InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ Inu gang meets Makoto ( Chapter 3 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: GoldenEyedGirl 
Finall it is time for the gang to meet the new creation.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.27.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 195 | Status: Work In Progress
Finall it is time for the gang to meet the new creation.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.27.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 195 | Status: Work In Progress
Okay, Chapter three. I can't believe I suck so badly at writing. At least I do have two reviewers. LMAO. Okay but anyway On with the show. Oh... P.S. I need reviews. Ugh I hate waiting... blah... ok so Now on with the show.
Disclaimer: If I owned it I wouldn't be here.
Chapter 3: Inu gang meets Makoto
' I wonder, will they automatically hate me because I am part of Naraku? I really hope not. I need them to trust me. Yes, I can read their minds, but what good is that if they still do not trust me?' Makoto thought while getting dressed for their meeting with the Inu gang.
They would soon be leaving to go to Inuyasha's village. She was a little nervous because she has never met anyone besides Kagura, Kanna and Kohaku. Even though she is evil, doesn't mean she doesn't have feelings, but because of where and how she is, she has to hide those feelings. There has to be a way for her to be who she wants to be, but is she willing to do it, go the extra mile, is she willing to pay the price?
" It's time to go, perfect creation." Kagura said the last part with a sneer.
" Fine, lets go, and you heard what Master Naraku said. I am not to fight, just watch and observe, and maybe talk to them.
" Yes, I know, be quiet and lets go. Plus I wouldn't want to talk to them if I were you."
Kagura and Makoto walked slowly outside and stoped at the gate enterence. Kagura pulled her feather and got on. Makoto summoned her cloud at the bottom of her feet. Her cloud colors are black, silver and blood red. They flew off towards the village where Inuyasha and the rest of his company was. They closed in on the old village and landed by an old well on the outskirts of the village. As they landed firmly on the ground Makoto turned to Kagura and looked at her expectantly.
' There is magic here, powerful magic.' Makoto thought.
" What do we do now?" Makoto asked.
" Just wait, Inuyasha will come soon, he should have already picked up on our scent and should be on the way to investigate His territory."
No longer did those words come out of her mouth then Inuyasha burst through the trees. Carrying Kagome on his back, Miroku and Sango on Kirara. Shippou hanging onto Kagome for dear life. Inuyasha put Kagome down on her own two feet and took up a battle stance. Ready for Kagura to attack, and him beat the shit out of her. He told the others to stay behind him, so that he could ' take care of business'. Inuyasha then felt like it was time to get everything done and over with so he yelled to Kagura.
" What tha hell ya want, ya witch? Come back for another beatin'?"
" Inuyasha, who is the other one with Kagura?" Kagome whispered.
" That must be Naraku's latest creation, the one that is supposed to be more powerful then Naraku himself." Miroku said wisely inching closer to Sango while she was distracted with the new comer. He snaked his hand toward her bottom when.........
BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU PERVERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Was heard throughout the forest.
" Oh, Miroku. When will you ever learn?" Kagome and Sango said in unison.
" It was worth it." he said with little stars around his head. ( hehe I wanted to say that)
" Actually, I just came to introduce you to the newest creation." Kagura laughed because she still hasn't said 'Her' name yet. ( can you tell she is a bit jealous?)
All eyes then turned to Makoto. She fought the urge to figgit where she stood. She wasn't used to so much attention and she could already feel their hate for her.
" Ha! He doesn't look like much." Inuyasha stated.
" You are a fool half-breed. Have you not looked properly? Open your eyes. This person beside me is not a man, but a woman."
To make sure that what she said was true she flipped back one side of the cloak Makoto was wearing. Showing them that she indeed was a woman. They then saw that 'it' was actually a woman not man. She had a black and blood red fighting kimono on with a silver hooded cape and mask on. Makoto thought it best to tap into their thoughts for a bit to see what they think. ( I will put their name before their thought.)
Miroku: ' She is very powerful, I can feel it coming off of her in waves. She could indeed defeat Naraku. She doesn't want us to see her but why? Is she ugly? Why doesn't she want us to see her face?'
Inuyasha: ' Feh, she is too afraid to speak for herself and hides from everyone. Maybe she is to stupid to talk.'
Sango: ' I wonder what she looks like under the cape and mask?'
Kagome: ' Will there be a fight? I feel great power from this one and she doesn't even have any of the shards Naraku has.'
Shippou: ' Mommy! Man, that lady scares me. She is really powerful and she has magic around her.'
