InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ A mistake turned into love ❯ The story begins ( Chapter 1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
By: pyrokitten68 
How the situation arises in the first place
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 11.23.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 527 | Visits: 1.2K | Status: Work In Progress
How the situation arises in the first place
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 11.23.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 527 | Visits: 1.2K | Status: Work In Progress
Disclaimer: I don't own InuYasha or any of its characters. They belong to Rumiko Takahashi.
The wind rustled the leaves of the trees of the forest that surrounded him. He sniffed the air. Naraku was near. Sesshomaru scanned the area. Locating the where Naraku's scent was the strongest, he started to walk in that direction. Before he had a chance to take two steps, pain shot through his stump of an arm. Sesshomaru felt his regrow. Seeing his hand come out of his haori, he tested it. Feeling and watching it move seemed unreal to Sesshomaru. "Sesshomaru look out!" a voice shouted. He reconized it, but before he could really think of where he had heard it before, two more bursts of pain shot through him. One on his right side and one in the middle of his back. The same voice from earlier shouted another warning. This time he saw the owner of the voice. It was Kagome, InuYasha's wench. She ran towards him. She was 10 feet in front of him when Sesshomaru heard an all too familiar, evil voice inside his head. "Kill the girl..."
"No" Sesshomaru replied angrily. Kagome stopped dead in her tracks. She knew it was too late. "Kill the girl.." the voice repeated. Sesshomaru was losing control on his anger. "No, I will not be your pawn. If you want her dead then do it yourself." As if in retaliation to his words, Sesshomaru's arms and legs started to move as if they had a mind of their own. His claws started to drip with deadly poison. Kagome stepped back slowly. He approached her like a cat stalking its prey. Sesshomaru struggled to regain control of his body. Slowly he stopped moving. "Naraku" Sesshomaru said in a deadly whisper "Get out of my head." Naraku became more demanding. "I gave you what you desired the most. You owe me." Sesshomaru growled "I owe you nothing. What you did has nothing to do with me. I did not ask for your help."
Kagome watched the scene with interest. It was a battle of wills. Obviously Naraku had misjudged Sesshomaru. She looked around for where Naraku was hidden. Out of the corner of her eye, she spied the white baboon cloak. Taking out her bow and arrows, she aimed and shot enough energy to purify a whole army of demons. When the arrow touched the cloak however, it disappeared, leaving behind a wooden puppet. Sesshomaru felt Naraku's presence leave him, but was sure he would be back. "Damn it!!" Kagome shouted. She hit the nearest tree in frustration and regretted the action immediately. She had been chasing Naraku for days. Now there was not even a trace of him. After standing silently cursing herself for her carelessness, Kagome shook her head and walked over to the now still Sesshomaru. She could see the tainted jewel shards Naraku had left behind.
Well there it is. What do you guys think? This is my first fanfic, so any help/ instructive critism is greatly appreciated. Flames will be used to add fuel for my fireplace this winter!! :)
The wind rustled the leaves of the trees of the forest that surrounded him. He sniffed the air. Naraku was near. Sesshomaru scanned the area. Locating the where Naraku's scent was the strongest, he started to walk in that direction. Before he had a chance to take two steps, pain shot through his stump of an arm. Sesshomaru felt his regrow. Seeing his hand come out of his haori, he tested it. Feeling and watching it move seemed unreal to Sesshomaru. "Sesshomaru look out!" a voice shouted. He reconized it, but before he could really think of where he had heard it before, two more bursts of pain shot through him. One on his right side and one in the middle of his back. The same voice from earlier shouted another warning. This time he saw the owner of the voice. It was Kagome, InuYasha's wench. She ran towards him. She was 10 feet in front of him when Sesshomaru heard an all too familiar, evil voice inside his head. "Kill the girl..."
"No" Sesshomaru replied angrily. Kagome stopped dead in her tracks. She knew it was too late. "Kill the girl.." the voice repeated. Sesshomaru was losing control on his anger. "No, I will not be your pawn. If you want her dead then do it yourself." As if in retaliation to his words, Sesshomaru's arms and legs started to move as if they had a mind of their own. His claws started to drip with deadly poison. Kagome stepped back slowly. He approached her like a cat stalking its prey. Sesshomaru struggled to regain control of his body. Slowly he stopped moving. "Naraku" Sesshomaru said in a deadly whisper "Get out of my head." Naraku became more demanding. "I gave you what you desired the most. You owe me." Sesshomaru growled "I owe you nothing. What you did has nothing to do with me. I did not ask for your help."
Kagome watched the scene with interest. It was a battle of wills. Obviously Naraku had misjudged Sesshomaru. She looked around for where Naraku was hidden. Out of the corner of her eye, she spied the white baboon cloak. Taking out her bow and arrows, she aimed and shot enough energy to purify a whole army of demons. When the arrow touched the cloak however, it disappeared, leaving behind a wooden puppet. Sesshomaru felt Naraku's presence leave him, but was sure he would be back. "Damn it!!" Kagome shouted. She hit the nearest tree in frustration and regretted the action immediately. She had been chasing Naraku for days. Now there was not even a trace of him. After standing silently cursing herself for her carelessness, Kagome shook her head and walked over to the now still Sesshomaru. She could see the tainted jewel shards Naraku had left behind.
Well there it is. What do you guys think? This is my first fanfic, so any help/ instructive critism is greatly appreciated. Flames will be used to add fuel for my fireplace this winter!! :)