receiving no answer, he continued slightly nervously, but just as enthusiastically as before

"And your name is?"

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" Um, you? Hello? Hey, snap outta it!" Duo leaned up and shouted in the other demons ear.

The other demon blinked, looking down at Duo, as if surprised that he was there.

"Oh, for the love of hell, another one!" Duo sighed, feeling very annoyed. "What did I do in a previous life to deserve this, eh, Solo? Or is this your warped idea of a joke?

Hello! My name is DUO, REMAMBER? I told you about, ooooo, let me see, two minutes ago! YOUR NAME IS?" Duo shouted at the slightly stunned demon, wildly gesturing with his hands.

"Hell, I don't get paid enough for this! Oh yea, I don't get paid do I? I should really ask someone about that! And I should ask about getting some form of caffeine down here! I need coffee!" Duo momentarily went off into his own little world, beginning to drool.

***Cough****

"Oh, yea! What's your name? What happened here?"

" My name is Milliado, or is it Zech's? And, I think that I did this." He quietly told Duo, turning to face one of the giant aqua tornadoes which and just passed by,

" You THINK that you did all of this?" Duo asked, sounding like he didn't quite believe him.

"I can't quite remember…do I know you?"

"Oh, boy! Look, why don't you just head back to Hades? I'm sure they can explain what has been happening, all right? And maybe someone will be able to help you with the memory thing." Duo put his arm around the tall, hansom, slightly confused demon, grabbing a near by lesser demon form one of the water tornadoes, telling him to take milliado-Zechs, Whatever his name was, back to Hades.

"This is just GREAT! Things are going SO WELL!!! I swear, I am going to get you for this Solo!!!" Duo swore, before heading off towards a near by tornado to try and corner another lesser demon, to ask them `nicely' which direction would be best to head towards next.

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