That comment threw Makoto off. A human woman having a youkai kit for a son? Makoto kept getting thoughts about Sango and her rear end from the monk. She got one very very detailed thought right then and just shut off her mind reading ability as fast as she could. She didn't even want to know.
" Can she speak or is she to stupid?" Inuyasha asked with a slight sneer.
" Yes, I can speak, Inuyasha. I only do so when I have something to say." came the breathy reply.
They stood in shock. They couldn't believe that a sweet and innocent voice could come out of something so evil. Now that they have heard her voice, they really wanted to know what she looked like. Did her voice match her looks or was it covering up for something. Was she really ugly, plain or beautiful?
" Will you show yourself to us?" asked Miroku.
" Why should I? My looks are not important." Makoto said.
" Because we wanna know what our enemy looks like." yelled Inuyasha.
" Inuyasha! I am not your enemy yet. I have done you no harm, so how does that make me your enemy?" Makoto stated.
Inuyasha stared at her. He couldn't believe she just said that. Didn't she realize that she is the enemy just because Naraku created her. It doesn't matter if she hasn't done anything wrong, she will eventually.
" You are apart of Naraku, and Naraku is out enemy." Sango said.
" I might be apart of hiim, but I have still done no wrong by you. I did not ask to be created." Makoto said sadly.
" Shut your trap, Makoto. You stay out of this." Kagura said.
Makoto bowed her had and steped back. She then looked around for a place to stand, safely out of the way. She backed up into the trees. Everyone was unaware that eyes were watching them. Kagura took this time to take out her fan and spread it wide. Makoto tapped into everyones thoughts to see what they were thinking this time.( Miroku might be censored lmao)
Kagura: ' It's time to play, now lets see what they have. Muahahahahaha.'
Inuyasha: ' Damn, this bitch is getting old. I am tired of this. I will show her.'
Kagome: ' I hope Inuyasha doesn't get hurt. I don't know about this other woman. I suppose she is another demon like Kagura.'
Sango: ' Why isn't that other woman fighting? Why is she just standing around doing nothing? What is she supposed to be doing?'
Shippou: ' I am going to go hide somewhere safe. I know that is what Kagome would want me to do.'
Miroku: ' Hmm, I wonder what Sango would look like naked, hehe better yet I wonder how she would look........
' Okay, thats enough of that.' Makoto thought quickly cutting off his line of thought.
Kagura did her ' Dance of Blades', and just as she was about ready to do it again, Makoto called to her and told her that what she was going is enough. Kagura thought it best not to go against her right now because Makoto was still in favor with Naraku. Kagura started to pout though but stopped imediately when she saw a flash of silver ice from under Makoto's hood. Unfortunately everyone else saw this also and got curious. Everyone started to get closer little by little. They were hoping to catch a glimps under the hood and mask of Makoto. Maybe she isn't as bad as they thought she was. She stoped Kagura from doing another attack on Inuyasha, so maybe they still have hope yet of defeating Naraku.
" Show yourself, Makoto!" Inuyasha said remembering the name Kagura had called her companion.
" Nice ears, Inuyasha." Makoto stated.
Everyone stired and listened intently. Kagome thought that Makoto's name was really ironic. Seeing how she is an evil incarnate, her name is anything but evil. Maybe her name gives her a tiny spark of good, but we will never know... will we?
" Fine, I will show you my features." she said pulling down her hood and taking off her mask in one clean stroke. She then tapped into everyones thoughts and all she could hear was a chorus of ' WOW's!'
Just then everyone felt the disturbence of two beings aproaching quickly. You could tell that they were heading this way.
Naraku's POV at his castle
Naraku was looking in the mirror Kanna was holding, watching as everything took place. He was proud of Makoto for drawing in the pathetic fools. She is doing her job and she doesn't even realize this will play into my hands. She is the most alluring demoness I have ever seen. No doubt Inuyasha will be drawn to her. Just then he noticed the approach of the two beings he wished would not come anywhere near his new creation. She was still new to the world and therefore a little gullible. Two misionaries for Lord Sesshoumaru were closing in fast. Let us see how Makoto deals with these two. No one even notices the dark shadow lurking in the background. Makoto should see this soon.
Okay thats it for this chapter. Let me know what you think. I have to warn you. I will be moving soon, and therefore I might not have a computer for a very very long time. I might still have one but that is unknown as of now. Sorry to my readers, there is only one way for me to convience the person I am moving in with to keep his pc. And that would be... my devotion to my fans but as of now I barely have any. So please this is very important and if you really wish for me to continue, I NEED REVIEWERS!!! THIS IS SERIOUS! You know what to do. Loves to Icy, and Ace.
