InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Feero. Friend or Foe? ❯ Feero's escape ( Chapter 1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
By: corrupted_stalker 
Feero tumbled through the forest. He landed hard and bashed his head on a sharp rock, causing a bloody lesion to form on the side of his forehead. He quickly got to his feet wiping the blood away as he continuned through the thick under brush and branches. Suddenly, a throbbing pain in his chest caused him to double-over and fall to his knees. His trembling form was hidden well in the darkness of the night, but not well enough from his creator, Naraku. He turned around and stared into the darkness. Suddenly a figure wearing a babboon pelt came into sight and stopped just a few feet away, his hand glowed with a dark, ominous aura. Feero recognized the aura for it was his heart, as black and ominous as his so called, father. He glowered and growled with much hainous towards Naraku, who stood there with his menacing laughter.
Naraku grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arm was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasped under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Finally, Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
"Your a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
Feero growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. He vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
"I-I ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
Naraku just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
"Oh, but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
Naraku clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
"HOW DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOUR FREEDOM!?"
While Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from high above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were too focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it high above her head...
Naraku finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down, he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
Feero sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. It was indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As she turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
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ok that is the end for now. I assure you that in the second chapter I will start off with Inuyasha and the gang, and even Feero's description of what he looks like.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Thriller / Suspense / Hentai / Action | Type: Revenge Fic | Uploaded On: 05.10.2004 | Updated On: 05.10.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 221 | Status: Completed
Feero tumbled through the forest. He landed hard and bashed his head on a sharp rock, causing a bloody lesion to form on the side of his forehead. He quickly got to his feet wiping the blood away as he continuned through the thick under brush and branches. Suddenly, a throbbing pain in his chest caused him to double-over and fall to his knees. His trembling form was hidden well in the darkness of the night, but not well enough from his creator, Naraku. He turned around and stared into the darkness. Suddenly a figure wearing a babboon pelt came into sight and stopped just a few feet away, his hand glowed with a dark, ominous aura. Feero recognized the aura for it was his heart, as black and ominous as his so called, father. He glowered and growled with much hainous towards Naraku, who stood there with his menacing laughter.
Naraku grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arm was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasped under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Finally, Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
"Your a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
Feero growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. He vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
"I-I ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
Naraku just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
"Oh, but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
Naraku clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
"HOW DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOUR FREEDOM!?"
While Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from high above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were too focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it high above her head...
Naraku finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down, he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
Feero sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. It was indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As she turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
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ok that is the end for now. I assure you that in the second chapter I will start off with Inuyasha and the gang, and even Feero's description of what he looks like.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Thriller / Suspense / Hentai / Action | Type: Revenge Fic | Uploaded On: 05.10.2004 | Updated On: 05.10.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 221 | Status: Completed
Feero tumbled through the forest. He landed hard and bashed his head on a sharp rock, causing a bloody lesion to form on the side of his forehead. He quickly got to his feet wiping the blood away as he continuned through the thick under brush and branches. Suddenly, a throbbing pain in his chest caused him to double-over and fall to his knees. His trembling form was hidden well in the darkness of the night, but not well enough from his creator Naraku. He turned around and stared into the darkness. Suddenly a figure wearing a baboon pelt came into sight and stopped just a few feet away, his hand glowed with a dark, ominous aura. Feero recognized the aura for it was his heart, as black and ominous as his so called, father. He glowered and growled with much hainous towards Naraku, who stood there with his menacing laughter.
grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arms was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasp under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. I vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOU FREEDOM!?"
Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from hight above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were to focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it hight above her head...
finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down as he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures that with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. Itw as indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As he turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
that is the end for now. I assure you that in the second chapter I will start off with Inuyasha and the gang, and even Feero's description of what he looks like.
grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arms was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasp under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. I vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOU FREEDOM!?"
Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from hight above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were to focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it hight above her head...
finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down as he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures that with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. Itw as indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As he turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
that is the end for now. I assure you that in the second chapter I will start off with Inuyasha and the gang, and even Feero's description of what he looks like.