InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Feero. Friend or Foe? ❯ Inuyasha meets Feero ( Chapter 2 )
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Chapter #: Prologue Epilogue One-Shot 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Chapter Summary: "Get off my back about it Kagome!" Inuyasha stomped through the undergrowth of the forest, making a path for the others. Kagome pushed her bike just behind Inuyasha, follwed by Songo and Miroku. "Come on Inuyasha! Let's just go see what it is! It isn't going to take up a lot of our time!" Kagome stopped and stared with pleading eyes. "Please?" Inuyasha stopped. He turned around growling. "It's demonic blood Kagome! If it was a demon with a jewel shard then I would say other wise! But I'm not going to go investigating just because your curious!" he turned around and started to fight with a tangle of vines. He ripped through them and looked back. Kagome stood there with tears wellowing in her eyes. Inuyasha stood there not knowing what to do. Kagome put the kickstand dowm and sat on a stump crying. Inuyasha became nervous wondering what he said that made her cry. He walked over to her. "Hey Kagome! Don't cry now! It's just demon blood there is no need to go and investigate! They probably just..." He trailed off as wind past them by. The scent of blood was stronger now, and smelled more dangerous. Miroku looked over his shoulder then to Inuyasha. "Inuyasha? Is something wrong?" "That blood...it has the same smell as Narakus!" With that said, Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's hand and flung her onto his back as he bounded off. "Happy now?! You get to see the demon!" Kagome held onto his shirt. "It's about time! I wasn't sure how much longer I could keep up those tears!" Inuyasha nearly fell out of the tree he had bounded into when he heard Kagome. "What!? You were faking them!?" "Well, it was the only way I could think of you going to see the demon! And besides..." "Huh?" he looked over his shoulder at her slightly then forwards again. Songo and Miroku followed behind on Kirara's back along with Shippo. "If it has the smell of Naraku, then maybe we will find Naraku aswell!" She nodded to Inuyasha. He glowered at the thought of Naraku. He hoped Kagome was right and he was there. He was ready to kill off Naraku once and for all! Finally they reached the clearing where Feero lay still sleeping. He wasn't bleeding anymore and his breathing more normal now. Inuyasha landed just off in the woods, allowing Kagome to get down. Kagome stared wide-eyed at Feero. Inuyasha scoffed and walked into the clearing. He stared down at Feero. "He can't be a very strong part of Naraku...It looks as though he has already been in a fight with someone...and lost." Kagome walked up beside of Inuyasha and stared down at the sleeping Feero. "Wooooooooooooowwwwwww!" She knelt down beside him and observed his features. Feero had long black hair with yellow bangs in the front that went down to his jaw. He had a small symbol on his forehead that was hard to see due to all the dried blood. His ears were slightly pointed. He wears a Black and red Kimono similar to Sesshomaru's minus the armer and Boa. Around his neck was a small black pouch that was wrapped around his neck. His open shirt reveiled black stripes across his ribs along with the clawed marks he had inflicted on himself by accident. He seemed thin but muscular. Songo and Miroku walked into the clearing. Shippo and Kirara stayed in the wooded part. All four of them surrounded Feero, staring down at him like he were something worth millions, except Inuyasha who looked down at him like he was already dead. Songo knelt down beside Feero. "He's still alive, should we leave him here?" She looked to Kagome who just nodded and stood up. "I think we should bring him along with us!" She looked to Inuyasha again. "Are you crazy!? He reaks of Naraku's aura, which means he is another one of his minions! He'll turn on us faster than you can blink!" he pulled out Tetsusaiga, it transformed into the steel cleaving fang. "I saw we kill him off right now while he is vulnerable! And I know just how to do it...using Tetsusaiga's ultimate tecnique...the Back Lash Wave!" Kagome grabbed his arm as he readied to attack Feero. "NO INUYASHA! You can't just kill him! Besides, you said it yourself, he can't be all that dangerous if he has already been defeated!" "Kagome's right Inuyasha.." Said Miroku as he knelt down beside Songo, who was admiring Feero's looks. "If he was to pose a threat to us, it wouldn't be hard to take him down in this condition. By the looks of it, he seems to have gotten in a fight with another demon who took him down. See? Look at the claw marks on his chest." Miroku pointed to the marks on Feero's chest, not knowing they were self-inflicted. Songo stood up and called to her fire neko Kirara to come into the clearing. She was still in her large form and walked up to Feero. Shippo followed Kirara into the clearing and jumped up onto Miroku's shoulder as he was standing up. "Come on Inuyasha! Have a heart already!" Kagome pulled out her hankercheif and tried to wipe the blood away from his forehead. Feero's eyes moved