Gundam Wing Fan Fiction / Beyblade Fan Fiction ❯ The Od Riders of the apocolipse ❯ chapter five ( Chapter 7 )

Chapter Five/six (I cant remember!)

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Chapter five: the third rider:

The third place Duo not-quite-so-happily-as-he-was-to-begin-with bounced off to was the only part of hell that contained trees, grass, vines and flowers (half-dead looking black roses).

Actually, it used to be the only part of hell capable of actually supporting life.

Duo had happily `persuaded' a demon into pointing him in the right direction, a little bit TOO enthusiastically if you ask me, which you probably wouldn't anyway.

This domain was meant to be in complete and utter chaos, trees were meant to have uprooted themselves, vines were supposed to have grown out of control, as well as flowers and other living things in this domain.

Meant was the main word here.

As the demon had said, trees had indeed uprooted themselves, vines had grown up and taken prisoners, but the words `complete and utter chaos' could not truly be justified.

Upon Duo's arrival, the chaos described to him appeared to have….erm….settled down slightly.

The remaining demons of said domain were trapped within vines. Most appeared calm, and those who were still struggling were slowly being suffocated by the tightening vines.

"Aww, man! This is SO NOT my century! Am I EVER gonna get to try out my new scythe?!" Duo complained, looking around at the trapped demons.

Admist all this calm-chaos, surrounded by a protective ring of uprooted trees, roses and vines, was the only other figure, besides Duo, who was still standing of his own free will.

A tall, hansom, green winged demon silently stood in the centre of the ring, apparently deep in thought.

Dark brown and green strangely styled hair covered one of his eyes; the one visible eye was forest green. He wore a forest green turtle neck and light green trousers. He wore a dark forest green cloak, with what looked like trapped forest spirits within.

Duo brightened slightly, realising that he would finally get a chance to try out his new scythe trying to reach this mysterious figure, apparently yet another demon that was trying to do his job, and ask him what the hell he thought he was doing.

"Um, hi, my name's Duo. I run, I hide, but I never lie. I'm the new shinigami. Did you do all of this?" Duo asked, still abnormally cheerful.

The other youth just stared.

And stared

………….

And stared

…………

" Um, what's your name? Did you do this, or did you see who did?" Duo asked, starting to feel a bit nervous.

…………….silence……… ……

Oh, just great! Another one who won't talk to me! Duo thought

Just when Duo was about to give up, the other demon spoke.

" Trowa. Trowa Barton"

"Huh?"

"My name. Trowa Barton."

"Wow! It can talk! So, Trowa is it? Did you do this?" Duo asked, putting his arm around the passive teen.

" Yes, I did." He replied, no emotion whatsoever evident in his voice.

"Great, just great! Another one who thinks he can do my job better then me, AND won't talk to me unless it's absolutely necessary." Duo muttered darkly.

" Well, Trowa, I don't really know how to explain this very well, so, I wont. If you go to Hades, they'll explain everything to you, ok?" (Is it just me or is this guy starting to sound like a broken record?)

" Well, I'll see you later, Tro! I've got a job to do!" Duo happily waved back to Trowa, before running off to the next domain.

( Just a quick thought, but so far we have had one unknown demon, now ruler of hell and new god of death, who somehow managed to destroy Enma. We've also had a demon who apparently wants to kill Duo, one who seems to be so deep in his own despair he doesn't realise what he is doing, and cant even remember his own name. Oh, yea, and the previous riders, for the lack of a better word, have been sacked, and now we have another one who wont talk unless absolutely necessary. Great, just great! Things are really looking up down here in hell, aren't they? I'm starting to think we were better off with Enma in charge.)

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