Hana Kimi Fan Fiction ❯ Common Ground ❯ Part the Thirteenth ( Chapter 13 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: vampyremiyu 
Nakatsu's receives quite a surprise package. Told from his point of view. WARNING: LEMON CONTENT!
Anime/Manga: Hana Kimi Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 01.18.2006 | Pages: 3 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 332 | Status: Completed
Nakatsu's receives quite a surprise package. Told from his point of view. WARNING: LEMON CONTENT!
Anime/Manga: Hana Kimi Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 01.18.2006 | Pages: 3 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 332 | Status: Completed
COMMON GROUND
A Hana Kimi Challenge Fanfic
Written by Miyu, Vampire Princess
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
Yay! Thirteen down! One to go! ^_^ Nakatsu was muchly surprised by Julia's "present". Now he has a surprise for her. Will it be to her liking? Told from Nakatsu's point of view. A squeeze of lemon, but nothing too explicit.
DISCLAIMER:
I do not own Hana Kimi or the characters contained herein. I am simply borrowing them for my own evil purposes. I hope Nakajo-sensei will forgive me.
Part the Thirteenth - Always
Surprise doesn't even cover what was going through my mind that day.
DING! DING! DONG!
"Mom, were you expecting anyone?"
"No...but I am expecting a package."
So was I. A present from Julia. But I was sure it wouldn't arrive for another day or so. I wasn't even sure what day of the week it was!
DING! DING! DONG!
"Shuichi, be a dear and answer the door."
"Yes, mom."
What I thought I'd see was a postal worker, or the strange guy in the brown uniform that usually delivers packages.
"Can I help you," immediately left my mouth before I got a good look.
"I have an international package for Shuichi Nakatsu."
My eyes had to be lying to me: a beautiful blond, obviously American, dressed in a knee length black skirt and red button down blouse. But my ears knew that voice. I was stunned!
"Shuichi?"
Dumbfounded!
"Hello?"
Staring!
"If you're not going to talk to me, I'm--!"
I'm not one for overly grand displays of public affection. But I am impulsive. And excited. I grabbed her wrist, pulled her close to me, and kissed her as if it was the last time I'd be able to do so.
She was real! I wasn't dreaming.
"Hello," she managed after we parted.
"Hello to you, too."
Her arms wrapped around me and squeezed, tightly. I held her as close as I could. Her scent, her warmth, it felt so good. I buried my face in her wavy tresses, inhaling the distinct scent of strawberry and flowers.
Gods, she was real!
"Shuichi, who was at the door? Oh! My goodness!"
"It's a package for me," I stupidly announced as we parted again.
"Konnichiwa," Julia said with a small bow.
Mother ushered us inside. Quickly there was tea placed before us. No sooner than Mother sat down, the questions started flying. Julia, poor girl, looked so confused sipping her drink. But once we quieted down, she responded.
"I'm going to school here, in Japan, for the next two years."
We were both floored.
Mother got more details out of her. What school was she attending? What was she studying? Where was she staying? Did she really miss me so much to transfer? I wasn't all that concerned at the moment. I was just happy she was near me.
"Shuichi, you better hurry! Don't want to be late for practice do you?"
"Crap!" I smiled apologetically. "We have a scrimmage game today.
Would you...like to come and watch?"
"Sure!"
"I'll pack a double lunch."
I surprised the coach, and my teammates, by playing the best game of my life. Afterwards, I got jeers and jibs from some of my teammates and friends.
"Damn, Nakatsu! Did you get laid or something?"
"Or something, I'll wager. That blond in the stands came with you, didn't she?"
"So this invisible girl we've heard about in the States is real."
"Real...and going home with me, gentlemen."
"Hope you play just as well for them scouts tomorrow."
"I don't think that will be a problem."
And to have her waiting for me when practice was over...I can't describe how good it felt. I'll admit my male pride swelled, even as my friends whistled and yelled as we walked away. Having her so close just felt...right.
Thankfully mom was gone when we got back. It gave me the opportunity to pay back...I mean, thank...my girlfriend for such a thoughtful present. I think I surprised her, too.
"Shuichi, your mother can walk in at any moment."
"Then we'll just have to move when she does."
I surprised her in the living room.
"Oh god. I'm going to--!"
The staircase.
"Shuichi, please."
"Not just yet."
The bedroom.
"I can't take...anymore."
"Just a little longer."
