InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Don't let go ❯ chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

This chapter has been rewritten.

Thank you,

Daniy Jinx

Chapter 1

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"Miss. Kagome?" a voice said

The girl lifted her head up from the cocoon of her arms, and turned her sleepy eyes in the direction the voice had come from. There stood her teacher wearing a light green long skirt and a pale white blouse. She wasn't the prettiest of women but she was somewhat pretty.

"huh." Kagome said in a sleepy voice, unfolding her arm and stretching.

"Would you like to pay attention or would you like to spend the remainder of the period in the office." The teacher said, and pointed in the direction of the door

"No, no, no, I'll pay attention, sorry." Kagome said while holding her hands up in protest.

The teacher raised her eyebrow and walked away only to go over to another student to wake them up as well.

Kagome looked behind her trying her hardest to crack her back to find that her fellow students were laughing and whispering to each other, about her no doubt.

`I hope this day ends really soon, I'm even more glad that I'll be graduating in a month.' She thought as she turned around in her seat to look at the clock hanging on the wall near the door.

`3:00, yes 20 more minutes!' (I'm home schooled so I don't know when you get out school?) She thought screaming in her head.

Kagome Higurashi was a simple 18 year old girl, not one to get into trouble. She was quite, didn't have any friends really, well one but they were like sisters. She was a beauty, with her slim figure, long raven black hair that ended at her mid back, and her chocolate brown eyes that you could get caught melting into. Today she felt like being lazy, and only wore a, pair old blue jeans with the knees ripped off and plain black loose fitting shirt and a pair of green flip flops.

Guys in her school always wonted to go out with her, but she always new it was so they could get into her pants. Wonting to save her virginity for the right person, she declined every offer they gave her. She never much cared for dating anyway they always made her feel uncomfortable. She leaved with her grandfather, mother, and little brother in a home in the middle of town. Her family didn't have much money but they had enough to make them happy.

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School had let out; she walked to her green Honda, unlocked the door and then threw her book bag in the back seat and got in. She started the car, put her hands on the steering wheel and drove off. She was headed towards the mall. She was meeting her `sister' Sango there for an after school fling.

She and Sango Watson had been best friend's sense birth; they were the same age and went to different high schools. Sango goes to a private school and Kagome goes to a public school. Sango was more upper class then Kagome, but she never held it over her head.

Kagome found a parking spot near the entrance where she was to meet Sango. She got out the car out of the grabbed her book bag and swung in over her shoulder shutting the door and locking it in the process; she figured maybe she could get some homework in while Sango flirted with every guy she saw. She started to walk looking though her book bag trying to find her chap stick when `WHAM' she shoved into something warm and hard and hit the ground.

"Watch where you're going, wench!" Said an angry voice

"Excuse me?" she said not being able to look at the person who she bumped in to, the sun was directly in her eyes. "You're the one that should have been watching where you were going!" she said in her defense as she began to stand up and brushed herself off.

"Keh, I wasn't the one looking through my purse and walking at the same time." He said in an annoyed tone.

She finally looked up to see who it was she bumped into when her heart jumped into her throat. He was handsome, no wait that was an under statement he was sexy! He had long silver hair that was breaded down the center of his back that looked like it hit his lower back, golden eyes that you could get lost in, (drool) and very well toned body from what she cold she form he's black muscle shirt he wore and his dark blue baggy jeans.

"What are staring at, wench?" He shouted interrupting her thoughts.

"Well, I was looking to see where your purse was?"

"Oh, yeah real snappy comeback bitch did you come up with that one all by yourself or did you read that somewhere?" He didn't give her a chance to answer because he was already making his way towards his sliver mustang.

"URG!" Kagome screamed

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Kagome walked throw the mall doors in and none to happy mood, and noticed that her friend Sango had been waiting for at the entrance. She also noticed that she was talking to a very handsome man in a deep purple button down shirt and baggy jeans, he had a black hair pulled back in a tiny ponytail at the back of his neck, had two earrings in both ears, and dark brown eyes. She was about to go rescue her friend from the guy until he walked behind her and wrapped his arms around her belly and rested his chin on Sango's shoulder. (I love it when guys do that. *ahem* back to the Story)

Sango looked pretty content; she had a slim figure just as Kagome only a little more fit. She had her dark brown hair pulled up in a high pony tail, and her brown eyes, today she was wearing almost the same as Kagome only her shirt was green and a little tighter, plus she had way more holes in her pants.

"Hey" Kagome said as she held up her hand and waved. "Is it comfortable day or something?"

"Hey Kaggie!" Sango said taking her hand. " There's someone I wont you to meet." She said as she unwrapped herself from the man holding her. "And yes it is comfortable Day" Sango said sarcastically.

"Oh… Ha… Ha" Kagome replied just as sarcastic

"Kagome, this is my boyfriend Miroku Deatherage, Miroku, This is my `sister' Kagome Higurashi." She said shifting her head to look at both of them.

"Hello" they said at the same time, Kagome letting go of Sango's hand to shake Miroku's

"So how long have you to been together?" Kagome asked Sango

"Um," She said tapping her finger on her lips and looking at Miroku, who just shrugged.

"I'd say about a month?"

" And you didn't tell me?" Kagome growled

"Well, I wanted it to be a surprise so … SURPRISE!" Sango said with a smile trying to calm her friend.

" I'm sorry, some asshole hit me in the parking lot and didn't apologize." She said in a calm voice running her hand over her face.

"YOU MEAN SOMEONE HIT WITH THEIR CAR!" Sango screamed making everyone in the mall turn and look at them.

"No, I mean bumping into me, as in walking."

"Oh, well then it was probably your fault then." She said turning to her boyfriend and grabbing his hand and they walked to the food court.

"Yea-, hey that wasn't very nice." Kagome said while running to catch up with the couple.

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There is that better? I only made minor changes.

Daniy Jinx