"A mistake turned into love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kuro-inu-hanyou On: July 17, 2006 21:55 CDT Comment/Review: write more, PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aurora2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 17:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was great i love it.( bows down ) i love your fanic please update att:aurora2
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Title: Trin71 Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 20:20 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: ^_^ Not bad...not bad at all! The paragraphs are a bit lengthy...makes it a bit difficult to read, but...very good other then that. ^_^ Keep up with the good work. ^_^
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Title: A Mistake Turned Into Love Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 18:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: A Mistake Turned Into Love Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 12:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: LazyMysticAngeldust On: January 17, 2006 11:48 CST Comment/Review: The story and concept is good. I would certainly like to see more. My only suggestion would be that whenever a different person talks you need to start a new paragraph. This makes the pace of the story even out as well as let the reader know exactly who is talking or thinking. Good Job!
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Title: A Mistake Turned Into Love Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 17:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: iluvsesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 10:46 CST Comment/Review: This was really good. I liked it, Keep going, update soon!
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