| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:20 CDT
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Wow!!! I missed so much!!!! I'm going to have to put you on my favorite list!!!! I'm so glad you didn't stop writing, don't let the bad actions of one person rule your life. I can't believe Kikyou just showed up like that and took the ring from Kagome. Why didn't Rin help her??? I hope Inuyasha breaks up with her when he sees that she took his mother's ring. And I hope Rin and Kagome give Kouga a swirly!!!!! Why is he in the bathroom with them anyway, the pervert!!!!!!!! Why anyone want to go out with Kikyou dressing like that??? You would think that Inuyasha would want someone who dresses like a lady. Update soon so I can find out what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really really really raelly really really really enjoyed-ed-ed reading this story and hope you up-date again really soon^_^
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Title: Ghostly_Angel
Reviewed By: Ghostly_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 19:19 CDT
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YAY!!!!(i like to say that) this story is amazing. i really lyke it. u r really excellent at english..YAY!! (sry) yea, so u should really keep goin..i cant wait for the next chappy. plus, u have a cool middle name, Jinx. thatz awesoem *thumbs up* so yea...continue....and u have amazing english..ur actually better than me...but im dumb, not sayin ur dumb...aw man, im jus gonna shut up now..my point is is that u have very good english..as ive pointed out like 3 tymes already. yep. im goin to go now CONTINUE!!!!!! YAY!!!! (ok, im done)
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 12:59 CDT
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UPDATE! UPDATE! Soon. Plz. P.S Kikyo is a stalker.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 02:37 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 01:05 CDT
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omg u must update as soon as possible lol i love this story beth
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Cool. Rin's in it. Lemmie guess. shess will fall in love and rin will fall in love...love at first sight...AWWWW!!! Great story. You'r grammer is always getting better! :) Keep up the good work. AND UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 13:55 CDT
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I like your story alot and it is very good.Don't let assholes get you down.Font Color
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good so far. i think your writing is great for someone who speaks english as a second language. kepp it up. ps. it's tomorrow not to morrow. (ok sorry i had to point that out.. otherwise it's whatever.)
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It's great, different for the most part, so very original. I am so very thankful that you started writing it again. It's fantasmic! Is Inuyasha going to find out about Kouga soon? Btw, do you have a Beta reader?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this! You are doing so well. I can't help but notice that you are making so many improvments. Your fic is coming together so well. You have made the fic easier to understand for every one. Your teacher should be very proud of you. I hope that Inu\Kag and Rin\Sess hit it off during the party. That would just make the girls night.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 19:30 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWW! CUTE CHAPTER!!! AWWWWWWWWW! He better be kidding when he said he was kidding [ablout foolin Kagome that he loved her but tricked her....do you understand that? I don't really i think i got it wrong but i hope you know what i mean. ] Well I'm glad Inuyasha is taking Kagome to his dad's party than *shudders* kikyo... This is an awesome story. Definitly [i don't think i spelled that right...oh well -_-'] one of my favourites most favourites. Your doind an awesome job. Keep the good work up. Update soon! n_n
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be having fun with this, keep going. Now that you have them in some kind of relationship, I don't mean boyfriend\girlfriend, just something that they are trying to get comfortable with play with for awhile. Like I said before you're doing great. Does Inu get a long with Sess? Is Rin in this fic?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too funny! You are going to make her have a heart attack if you keep going. But I do like the fact that you put a cliff hanger in. This way we will see sort of where you plan on going with these two and how soon. Your writing has been improving. I don't want to sound like a teacher, but I am proud of you. Continue to write, because it seems the more you write the more you open up and let things flow. You get more into detail without making it seem boring.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapt. Very cute. BREAK UP WITH KIKYO NOW!!!! GAWD DAMMIT I HATE HER!!!! when she get's dump everyone will be happy *wink* Keep up the good work and update soon>!
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