InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ Another Creation ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: GoldenEyedGirl 
Naraku creates one last time. Inu gang finds out.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.08.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 265 | Status: Work In Progress
Naraku creates one last time. Inu gang finds out.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.08.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 265 | Status: Work In Progress
Hello everyone... I hope you like this one.. Its new so let me know what you think.. I would really like it if you reviewed... I need inspiration.
Disclaimer: I don't own it..
Chapter One: Last Creation
*** We start off with Naraku in his evil castle with his POV***
As Naraku sat waiting for his last and final incarnate emerge from its resting place. Waiting almost patiently for ' Her ' to arrive. He had no more strength to create any more of them. He had Kagura and Kanna and the rest he create were destroyed by that ' Halfbreed ' Inuyasha.
Maybe this one will be able to finally defeat Inuyasha. Hopefully she will be beautiful and loyal. Unlike Kagura, this one will be faithful to me and be the perfect slave. She will do as I say and behave and be just like the perfect child. She will finally get rid of my enemy for me.
Finally he watched as his final attempt to make the perfect child steped out of her prison and stood in front of her 'master'. She was absolutely beautiful. She had silver hair with blood red streaks, gold with silver lined flames danced on both of her cheeks pointing toward her mouth, and right there in the middle of her forhead was a blue, gold and silver flame, pointing to her hair line. Her skin was the color of milk or white silk and it looked as soft as silk.
Her lips a soft pink and perfectly pouty. Her overal look was nice and rounded, no sharp edges. She was filled out in all the right places and looked as loving and kind as a pet Vipor about ready to strike down an opponent. Her eyes told a story it seems. They were unique, silver with black and blue specks, so beautiful that when you looked into them you could see the heavens, with a touch of ice and evil. A silver and red tail to match her hair, but on the very tip was black and blue specks to match her eyes. She looked about the age of 23 or so.
She was abolutely perfect. A perfect woman for a perfect plan. She would need a name. She is beautiful and evil. Something to throw off everyone. She looks sweet and innocent. Hmm, the perfect name for one such as her. She shall now be known to everyone as.......
*** Inuyasha and the gang ***
" Inuyasha!!!! " Kagome screamed as Inuyasha moved out of the way of Kagura's 'Dance of Blades'.
~Flashback~
There was a blast of wind. When everything died down there stood Kagura, looking as smug as ever. She then told them the usual line about them having to die and then doing her usual attacks.
~End Flashback~
Kagura knowing that she would lose stoped her attacks and stated with a smirk,
" I can't wait for you to meet Naraku's newest creation, for he thinks she is more powerful then he."
She pulled out her feather and jumped on and flew away. They all stood there and looked to the spot where Kagura just was. A new creation? That was on all of there minds. The all wondered what Naraku could create that was more powerful then he himself was. What was the name of this last creation. They all hoped that the news was wrong, but they all knew that this ' creation ' was indeed something to mess with. They all wondered what he would look like, and boy would they be suprised when ' he ' appeared before them.
*** With Kagura on her way back to Naraku's castle***
I hope Naraku is right about this new one being more powerful then he is. Then maybe she will team up with myself and the others to finally defeat Naraku.
~Flashback~
" She is a beauty isn't she?" Naraku stated more then questioned.
" She indeed is pretty." Kagura said.
" Please, she is more then pretty." he said with a sneer.
' Yeah whatever.' Kagura thought. ' She is pretty indeed, lets hope she can take us all out of this giant mess we are in.' she thought.
" Just go, go and mess with Inuyasha, and then tell them about my new creation but don't let to much slip out of those lips of yours or else your life will be over." he warned.
Kagura rolled her eyes and left. She flew to where she knew they would be. They were camped a days travel from the village they stayed at.
~ End Flashback~
Now I need to talk with her to see if she will join me or not. I need to study her and see if she shows any signs of hating Naraku as much as I do. He was pretty good in naming her that though. Let us see what happens and hope for the best. I need her help, for only she can do it. The weird part about this one is that Naraku let her keep her heart. She has her heart and therefor free of his control.
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Well thats all for now folks... haha... but hope you liked it.. please review.I need them to keep going. I will be updating my other stories soon. I have been having troubles with my wrists and have to type slowly and not much at a time. I had this idea and needed to get it out of my system. I know its not the best start in the world and might not get any better, but please give me some feedback, anything would be wonderful. Helpful hints, ideas, anything I did wrong, let me know..... Thanks much, and loves to my siblings: Icy, Ace, and Sesshy's koi.
