InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ In The Mirror ❯ I love you ( Chapter 30 )

 

I'm telling you I HATE writing in peoples POV. It's driving me CRAZY!!!!!!! I swear on my grandma's grave I'll NEVER WRITE A STORY IN THE CARICTORS POV AGAIN!!!! Maybe one-shots, but never again a story, it's too hard -.- As you'll see this chapter is written in MY POV again, but the next chapter might be in someone else's, I don't know XD Anyway….

 

I just got a review from someone calling their self mistah no read and I would just like to make a few comments if you just happen to be reading this, which I highly doubt. Number one, I know that my grammar isn't that great, in fact it's probably horrible; and that my style of writing is horrible too, but that is absolutely NO reason to leave a review to hurt someone's feelings. You didn't hurt mine seeing as how I've been flamed before, but there are a lot of people out there that hasn't. I'm writing fan fiction to improve my writing skills and to have fun, not to listen to people bitch all day about how bad my writing is. I've said it before and I'll say it again, if you don't like it then DON'T REVIEW! If you have some advice for me on how to improve my writing the please do tell me, but don't leave stupid shit like “this sucks!” or “it's not worth reading.” If you don't like it then just go way and leave me in my own little world got it? Thank you.

 

Now to answer QueenTatooine's question. I am aware that she's been able to stay pure through all of the stuff Naraku's put her through, but this is three years after she fell down the well and I like to think that she's matured over the years. When most of the stuff happened to her she was fifteen and she was still mostly a child, and after three years of fighting youkai and dealing with Inuyasha's rudeness and all the stuff he's put her through I can imagine that there's SOME kinda darkness in her, even if it's not a lot. She is human after all, and then there's all the stuff Inuyasha said to her before she left to go back to her time, even through she forgave him it's still in her head, so I'm guessing that all of that stuff would build up after so long. And as for Sesshomaru, I hate writing about him XD He's so hard to keep in character it's not even funny T.T I'm trying through. I think the only time I really DID keep him almost in character was my one-shot called Silly little things. If you want to go check it out ^^

 

In the Mirror: Chapter twenty nine. I love you

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Her powers were overwhelming her. She didn't even remember pulling out one of her arrows and notching it in her bow. But the next thing she knew she was aiming her arrow at Naraku. She felt cold, but she could feel the perspiration dripping down her forehead and down the sides of her face. Her heart was beating so loud in her ears that it was the only sound she could hear. But she felt their eyes on her, she knew that every person in the room was watching her and waiting for her to make the next move. She noticed movement out of the corner of her eyes, she didn't want to turn her head to see what was there for fear that Naraku or one of his minions would come after her.

 

“Inuyasha, to my left.” Her voice sounded foreign to her, and not so pleasant. She was hoping he'd get the message since she only said it loud enough for him to hear it. Lucky for her Sesshomaru was able to hear her too and caught her meaning as well. They both turned their heads to look where she had indicated. Inuyasha made a move to attack but Sesshomaru stopped him.

 

“Don't, I know that man. He's trust worthy.” Inuyasha turned to look at him.

 

“What like the last guy you trusted Rin with?”

 

“Ah, General Kureno, how did you get here if you don't mind me asking?” Naraku asked like they were old pals. At this point Kagome wouldn't put it past them, if she didn't know the person, she wasn't going to trust them. And she didn't care if he had the word of a lord to back him up.

 

“I just followed your sickening sent, it wasn't that hard. Especially since you dropped all the covering spells and the barrier after they got through. Now where's my son, and what are you doing with Keiko?” She took her eyes off of Naraku for just a second to see what this guy looked like. Imagine her surprise when she found herself looking at a mirror image of Shizuka himself. If it was even possible he was even more hansom then his son. His hair was black as tar, but he didn't have any highlights, his eyes were as silver as his sons and he had the same mark on his forehead except he didn't have a jewel shard in it.

 

“All in time my good Kureno, but first I think this lovely young lady would like a word with me first. Now Kagome, would you mind putting down that arrow before you poke an eye out?” He said jumping down from the pavilion and standing behind Miroku and the others. “Or I might be forced to take out my anger on one of your friends.”

 

“Don't you dare you basterd!” Inuyasha yelled. The Tetsusaiga felt heavy in his hand, he knew that it wouldn't do any good to use the wind scar since he was still behind the barrier. And even if he wasn't he wouldn't dare use it for fear of hurting his friends.

 

“K-Kag-ome.” She looked down at her friends lying on the floor and saw Shippo trying to open his eyes. Naraku picked him up from the ground by the back of his shirt and held him out in front of him.

 

“Shippo!” Kagome immediately pointed the arrow down to the ground.

 

“If you don't want him or the little wench hurt you will comply with every word I say got that Hanyou? And that goes for the lord and the general too. I have your son bobby trapped and all I have to do is give the word and hell be blown to bits.”

 

“You son of a bitch! Let them go!” Kureno yelled baling his fists together trying to restrain himself from attacking.

 

“Ouch, my head. What's- Naraku?!” Shippo was fully awake now, and he looked plenty scared.

 

How the hell did I get here? He thought trying to remember what had happened to land him here in Naraku's clutches. He couldn't remember anything, and it was scaring the hell out of him. He saw Inuyasha, Kagome and Sesshomaru directly in front of him. What the hell is Sesshomaru doing here? He looked next to him and saw Rin, Sango, Miroku, Kirara and another girl he never saw before on the ground next too him. Oh shit, great, in a few minutes we're going to have two very powerfully pissed off Inu-youkai on our hands. Or on Kagome and Rin's hands I should say.

 

“If you want them, go and get them.” Naraku said. They didn't know what he was talking about for a second before the floor below him opened up and Rin, Sango, Miroku, Kirara and Keiko fell into the black pit below. Shippo looked down in horror as his friend fell into the great nothingness below him and realized that he was going to be dropped in next. He looked into Kagome and Inuyasha's eyes before Naraku let go of him.

 

“HELP!”

 

It was the last thing they heard before he was gone into the blackness. Naraku let the barrier drop just as he himself and his minions disappeared. The minute the barrier was gone Sesshomaru was gone into he black hole in the floor. Kureno wasn't too far behind. Then next went Inuyasha and Kagome. As they jumped in kagome turned her head and looked Inuyasha in the eyes.

 

“I love you.” She said just before they were separated. She didn't even see the shock on his face as he hit the bottom with a hard thud.

 

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“Forgive me for asking Naraku-sama, but why do you not just kill them now? Wouldn't that be easer?” Kanna asked as they watched there enemies fall into the trap that they had set for them.

 

Probably because he's a heartless bastard that enjoys watching the suffering of others. Kagura thought to herself.

 

“Because Kanna, this is just too much fun. It brings back fond memories of when I set the trap for Inuyasha and Kikyo so long ago.”

 

Basterd. I hate this, I swear no matter how long it takes I WILL be free of him, and no one will stand in the way of the wind!

 

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So how was it? Anyway please review! (hugs)