Horror Fan Fiction ❯ The Deal ❯ Chapter 1

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

Demonluver: Hello everyone, this is my first fanfic so please be nice. I appreciate reviews
and constructive critisism( sorry if I spelled it wrong). Without further ado here is the first chapter
of my story, enjoy.


Disclaimer: All the characters in this story are my own creation.


The Deal

Chapter 1


On a dark and cold October night in the year 1990. A young woman the age of 21 with long golden hair
and dark blue eyes. She would have a slim figure if she wasn't pregnant. Her name is Jennifer and she
was walking back to her house where her husband is waiting for her. In her hands is a bag of
chocolate bars that she bought at the store. As Jennifer walked she layed her hand lovingly on her
potruding belly. In another month she will be giving birth to a baby girl. Jennifer was about 10
minutes from her home when she got the feeling that she was being watched. Jennifer looked
behind her but saw nothing, so she just blamed it on her over active imagination. Regardless,
she picked up her pace, as much as an eight month pregnant woman can anyway. She was
almost past an allyway when a hand shot out and warpped around her throat, she was roughly
shoved up against a wall. Jennifer was so scared that she couldn't move or talk. She felt breath
on her neck and a deep voice whisper, "What's a young woman like you doing out so late at
night?" The man removed his hand from her throat, laid it on her shoulder to hold her in place.
Jennifer was so terrified, she was shaking and tears were running unchecked down her face.
She swalled the lump in her throat and pleaded, "Please............Please let me go." The stranger
smiled and asked, "Now, why would I do that? I haven't even fed yet." Jennifer didn't know what
he meant by that, but she knew he was going to kill her. The stranger was actually a vampire, he
leaned into her neck to bite her, when he felt something move against his stomach. The vampire
pulled his head back and looked down at Jennifer's stomach. He noticed that it was quite large,
so he put his hand on it, which caused Jennifer to whimper. He felt movement, thought to himself,
"So this girl is pregnant. I think I have an idea." He removed his hand from her stomach, put two
fingers under her chin and tilted it up. For the first time Jennifer got a good look at her antagonist.
He had long blonde hair that reached to his shoulders, and mesmerizing icy blue eyes. Pale skin,
and a strong jaw line, he is very tall standing a good six feet. His body was athletic built but not
to much muscle. The vampire smiled at her, "Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Dominic
and if you haven't figured it out yet I'm a vampire. What is your name, little one?" "Jennifer" she
replied in a scared whisper. Dominic smiled and asked another question, "You are pregnant.
Correct?" Jennifer just nodded her head in answer, she was to scared to speak. After she
answered his question Jennifer saw the feral smile he made and became even more frightiened.
Dominic looked down at Jennifer, "I will make a deal with you. I will let you live, bot in return I want
your child if it's a girl." Jennifer just stared at him wide eyed for a few minutes, until what he said
started to sink in. She thrashed in his grip while saying, "NO, NO, I will not give you my little girl.
Dominic was getting frustrated with the woman, so he pressed his body against hers and said in
a voice full of menace, "Calm yourself or you will regret it." Jennifer heard the threat in his voice
and immediatly ceased her struggles. As she calmed down, Dominic thought to himself, "Why
did she panic so badly? Unless, she knows the gender of her baby and it's a girl." He voiced
his question. "Jennifer, do you know the sex of your baby?" Jennifer just turned her head away
and continued to cry. Dominic smirked, "Ah! I thought so. You ARE having a girl." Jennifer
thought to herself, "What am I going to do? If I don't agree to his deal me and the baby will die.
But if I do she will live, only to be taken away from me. I have made my decision, I just hope that
it's the right one." Jennifer took a deep breath, looked up at Dominic and said in a low whisper
that he almost missed it. " I agree to your deal." Dominic smirked down at her and said, "Good,
I knew that you would see it my way. I have some conditions to this deal." Dominic made sure
he had her attention and continued, " On her seventeenth birthday I want you to send her to the
same store that you went to for something, it has to be sometime after 10:00 at night. I will be here
waiting for her. Also I will be watching you, so don't go and try anything stupid. You got that?"
Jennifer nodded, Dominic satisfied let her go and she slumped to the ground. Dominic smiled
down at her, " I'll see you sometime in the future." With that he dissappeared as quick as he
appeared. Jennifer got up and started to walk home on shaky legs. Thought to herself, "Oh,
my god! What have I done?" When she got home she went upstairs to where her and Jacobs
(her husband) room was. Jennifer walked to the bed and smiled sadly at her sleeping husband.
Jacob had short wavy aburn colored hair, his face still has some of its boyish features since he's
23 years old. When he's eyes are opened they are a sky blue. He has a lithe body, and tanned skin.
Jennifer took off her pants and lid down with Jacob, as soon as she was in the bed Jacob pulled
her into his body and nuzzled her neck. Jennifer relaxed and closed her eyes, hoping that in
seventeen years Dominic will forget about the deal.


TBC



Demonluver: Well that's the first chapter, I hope that you enjoy it.
Please R&R.