| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:56 CDT
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Awww so sweet!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Title: 1,2,3 ... aawwh kawaii ^^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 07:25 CDT
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Good fic! Far better then mine ^^ how I love Sesshomarou and Rin parts! U go girl. If you want to I can help you with your grammer (okay so I\'m not the best myself) but if you want to I could take out most of it! Well I bet a lot of people said it to ya, well lemmi hear from you if you want to then I could mail ya the chappie's with as many mistakes out of it ^^ Well please update soon, and sent me a mail if you want! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN ... ahem I'm hyper again, gotta go, bubai, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: AWWWW!!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both of these chapters were really sweet! I love how both couples ended up sleeping in each other's arms. I can't wait to read more! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 20:42 CDT
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Great story!!!! Update soon!!!please
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 15:35 CDT
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Please update soon! This was a great chapter like always!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 11:05 CDT
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Ya know for someone who is emotionless, Sesshoumaru is pretty darn funny!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!! P.S. have you seen the new picture on that site I gave you the link too?
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Title: grrrrrrrrrrr
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 22:01 CDT
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it not funny when u leave clif hangers like that *hanging on cliff* HELP!!!!!!! lol........ ^^ he he i loved it! hope u write more!!! keep up the good work! ^~ MEOW
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 14:42 CDT
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3 CHEERS FOR INU!! HE DUMPED THE BITCH!!! YAY!Anyway grat chpter please update soon.
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Title: ALL RIGHT!!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!!He dumped the Bitch!!!! Good for Inu! And Kudos for Kag! I'm really liking this fic! Keep going! Plus, I think you're mom's cool! Not just that she's american, but that she's teaching you, and encouraging you to expand not only your knowledge of this hard language, but your creativity. Is your mom an Inuyasha fan? Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:42 CDT
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OMG! LIke WoW! Awesome chapter. I had a REALLY bad day cuz like i bombed on an oral project but your chapter made me feel better. It was so cute :) So so so happy. It's aweomse...ALL THE TIME ;) I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Who's the person at the door? I'll be waiting fer yer next chapter :) ps. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:39 CDT
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YaY!!!!!!!!!!!! Kagome has the ring back!!!!! Inuyasha's 21??? And who's the person at the door!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell her she did a wonderful job with you and you are doing very well with this fic.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 14:45 CDT
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AWESOME!Please update SOON!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 10:53 CDT
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Title: Great!!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Dainy, I have to say, you are doing an excellent job for actually translating this yourself into english. I am an American, and I swear, English is the most confusing language. I'm in the process of learning japanese, and believe me, I can spell their language much easier than I would figure anyone from any other culture could do with english. For all the time that my last name was Kobida, no American alive could pronounce it correctly (Koh-bee-dah). So, don't sweat it, we all know you're really trying hard, and I must say, you are suceeding. You have great talent, and a great imagination. Keep going! If you'd like any advice, feel free to email me @ shannon@inuyashasworld.zzn.com Ja ne!
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