and tightened up. She pulled her hand away as he started to shift a bit. Inuyasha readied his sword attack in case he tried anything. Feero openned his eyes slowly, showing his strange blue-green eye color. Both Songo and Kagome nearly melted at the sight of his beautiful eyes. He looked around still half asleep when he realized he was surrouned. His eyes turned bloodred as he quickly jumped up almost vanishing into thin air, then landing hard on the ground just a few feet away. He was back on his knees, he was still in pain and his breathing started to quicken again. In a smooth, cool voice, he spoke to them. "W-Who are you people?" He caught sight of Inuyasha's ears and stared at him the most. Inuyasha jumped in front of the others and pointed the sword at him. "heh, I was just thinking the same thing about you!" Kagome stepped in front of Inuyasha and pushed the sword away. "Inuyasha! Stop acting childish! The guy can barely stand as it is! He does't need a sword waved around in his face either!" She faced towards Feero. Inuyasha growled. Feero mouthed Inuyasha. 'So, this is the Inuyasha I was trained to kill all this time...he doesn't look so tough, but maybe that giant sword has something to do with it. Better be causious.' "Don't come any closer wench!" He backed away from Kagome as she stepped closer. "I-I'm warning you!" he stumbled over and sat on the ground, his hand out in front of him. Kagome paused then decided not to get any closer. "It's ok, we're not going to hurt you! We just want to help!" She held her own hand out to him as she started forwards again. Feero was about to jump up and slash at her, but something in her voice was calm and very soothing. He put his hand down and remained motionless. Kagome stopped just in front of him. He leaned back a bit startled and confused. Was she not afraid of him? "My name is Kagome..." She turned around and pointed to everyone. "And that is Inuyasha, Songo, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara." Kirara roared a bit then quieted back down at Songo's touch. "We want to help you with your wounds..." She smiled faintly and held out her hand. Feero stared at her hand, his face became emotionless. He slapped it away. "I don't need help, I can manage on my own!" He made an attempt to get to his feet, but stumbled over. Kagome jumped up and stabled him before he hit the ground again. "You shouldn't do that! Your body is still too weak to handle on its own!" Her voice wasn't as tender this time, but he felt a bit more comfortable as she slipped under his shoulder and helped him walk forwards. He looked up, staring straight at Inuyasha who was glaring back at him. "Songo?" asked Kagome. "Can Kirara carry uh..." she looked to Feero a bit perplexed about his name. "It's Feero." he didn't even have to look nor ask what she thought. It was just something he knew she would ask. "uh, right. Would Kirara beable to carry Feero on her back?" Kirara purred a bit as she looked to Songo. "I don't see why not." Songo signaled for Kirara to carry Feero on her back. He swung his leg over, a bit nervous as he sat there clenching her neck fur in his hand. Kirara started to walk off. Inuyasha was the last in line as they left the clearing. He resheathed Tetsusaiga and tucked his hands inside his kimono sleeves. He growled to himself silently as he followd the others back through the forest. He didn't like the looks of things. And frankly, he didn't like anything about Feero. There was something more about him, something he wasn't getting right off. As the seven of them started for the village, Feero looked over his shoulder towards the direction of Naraku's castle. Inuyasha thought Feero was staring at him so he growled and bared his teeth at him. Feero looked to Inuyasha and quirked and eyebrow wondering what his problem was. He looked forwards again, and watched as Kagome pushed some strange animal along the way. He had no idea where they were going, or what he was going to do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ok that is it for now! see? I told you the gang would come in! and you know know what Feero looks like. ^^ hope you are sticking with me! I would appreciate it! Hide Chapter: Yes
Feero. Friend or Foe? ( 1 Chapter(s) ) [ Add a Chapter | Story Manager ] Feero's escape ( Chapter 1 )
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Summary: Feero tumbled through the forest. He landed hard and bashed his head on a sharp rock, causing a bloody lesion to form on the side of his forehead. He quickly got to his feet wiping the blood away as he continuned through the thick under brush and branches. Suddenly, a throbbing pain in his chest caused him to double-over and fall to his knees. His trembling form was hidden well in the darkness of the night, but not well enough from his creator, Naraku. He turned around and stared into the darkness. Suddenly a figure wearing a babboon pelt came into sight and stopped just a few feet away, his hand glowed with a dark, ominous aura. Feero recognized the aura for it was his heart, as black and ominous as his so called, father. He glowered and growled with much hainous towards Naraku, who stood there with his menacing laughter.
