| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Interested Observer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY ROCKS! I love it! I can't wait for Kag and Inu to make up! FUN! Okie dokie then, I'll review l8ter!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:11 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told you, you had nothing to worry about. Your writing is getting better and you are giving more details. I just hope things work out with Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:32 CDT
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Great chapter!Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Kay C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 14:47 CDT
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Hi me agin I love it alot thanx for keeping this story alive Ja Ne!!;)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:55 CDT
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I'm confused, did Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru have the same mom? And if they did who was the woman they were calling mom at their dad's party?
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:02 CDT
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Poor Kagome and Inuyasha..great chapter..update soon.
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Title: Sad...
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, it's too bad that Kagome had to get the wrong impression, but that's how good Inuyasha's communication is, isn't it? You're doing well! You get better and better the more you write, and I agree, you can only write soo much in a sitting. I'm in the process of writing my first fan fic, and I can only write a few pages per chapter in one sitting. Plus, it gets all of us readers wanting more for the next chapter! Looking forward to it! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:13 CDT
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Poor Kagome, I guess she doesn't remember him kissing her even though she looked like that?
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhhh...good chapter..I'm confoozled abit...So umm...are Inuyasha and Kagome "together" now?!?! and is Kagome OUT of the hospital out yet? I read it over again and I'm abit confoozled...uh...please like e-mail me...I kinda don't get it and yet I so get it...at times..I might not make sence, sorry bout that...ANYWAY...This story is always better...I LOVE HOW RIN AND SHESS IS WITH RIN AND THUNDER AND YEAH!! LIKE OMG! SOOOOOO CUTE! :) Good good.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:16 CDT
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Oh...I forgot...update soon.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:15 CDT
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SOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!! Fluffy goodness.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:56 CDT
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Awww so sweet!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Title: 1,2,3 ... aawwh kawaii ^^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 07:25 CDT
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Good fic! Far better then mine ^^ how I love Sesshomarou and Rin parts! U go girl. If you want to I can help you with your grammer (okay so I\'m not the best myself) but if you want to I could take out most of it! Well I bet a lot of people said it to ya, well lemmi hear from you if you want to then I could mail ya the chappie's with as many mistakes out of it ^^ Well please update soon, and sent me a mail if you want! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN ... ahem I'm hyper again, gotta go, bubai, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: AWWWW!!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both of these chapters were really sweet! I love how both couples ended up sleeping in each other's arms. I can't wait to read more! Ja ne!
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