And the bathroom. I was never so thankful for the marble sink counter as I was when Julia sat on it, allowing me to play with her at my leisure. Of course she was already hot and bothered. My fingers slid easily in and out of her center. She was so close, and we were both completely naked.
"Shuichi, if you don't take me now, I'm...I'm.... AH!"
Being inside of her never felt so good. Of course the tease of the past hour nearly undid me, too. I didn't last but a few thrusts. But man what a rush! Holding her close, we whispered words of love and appreciation to each other.
By the time mom came home with dinner, we had showered and cleaned up the mess we'd made of the house.
Even after six months I'm surprised she's here. In Japan. School seems to be going well. Her marks are as high as they were at Dartmouth, and she seems to be enjoying her new major. She works part time on campus and loves her apartment. Her roommates are kind of a bother, but I only have to deal with them some of the time.
And she's always there after practice. With food!
The guys don't joke around as much anymore, or flirt. I set those bastards straight upfront. And she's taught them a thing or two about women. Why not? She's taught me too!
Gods I love her!
I'm glad she's with me. Feels so good to have her close by. To not have to wait to see her in person. To hear her voice in my ear rather than over a phone or the Internet.
I don't think I would be at this point in my life without her. My professional football -- I mean, soccer -- career is off to a good start. I'm learning more about the game, and myself. Practices have been tough. As the new guy, I'm taking a beating. But the guys are great. As soon as I set foot on the field, they got my back. Off the field they're like big brothers. I could've used a few growing up. Better late than never, I guess.
Too bad they're not as easy to set straight about my girl as my schoolmates had been.
But she's always there. Always. I really like the sound of that. Always.
So I've devised a big surprise of my own for this evening.
"Ready to go?"
"In a sec....whoa. Julia, you look...stunning."
And she does! A red dress caresses her slender form. Thin shoulder straps show off the smooth skin of her shoulders. The dress stops a few inches above the knee, a slit up the side helps accentuate her long legs. The gold shoes on her feet nearly match the golden hue of her hair. Curly tresses fall from a pinned position on her head, sliding gracefully across her shoulders.
"Stop staring and finish getting ready." With a quick peck on the lips she turns and leaves the room. "We don't want to miss the reservation time."
Oh gods! There's no back to the dress! Nothing but creamy skin and a small dangly thing that sparkles like a diamond.
Suddenly the ring in my pocket seems inadequate for this goddess. I hope a one-karat diamond is big enough. I've still got three more months to pay it off and I can't afford anything bigger.
But if she says yes...we'll see.
~TO BE CONTINUED~
A Hana Kimi Challenge Fanfic
Written by Miyu, Vampire Princess
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
Yay! Thirteen down! One to go! ^_^ Nakatsu was muchly surprised by Julia's "present". Now he has a surprise for her. Will it be to her liking? Told from Nakatsu's point of view. A squeeze of lemon, but nothing too explicit.
DISCLAIMER:
I do not own Hana Kimi or the characters contained herein. I am simply borrowing them for my own evil purposes. I hope Nakajo-sensei will forgive me.
Part the Thirteenth - Always
Surprise doesn't even cover what was going through my mind that day.
DING! DING! DONG!
"Mom, were you expecting anyone?"
"No...but I am expecting a package."
So was I. A present from Julia. But I was sure it wouldn't arrive for another day or so. I wasn't even sure what day of the week it was!
DING! DING! DONG!
"Shuichi, be a dear and answer the door."
"Yes, mom."
What I thought I'd see was a postal worker, or the strange guy in the brown uniform that usually delivers packages.
"Can I help you," immediately left my mouth before I got a good look.
"I have an international package for Shuichi Nakatsu."
My eyes had to be lying to me: a beautiful blond, obviously American, dressed in a knee length black skirt and red button down blouse. But my ears knew that voice. I was stunned!
"Shuichi?"
Dumbfounded!
"Hello?"
Staring!
"If you're not going to talk to me, I'm--!"
I'm not one for overly grand displays of public affection. But I am impulsive. And excited. I grabbed her wrist, pulled her close to me, and kissed her as if it was the last time I'd be able to do so.
She was real! I wasn't dreaming.
"Hello," she managed after we parted.
"Hello to you, too."
Her arms wrapped around me and squeezed, tightly. I held her as close as I could. Her scent, her warmth, it felt so good. I buried my face in her wavy tresses, inhaling the distinct scent of strawberry and flowers.
Gods, she was real!