Golden-Eyed-Girl
Ja Ne!
Disclaimer: If I owned it I wouldn't be here.
Chapter 3: Inu gang meets Makoto
' I wonder, will they automatically hate me because I am part of Naraku? I really hope not. I need them to trust me. Yes, I can read their minds, but what good is that if they still do not trust me?' Makoto thought while getting dressed for their meeting with the Inu gang.
They would soon be leaving to go to Inuyasha's village. She was a little nervous because she has never met anyone besides Kagura, Kanna and Kohaku. Even though she is evil, doesn't mean she doesn't have feelings, but because of where and how she is, she has to hide those feelings. There has to be a way for her to be who she wants to be, but is she willing to do it, go the extra mile, is she willing to pay the price?
" It's time to go, perfect creation." Kagura said the last part with a sneer.
" Fine, lets go, and you heard what Master Naraku said. I am not to fight, just watch and observe, and maybe talk to them.
" Yes, I know, be quiet and lets go. Plus I wouldn't want to talk to them if I were you."
Kagura and Makoto walked slowly outside and stoped at the gate enterence. Kagura pulled her feather and got on. Makoto summoned her cloud at the bottom of her feet. Her cloud colors are black, silver and blood red. They flew off towards the village where Inuyasha and the rest of his company was. They closed in on the old village and landed by an old well on the outskirts of the village. As they landed firmly on the ground Makoto turned to Kagura and looked at her expectantly.
' There is magic here, powerful magic.' Makoto thought.
" What do we do now?" Makoto asked.
" Just wait, Inuyasha will come soon, he should have already picked up on our scent and should be on the way to investigate His territory."
No longer did those words come out of her mouth then Inuyasha burst through the trees. Carrying Kagome on his back, Miroku and Sango on Kirara. Shippou hanging onto Kagome for dear life. Inuyasha put Kagome down on her own two feet and took up a battle stance. Ready for Kagura to attack, and him beat the shit out of her. He told the others to stay behind him, so that he could ' take care of business'. Inuyasha then felt like it was time to get everything done and over with so he yelled to Kagura.
" What tha hell ya want, ya witch? Come back for another beatin'?"
" Inuyasha, who is the other one with Kagura?" Kagome whispered.
" That must be Naraku's latest creation, the one that is supposed to be more powerful then Naraku himself." Miroku said wisely inching closer to Sango while she was distracted with the new comer. He snaked his hand toward her bottom when.........
BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU PERVERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Was heard throughout the forest.
" Oh, Miroku. When will you ever learn?" Kagome and Sango said in unison.
" It was worth it." he said with little stars around his head. ( hehe I wanted to say that)
" Actually, I just came to introduce you to the newest creation." Kagura laughed because she still hasn't said 'Her' name yet. ( can you tell she is a bit jealous?)
All eyes then turned to Makoto. She fought the urge to figgit where she stood. She wasn't used to so much attention and she could already feel their hate for her.
" Ha! He doesn't look like much." Inuyasha stated.
" You are a fool half-breed. Have you not looked properly? Open your eyes. This person beside me is not a man, but a woman."
To make sure that what she said was true she flipped back one side of the cloak Makoto was wearing. Showing them that she indeed was a woman. They then saw that 'it' was actually a woman not man. She had a black and blood red fighting kimono on with a silver hooded cape and mask on. Makoto thought it best to tap into their thoughts for a bit to see what they think. ( I will put their name before their thought.)
Miroku: ' She is very powerful, I can feel it coming off of her in waves. She could indeed defeat Naraku. She doesn't want us to see her but why? Is she ugly? Why doesn't she want us to see her face?'
Inuyasha: ' Feh, she is too afraid to speak for herself and hides from everyone. Maybe she is to stupid to talk.'
Sango: ' I wonder what she looks like under the cape and mask?'
Kagome: ' Will there be a fight? I feel great power from this one and she doesn't even have any of the shards Naraku has.'
Shippou: ' Mommy! Man, that lady scares me. She is really powerful and she has magic around her.'
That comment threw Makoto off. A human woman having a youkai kit for a son? Makoto kept getting thoughts about Sango and her rear end from the monk. She got one very very detailed thought right then and just shut off her mind reading ability as fast as she could. She didn't even want to know.