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!
Disclaimer: I don't own it..
Chapter One: Last Creation
*** We start off with Naraku in his evil castle with his POV***
As Naraku sat waiting for his last and final incarnate emerge from its resting place. Waiting almost patiently for ' Her ' to arrive. He had no more strength to create any more of them. He had Kagura and Kanna and the rest he create were destroyed by that ' Halfbreed ' Inuyasha.
Maybe this one will be able to finally defeat Inuyasha. Hopefully she will be beautiful and loyal. Unlike Kagura, this one will be faithful to me and be the perfect slave. She will do as I say and behave and be just like the perfect child. She will finally get rid of my enemy for me.
Finally he watched as his final attempt to make the perfect child steped out of her prison and stood in front of her 'master'. She was absolutely beautiful. She had silver hair with blood red streaks, gold with silver lined flames danced on both of her cheeks pointing toward her mouth, and right there in the middle of her forhead was a blue, gold and silver flame, pointing to her hair line. Her skin was the color of milk or white silk and it looked as soft as silk.
Her lips a soft pink and perfectly pouty. Her overal look was nice and rounded, no sharp edges. She was filled out in all the right places and looked as loving and kind as a pet Vipor about ready to strike down an opponent. Her eyes told a story it seems. They were unique, silver with black and blue specks, so beautiful that when you looked into them you could see the heavens, with a touch of ice and evil. A silver and red tail to match her hair, but on the very tip was black and blue specks to match her eyes. She looked about the age of 23 or so.
She was abolutely perfect. A perfect woman for a perfect plan. She would need a name. She is beautiful and evil. Something to throw off everyone. She looks sweet and innocent. Hmm, the perfect name for one such as her. She shall now be known to everyone as.......
*** Inuyasha and the gang ***
" Inuyasha!!!! " Kagome screamed as Inuyasha moved out of the way of Kagura's 'Dance of Blades'.
~Flashback~
There was a blast of wind. When everything died down there stood Kagura, looking as smug as ever. She then told them the usual line about them having to die and then doing her usual attacks.
~End Flashback~
Kagura knowing that she would lose stoped her attacks and stated with a smirk,
" I can't wait for you to meet Naraku's newest creation, for he thinks she is more powerful then he."
She pulled out her feather and jumped on and flew away. They all stood there and looked to the spot where Kagura just was. A new creation? That was on all of there minds. The all wondered what Naraku could create that was more powerful then he himself was. What was the name of this last creation. They all hoped that the news was wrong, but they all knew that this ' creation ' was indeed something to mess with. They all wondered what he would look like, and boy would they be suprised when ' he ' appeared before them.
*** With Kagura on her way back to Naraku's castle***
I hope Naraku is right about this new one being more powerful then he is. Then maybe she will team up with myself and the others to finally defeat Naraku.
~Flashback~
" She is a beauty isn't she?" Naraku stated more then questioned.
" She indeed is pretty." Kagura said.
" Please, she is more then pretty." he said with a sneer.
' Yeah whatever.' Kagura thought. ' She is pretty indeed, lets hope she can take us all out of this giant mess we are in.' she thought.
" Just go, go and mess with Inuyasha, and then tell them about my new creation but don't let to much slip out of those lips of yours or else your life will be over." he warned.
Kagura rolled her eyes and left. She flew to where she knew they would be. They were camped a days travel from the village they stayed at.
~ End Flashback~
Now I need to talk with her to see if she will join me or not. I need to study her and see if she shows any signs of hating Naraku as much as I do. He was pretty good in naming her that though. Let us see what happens and hope for the best. I need her help, for only she can do it. The weird part about this one is that Naraku let her keep her heart. She has her heart and therefor free of his control.
************************************************************
Well thats all for now folks... haha... but hope you liked it.. please review.I need them to keep going. I will be updating my other stories soon. I have been having troubles with my wrists and have to type slowly and not much at a time. I had this idea and needed to get it out of my system. I know its not the best start in the world and might not get any better, but please give me some feedback, anything would be wonderful. Helpful hints, ideas, anything I did wrong, let me know..... Thanks much, and loves to my siblings: Icy, Ace, and Sesshy's koi.
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!