Naraku grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arm was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasped under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Finally, Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
"Your a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
Feero growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. He vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
"I-I ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
Naraku just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
"Oh, but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
Naraku clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
"HOW DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOUR FREEDOM!?"
While Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from high above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were too focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it high above her head...
Naraku finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down, he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
Feero sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. It was indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As she turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
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Chapter #: Prologue Epilogue One-Shot 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Chapter Summary: "Get off my back about it Kagome!" Inuyasha stomped through the undergrowth of the forest, making a path for the others. Kagome pushed her bike just behind Inuyasha, follwed by Songo and Miroku. "Come on Inuyasha! Let's just go see what it is! It isn't going to take up a lot of our time!" Kagome stopped and stared with pleading eyes. "Please?" Inuyasha stopped. He turned around growling. "It's demonic blood Kagome! If it was a demon with a jewel shard then I would say other wise! But I'm not going to go investigating just because your curious!" he turned around and started to fight with a tangle of vines. He ripped through them and looked back. Kagome stood there with tears wellowing in her eyes. Inuyasha stood there not knowing what to do. Kagome put the kickstand dowm and sat on a stump crying. Inuyasha became nervous wondering what he said that made her cry. He walked over to her. "Hey Kagome! Don't cry now! It's just demon blood there is no need to go and investigate! They probably just..." He trailed off as wind past them by. The scent of blood was stronger now, and smelled more dangerous. Miroku looked over his shoulder then to Inuyasha. "Inuyasha? Is something wrong?" "That blood...it has the same smell as Narakus!" With that said, Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's hand and flung her onto his back as he bounded off. "Happy now?! You get to see the demon!" Kagome held onto his shirt. "It's about time! I wasn't sure how much longer I could keep up those tears!" Inuyasha nearly fell out of the tree he had bounded into when he heard Kagome. "What!? You were faking them!?" "Well, it was the only way I could think of you going to see the demon! And besides..." "Huh?" he looked over his shoulder at her slightly then forwards again. Songo and Miroku followed behind on Kirara's back along with Shippo. "If it has the smell of Naraku, then maybe we will find Naraku aswell!" She nodded to Inuyasha. He glowered at the thought of Naraku. He hoped Kagome was right and he was there. He was ready to kill off Naraku once and for all! Finally they reached the clearing where Feero lay still sleeping. He wasn't bleeding anymore and his breathing more normal now. Inuyasha landed just off in the woods, allowing Kagome to get down. Kagome stared wide-eyed at Feero. Inuyasha scoffed and walked into the clearing. He stared down at Feero. "He can't be a very strong part of Naraku...It looks as though he has already been in a fight with someone...and lost." Kagome walked up beside of Inuyasha and stared down at the sleeping Feero. "Wooooooooooooowwwwwww!" She knelt down beside him and observed his features. Feero had long black hair with yellow bangs in the front that went down to his jaw. He had a small symbol on his forehead that was hard to see due to all the dried blood. His ears were slightly pointed. He wears a Black and red Kimono similar to Sesshomaru's minus the armer and Boa. Around his neck was a small black pouch that was wrapped around his neck. His open shirt reveiled black stripes across his ribs along with the clawed marks he had inflicted on himself by accident. He seemed thin but muscular. Songo and Miroku walked into the clearing. Shippo and Kirara stayed in the wooded part. All four of them surrounded Feero, staring down at him like he were something worth millions, except Inuyasha who looked down at him like he was already dead. Songo knelt down beside Feero. "He's still alive, should we leave him here?" She looked to Kagome who just nodded and stood up. "I think we should bring him along with us!" She looked to Inuyasha again. "Are you crazy!? He reaks of Naraku's aura, which means he is another one of his minions! He'll turn on us faster than you can blink!" he pulled out Tetsusaiga, it transformed into the steel cleaving fang. "I saw we kill him off right now while he is vulnerable! And I know just how to do it...using Tetsusaiga's ultimate tecnique...the Back Lash Wave!" Kagome grabbed his arm as he readied to attack Feero. "NO INUYASHA! You can't just kill him! Besides, you said it yourself, he can't be all that dangerous if he has already been defeated!" "Kagome's right Inuyasha.." Said Miroku as he knelt down beside Songo, who was admiring Feero's looks. "If he was to pose a threat to us, it wouldn't be hard to take him down in this condition. By the looks of it, he seems to have