" Can she speak or is she to stupid?" Inuyasha asked with a slight sneer.
" Yes, I can speak, Inuyasha. I only do so when I have something to say." came the breathy reply.
They stood in shock. They couldn't believe that a sweet and innocent voice could come out of something so evil. Now that they have heard her voice, they really wanted to know what she looked like. Did her voice match her looks or was it covering up for something. Was she really ugly, plain or beautiful?
" Will you show yourself to us?" asked Miroku.
" Why should I? My looks are not important." Makoto said.
" Because we wanna know what our enemy looks like." yelled Inuyasha.
" Inuyasha! I am not your enemy yet. I have done you no harm, so how does that make me your enemy?" Makoto stated.
Inuyasha stared at her. He couldn't believe she just said that. Didn't she realize that she is the enemy just because Naraku created her. It doesn't matter if she hasn't done anything wrong, she will eventually.
" You are apart of Naraku, and Naraku is out enemy." Sango said.
" I might be apart of hiim, but I have still done no wrong by you. I did not ask to be created." Makoto said sadly.
" Shut your trap, Makoto. You stay out of this." Kagura said.
Makoto bowed her had and steped back. She then looked around for a place to stand, safely out of the way. She backed up into the trees. Everyone was unaware that eyes were watching them. Kagura took this time to take out her fan and spread it wide. Makoto tapped into everyones thoughts to see what they were thinking this time.( Miroku might be censored lmao)
Kagura: ' It's time to play, now lets see what they have. Muahahahahaha.'
Inuyasha: ' Damn, this bitch is getting old. I am tired of this. I will show her.'
Kagome: ' I hope Inuyasha doesn't get hurt. I don't know about this other woman. I suppose she is another demon like Kagura.'
Sango: ' Why isn't that other woman fighting? Why is she just standing around doing nothing? What is she supposed to be doing?'
Shippou: ' I am going to go hide somewhere safe. I know that is what Kagome would want me to do.'
Miroku: ' Hmm, I wonder what Sango would look like naked, hehe better yet I wonder how she would look........
' Okay, thats enough of that.' Makoto thought quickly cutting off his line of thought.
Kagura did her ' Dance of Blades', and just as she was about ready to do it again, Makoto called to her and told her that what she was going is enough. Kagura thought it best not to go against her right now because Makoto was still in favor with Naraku. Kagura started to pout though but stopped imediately when she saw a flash of silver ice from under Makoto's hood. Unfortunately everyone else saw this also and got curious. Everyone started to get closer little by little. They were hoping to catch a glimps under the hood and mask of Makoto. Maybe she isn't as bad as they thought she was. She stoped Kagura from doing another attack on Inuyasha, so maybe they still have hope yet of defeating Naraku.
" Show yourself, Makoto!" Inuyasha said remembering the name Kagura had called her companion.
" Nice ears, Inuyasha." Makoto stated.
Everyone stired and listened intently. Kagome thought that Makoto's name was really ironic. Seeing how she is an evil incarnate, her name is anything but evil. Maybe her name gives her a tiny spark of good, but we will never know... will we?
" Fine, I will show you my features." she said pulling down her hood and taking off her mask in one clean stroke. She then tapped into everyones thoughts and all she could hear was a chorus of ' WOW's!'
Just then everyone felt the disturbence of two beings aproaching quickly. You could tell that they were heading this way.
Naraku's POV at his castle
Naraku was looking in the mirror Kanna was holding, watching as everything took place. He was proud of Makoto for drawing in the pathetic fools. She is doing her job and she doesn't even realize this will play into my hands. She is the most alluring demoness I have ever seen. No doubt Inuyasha will be drawn to her. Just then he noticed the approach of the two beings he wished would not come anywhere near his new creation. She was still new to the world and therefore a little gullible. Two misionaries for Lord Sesshoumaru were closing in fast. Let us see how Makoto deals with these two. No one even notices the dark shadow lurking in the background. Makoto should see this soon.
Okay thats it for this chapter. Let me know what you think. I have to warn you. I will be moving soon, and therefore I might not have a computer for a very very long time. I might still have one but that is unknown as of now. Sorry to my readers, there is only one way for me to convience the person I am moving in with to keep his pc. And that would be... my devotion to my fans but as of now I barely have any. So please this is very important and if you really wish for me to continue, I NEED REVIEWERS!!! THIS IS SERIOUS! You know what to do. Loves to Icy, and Ace.
Golden-Eyed-Girl
Ja Ne!