| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVED IT ^-^ =] :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok no offence or anything your story is good and all but how do you not know how to spell simple words like w'a'nt, 'k'new or v'o'ice seriously those are simple words how do you mispell them I can unserstand complicated words but thses arent complicated words and I feel that if you dont feel that this story is important enough to try and make as great as it could be than I as a reader shouldnt have to read a story in which the author didnt put forth that great of an effort because if you dont care than why should we it doesnt matter how great you're story is now what matters is how great it could be and to try to accomplish that and to me a story that doesnt even have correct grammer and punctuation isnt a story worth reading because in the REAL world creativity alone isnt nearly enough
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I forgot to mention in my last review that you didn't bring the necklace back into the story. You mentioned it as the necklace that Kagome's dad gave to her but she never did give it to Inuyasha. It would be kool if it came back into the story.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! That was a really awesome story!! Other than a few typos and what was with all the damn question marks?? It seemed that in the first couple chapters there were question marks after almost everything they said! Well good story! I think it kinda sucked how Rin and Sess weren't together anymore but good story anyway!!
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Reviewed By: PiSsEdOfFpRiNcEsS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
dw Kouga is an asshole
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok wow that was awesome. i was really glad that i got into the plot. i think u r a really good writer. u did have so spellin errors. like u put wont instead of want. but hey thats ok i read it and understod it. other then that it was great.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
That was awesome you rock
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Reviewed By: YUCKS!! On: September 24, 2005 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 word, BORING!!!!!! I can sleep after reading a few chapters only! If there was a 0 for Enjoyment factor, i would very well select that.
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Title: kagome or kikyo
Reviewed By: Shyanne On: September 04, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My fanfic is about kagome and kikyo which one is better.my opion would be kagome!shes nice and pretty!Unlike mean old kikyo.she loves Narku also, yuck!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 04, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute story and I liked how the ending came out. P.S. *You guys are funny* Love YA!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!I so Loved this and I also love your story Unhappy. You are soo good.
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Title: ^_^Hi
Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so beautiful!!!!!!! *sobb* that was a fatastic story!!! ^^ loves it so much and can't to read other stories of yours!!!! ^_^ *eats a KitKat* ^^
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