gotten in a fight with another demon who took him down. See? Look at the claw marks on his chest." Miroku pointed to the marks on Feero's chest, not knowing they were self-inflicted. Songo stood up and called to her fire neko Kirara to come into the clearing. She was still in her large form and walked up to Feero. Shippo followed Kirara into the clearing and jumped up onto Miroku's shoulder as he was standing up. "Come on Inuyasha! Have a heart already!" Kagome pulled out her hankercheif and tried to wipe the blood away from his forehead. Feero's eyes moved and tightened up. She pulled her hand away as he started to shift a bit. Inuyasha readied his sword attack in case he tried anything. Feero openned his eyes slowly, showing his strange blue-green eye color. Both Songo and Kagome nearly melted at the sight of his beautiful eyes. He looked around still half asleep when he realized he was surrouned. His eyes turned bloodred as he quickly jumped up almost vanishing into thin air, then landing hard on the ground just a few feet away. He was back on his knees, he was still in pain and his breathing started to quicken again. In a smooth, cool voice, he spoke to them. "W-Who are you people?" He caught sight of Inuyasha's ears and stared at him the most. Inuyasha jumped in front of the others and pointed the sword at him. "heh, I was just thinking the same thing about you!" Kagome stepped in front of Inuyasha and pushed the sword away. "Inuyasha! Stop acting childish! The guy can barely stand as it is! He does't need a sword waved around in his face either!" She faced towards Feero. Inuyasha growled. Feero mouthed Inuyasha. 'So, this is the Inuyasha I was trained to kill all this time...he doesn't look so tough, but maybe that giant sword has something to do with it. Better be causious.' "Don't come any closer wench!" He backed away from Kagome as she stepped closer. "I-I'm warning you!" he stumbled over and sat on the ground, his hand out in front of him. Kagome paused then decided not to get any closer. "It's ok, we're not going to hurt you! We just want to help!" She held her own hand out to him as she started forwards again. Feero was about to jump up and slash at her, but something in her voice was calm and very soothing. He put his hand down and remained motionless. Kagome stopped just in front of him. He leaned back a bit startled and confused. Was she not afraid of him? "My name is Kagome..." She turned around and pointed to everyone. "And that is Inuyasha, Songo, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara." Kirara roared a bit then quieted back down at Songo's touch. "We want to help you with your wounds..." She smiled faintly and held out her hand. Feero stared at her hand, his face became emotionless. He slapped it away. "I don't need help, I can manage on my own!" He made an attempt to get to his feet, but stumbled over. Kagome jumped up and stabled him before he hit the ground again. "You shouldn't do that! Your body is still too weak to handle on its own!" Her voice wasn't as tender this time, but he felt a bit more comfortable as she slipped under his shoulder and helped him walk forwards. He looked up, staring straight at Inuyasha who was glaring back at him. "Songo?" asked Kagome. "Can Kirara carry uh..." she looked to Feero a bit perplexed about his name. "It's Feero." he didn't even have to look nor ask what she thought. It was just something he knew she would ask. "uh, right. Would Kirara beable to carry Feero on her back?" Kirara purred a bit as she looked to Songo. "I don't see why not." Songo signaled for Kirara to carry Feero on her back. He swung his leg over, a bit nervous as he sat there clenching her neck fur in his hand. Kirara started to walk off. Inuyasha was the last in line as they left the clearing. He resheathed Tetsusaiga and tucked his hands inside his kimono sleeves. He growled to himself silently as he followd the others back through the forest. He didn't like the looks of things. And frankly, he didn't like anything about Feero. There was something more about him, something he wasn't getting right off. As the seven of them started for the village, Feero looked over his shoulder towards the direction of Naraku's castle. Inuyasha thought Feero was staring at him so he growled and bared his teeth at him. Feero looked to Inuyasha and quirked and eyebrow wondering what his problem was. He looked forwards again, and watched as Kagome pushed some strange animal along the way. He had no idea where they were going, or what he was going to do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ok that is it for now! see? I told you the gang would come in! and you know know what Feero looks like. ^^ hope you are sticking with me! I would appreciate it! Hide Chapter: Yes
Feero. Friend or Foe? ( 1 Chapter(s) ) [ Add a Chapter | Story Manager ] Feero's escape ( Chapter 1 )
Status: Completed
Chapter Info: 1 pages / 1037 words / 6 KB
Chapter Stats: 18 visits
Hidden: NO
Summary: Feero tumbled through the forest. He landed hard and bashed his head on a sharp rock, causing a bloody lesion to form on the side of his forehead. He quickly got to his feet wiping the blood away as he continuned through the thick under brush and branches. Suddenly, a throbbing pain in his chest caused him to double-over and fall to his knees. His trembling form was hidden well in the darkness of the night, but not well enough from his creator, Naraku. He turned around and stared into the darkness. Suddenly a figure wearing a babboon pelt came into sight and stopped just a few feet away, his hand glowed with a dark, ominous aura. Feero recognized the aura for it was his heart, as black and ominous as his so called, father. He glowered and growled with much hainous towards Naraku, who stood there with his menacing laughter.