"Shuichi, who was at the door? Oh! My goodness!"
"It's a package for me," I stupidly announced as we parted again.
"Konnichiwa," Julia said with a small bow.
Mother ushered us inside. Quickly there was tea placed before us. No sooner than Mother sat down, the questions started flying. Julia, poor girl, looked so confused sipping her drink. But once we quieted down, she responded.
"I'm going to school here, in Japan, for the next two years."
We were both floored.
Mother got more details out of her. What school was she attending? What was she studying? Where was she staying? Did she really miss me so much to transfer? I wasn't all that concerned at the moment. I was just happy she was near me.
"Shuichi, you better hurry! Don't want to be late for practice do you?"
"Crap!" I smiled apologetically. "We have a scrimmage game today.
Would you...like to come and watch?"
"Sure!"
"I'll pack a double lunch."
I surprised the coach, and my teammates, by playing the best game of my life. Afterwards, I got jeers and jibs from some of my teammates and friends.
"Damn, Nakatsu! Did you get laid or something?"
"Or something, I'll wager. That blond in the stands came with you, didn't she?"
"So this invisible girl we've heard about in the States is real."
"Real...and going home with me, gentlemen."
"Hope you play just as well for them scouts tomorrow."
"I don't think that will be a problem."
And to have her waiting for me when practice was over...I can't describe how good it felt. I'll admit my male pride swelled, even as my friends whistled and yelled as we walked away. Having her so close just felt...right.
Thankfully mom was gone when we got back. It gave me the opportunity to pay back...I mean, thank...my girlfriend for such a thoughtful present. I think I surprised her, too.
"Shuichi, your mother can walk in at any moment."
"Then we'll just have to move when she does."
I surprised her in the living room.
"Oh god. I'm going to--!"
The staircase.
"Shuichi, please."
"Not just yet."
The bedroom.
"I can't take...anymore."
"Just a little longer."
And the bathroom. I was never so thankful for the marble sink counter as I was when Julia sat on it, allowing me to play with her at my leisure. Of course she was already hot and bothered. My fingers slid easily in and out of her center. She was so close, and we were both completely naked.
"Shuichi, if you don't take me now, I'm...I'm.... AH!"
Being inside of her never felt so good. Of course the tease of the past hour nearly undid me, too. I didn't last but a few thrusts. But man what a rush! Holding her close, we whispered words of love and appreciation to each other.
By the time mom came home with dinner, we had showered and cleaned up the mess we'd made of the house.
Even after six months I'm surprised she's here. In Japan. School seems to be going well. Her marks are as high as they were at Dartmouth, and she seems to be enjoying her new major. She works part time on campus and loves her apartment. Her roommates are kind of a bother, but I only have to deal with them some of the time.
And she's always there after practice. With food!
The guys don't joke around as much anymore, or flirt. I set those bastards straight upfront. And she's taught them a thing or two about women. Why not? She's taught me too!
Gods I love her!
I'm glad she's with me. Feels so good to have her close by. To not have to wait to see her in person. To hear her voice in my ear rather than over a phone or the Internet.
I don't think I would be at this point in my life without her. My professional football -- I mean, soccer -- career is off to a good start. I'm learning more about the game, and myself. Practices have been tough. As the new guy, I'm taking a beating. But the guys are great. As soon as I set foot on the field, they got my back. Off the field they're like big brothers. I could've used a few growing up. Better late than never, I guess.
Too bad they're not as easy to set straight about my girl as my schoolmates had been.
But she's always there. Always. I really like the sound of that. Always.
So I've devised a big surprise of my own for this evening.
"Ready to go?"
"In a sec....whoa. Julia, you look...stunning."
And she does! A red dress caresses her slender form. Thin shoulder straps show off the smooth skin of her shoulders. The dress stops a few inches above the knee, a slit up the side helps accentuate her long legs. The gold shoes on her feet nearly match the golden hue of her hair. Curly tresses fall from a pinned position on her head, sliding gracefully across her shoulders.
"Stop staring and finish getting ready." With a quick peck on the lips she turns and leaves the room. "We don't want to miss the reservation time."
Oh gods! There's no back to the dress! Nothing but creamy skin and a small dangly thing that sparkles like a diamond.
Suddenly the ring in my pocket seems inadequate for this goddess. I hope a one-karat diamond is big enough. I've still got three more months to pay it off and I can't afford anything bigger.
But if she says yes...we'll see.
~TO BE CONTINUED~