Naraku grinned sadistically as he clenched Feero's heart tighter, sending him screaming in agonzing pain. Something about his screams drived him to continue on the with torture. It made his body rush with pleasure at the sound of pain-filled screams that echoed through the land. He grinned wider, his arm was trembling with all the pressure on the heart. As he gave it one last squeeze, he watched as Feero's body collasped under the strain. Feero curled up around his chest area in a poor attempt to ease the pain. The blood on his forehead streamed quickly onto the cold ground, caking it as it dried.
Finally, Naraku released his grip and lowered his hand to his side. Feero went practically limp on the ground, still clenching his blood stained shirt, his mouth partly open as he strained to take normal breaths. His eyes were closed now, but he was still focused intently on Naraku, whos menacing laughter poured over him, and whos words stung when he spoke.
"Your a fool to think you could escape me, Feero! You have some nerve to continue this futile struggle against me to find your freedom. I'm inevitable Feero, and you are bound to me like your sisters and former brothers."
Feero growled and strained to get to his feet, but the loss of blood and the still painfilled sensation in his chest stopped him. For three long months, he had gone trough extensive training to destroy Inuyasha. For three long months, he had to deal with Naraku's persistance and constantness, being puished by solitary confinement and lashings whenever he did something wrong. He was sick of it. He came to realize he was being used, and he hated it. He hated the thought of being created and treated like he wasn't a living creature. He assured himself that this was not training, this was hell on earth, and he wasn't going to stand for it anymore. He vowed that one day he would become free like the other demons, and beable to live his own life the way he wanted and not how someone else wanted him to. With a quivering voice he spoke back to Naraku.
"I-I ref-fuse to be used for y-your dirty work, Naraku! I w-will have my freedom, and no-no one is going to s-stop me! I won't stand for this anymore!"
Naraku just laughed and held up the heart in his hand.
"Oh, but you will do as I say and live with it! It is your DESTINY!"
Naraku clamped down one the heart tightly, showing no signs of mercy. Feero screamed again and arched his back as he grasped his chest, digging his powerful claws into it just breaking the skin. He continued his screams that echoed throughout the forest grounds, and seemed to even echoe back to him. Naraku continued to grip.
"HOW DOES IT FEEL FEERO?! HOW DOES IT FEEL TO EXPERIENCE SUCH PAIN JUST FOR WANTING YOUR FREEDOM!?"
While Naraku continued to laugh sadistically at Feero's horrid crys of pain, Kagura encircled them from high above. She stared down at the unbareable sight of her youngest brother's torture. Although she hated him greatly for a past doing, she couldn't take it anymore. The constant screams of painful lashings on his back, the crys at night when he was locked in the dungeon's darkness alone with no light or comfort provided for him. Once she thought about going down to the dungeon to sit with him, but failed when she was caught by Naraku. She continued to observe from high above the tree lining, unnoticed by either of them. Both were too focused on each other to sense her. She narrowed her eyes and openned her fan up, raising it high above her head...
Naraku finally released his grip, a bit reluctant at first. Feero's body went limp, the only apparent movement noticeable was his slow, gasping breaths through his mouth, making it sound rather raspy. He continued his malacious grin as he stepped forward. Just as he was about to say something, he was struck in the chest my a force of wind. As he was thrown back, the heart in his hand was tossed out then vanished into thin air. Naraku hit the tree hard, knocking it down, he slid down the remainder of the trunk and stopped at the base. He shook his head and looked up to see Kagura, standing over Feero's blood-covered body.
Feero sensed someone standing over him. His bloodred eyes returned to their abnormal blue-green color, as he slowly turned his head and looked up. His vision was so blurred and out of focus that it looked like there were four figures with distorted faces. Although that is what he saw, his sense of smell said otherwise. It was indeed just one, and it was one he knew from the start. His sister, Kagura. As she turned her head away, his own head fell sideways to the ground as he passed out. The last thing he remembered was hearing Naraku's angered voice, screaming his sister Kagura's name...
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