InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ The First Sunset ( Chapter 9 )
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By: GoldenEyedGirl 
What happens on the first day they are to meet and discuss things? what goes wrong?
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.9K | Visits: 172 | Status: Work In Progress
What happens on the first day they are to meet and discuss things? what goes wrong?
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.9K | Visits: 172 | Status: Work In Progress
Hey ya'll back again..... I am going to be moving soon so I won't be able to update like I have been, sorry and all.... its not actually like anyone reads my stories anyway lmao... But ya know.. oh well.. on with the story.
Disclaimer: Nope don't own it.. duh.
Warning: There is a mild Lemon ahead..... I will mark where it begins and ends.
Chapter Eight: The First Sunset
Naraku sat in his bedroom contiplating the recent events of the castle. He started to think about Sakuya, the newest member staying in the castle. She had a cheery spirit, and to be honest, it annoyed the hell out of him, but on the other hand it kinda made him want to smile. There was something about her that made him want to actually be nice to her. She would be staying here, for how long, he didn't know.
Naraku got up from his sitting posistion and got dressed. He would go see Makoto this morning and ask her about her little chat with the arrogent Demon Lord. She better not betray him. He would be severly pissed. He would have to find out soon. He will have to make a plan to make sure she stays with him, and not go and betray him.
' She better know where her loyalty lies. I will force her if I have to but she will stay here and be my war toy. She will be the one that gets me everything I wish. She will befriend the half-breed and his gang, then steal the shards for me when they least expect it.' As Naraku finished that thought he laughed evilly.
Naraku finished dressing and steped through his door in search of Makoto. He would make sure to find out exactly what happened. He would then know what to do. Walking at his normal pace down the hallway, he took the many stairs to Makoto's chambers. Coming to her door, he knew by scent she wasn't there. He then followed that scent to the hotsprings and who he found there made his jaw drop. Well at least for a moment or two before he caught himself.
' She is more beautiful then I thought. More beautiful then Kikyou even. I never thought I would see the day when I thought someone would be better then her.' he thought as he watched the girl bathe.
" I know your there, either come in and join me , leave or state your business here. I am bathing you know." she said breathlessly.
' It is kind of exciting knowing he is watching me.' she thought.
" I have come to find Makoto. Where is she?" he asked, his eyes still glued to the woman bathing.
" She left as I got here, I believe she said she was going into her gardens." she said seriously.
" Oh, I have no idea why she wishes to keep those dreadful things here."
" Because, my lord, they are beautiful and they calm the senses."
WARNING... LEMON STARTS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
" I do believe I will take you up on your offer and join you." Naraku said smirking as he smelt her aroused state.
He slowly undressed and stepped toward the steaming water. Slipping into the honey and vanilla scented water. He took a deep breath and realized that he loved her scent. It was heady and intoxicating, if he wasn't careful he would really start liking it.
He slip deeper into the water and carefully made his way to Sakuya. Sakuya noticed this and of course allowed it to happen, she really did like him, for some unknown reason. She felt as if she could see right through the evil in him and know what he really was about. She looked over at him and started into his blood red eyes, just captured in them. He slid his arm around her and brought her close to him.
This was unlike him, being gentle and all, but he didn't want to scare her away, at least not quite yet. He bent his head to hers and captured her lips in a gentle yet demanding kiss. This was getting a little much for her and she went to move away, but two strong arms stoped her from going anywhere. He broke off the kiss and said to her....
" Uh uh, not going somewhere are we?" he asked huskily.
Hearing these words come from his sweet, sexy mouth she couldn't help but shiver with anticipation. She slowly shook her head no, with seeing that Naraku smiled lustfully. He then bent his head again but this time the kiss wasn't so gentle. It was crushing and she loved it. She couldn't believe he was here, in her bath, naked and kissing her. She moaned at the thought of what she knew would happen and she couldn't wait.
Thinking that he wasn't going fast enough for her taste, she wound her arms around his neck and pressed her naked body to his hot flesh. She then knew he wanted her as much as she wanted him. Feeling his need she increased her pressure on him and nibbled on the tongue in her mouth. Naraku feeling her do this, Naraku became more excited at the possiblity that lay before him.
He removed her arms from around his neck and folded them behind her, to were she couldn't move them. He bent his head further and started inhaling her scent of honey and vanilla with a strong hint of arousal. He then slightly nipped at her neck to were it brought a small amount of blood to the surface.
With her being a Miko, her blood had a taste to it that was addicting. It did try to purify him on contact but that small amount of pain got him going even more. He brought his head up to her ear and whispered ...
" I am going to move my hands, don't move yours from this spot or my dear you will NOT like the outcome."
She shivered again at the threat and kept still. He let his hands roam her body, every square inch. His hand stoped under the water at her womanhood and she moaned at contact. She sliped a clawed finger inside and knew then, she was a virgin. Grinning, showing his fangs, he was delighted. He slowly moved his finger to get her used to the felling. This being her first time he would try to keep some control over his demon instincts.
When he felt that she was ready he slipped another finger in to losen her up for him, he knew it was going to be a bumpy experience for her. One he knew she wouldn't forget any time soon, hopefully ever. She moaned, straining to stay still as he asked, but when he bent his head and took in a pink nipple, that was it. She lost it, she grabbed a hand full of his long, beautiful hard and shoved her body closer.
His eyes widened, he told her to stay still, his eyes started glowing a more dangerous red then before and he couldn't help but allow it to take control. He took her hands out of his hair and pinned them behind her. Her eyes widened in shock and then she realized what happened, she had moved.
She then felt his desire as it probed her entrence. Her eyes widened even more as she prepared for pain. He bent his head once more and covered open mouth, he slamed his rock hard member into her willing body. She was shocked to say the least and screamed with all her might, but will his lips over her mouth, her scream didn't get to far.
Naraku stilled so she could get comfortable and get used to him. She relaxed slowly and wrapped her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck, signalling she was ready. Him groaning and finally being able to move, rocked back and forth slowly at first, rapidly gaining speed and strength.
They both were in a state of pure pleasure. With the friction they were creating and water coming between them made the experience even more fullfilling. Both of them growling loudly as they finally climaxed together. Howling and growly could be heard throughout the castle. Pulling out of her and bringing her with him when he leaned back, he sighed and closed his eyes to rest. Noticing she was already sleeping on his chest.
Bringing them both out of the water, dried off and dressed, he took her to his room and left to find Makoto.
End of Lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makoto was seated on her normal bench, looking at the cool pond which lay ahead of her. Her thoughts of the previous day. Wondering what she should do, but she wasn't in so much deep thought that she didn't hear and feel Naraku approaching her. She stood and turned to her lord and master and bowed.
" Master Naraku, what do I owe this pleasure?"
" Now, now. We need not have such formalities, You by far are my best creation. I have come so that you could tell me what it is you and the TaiYoukai of the West had a little chat about." he said sneering thinking about Sesshoumaru.
" Oh, well I believe he was trying to gage my power, but I did control it. I concealed my true nature and my true power. He might have an idea that I am powerful but does not know its extent."
" Good girl, you have done well for me." he said walking to her and patting her head like a small child.
" Yes, master Naraku." she said bowing again.
Taking in his scent, she knew what all the noise was about a few minutes ago.
' Well at least he won't come to me to find amusement.' she thought. ' I wonder what he is thinking. I know I can read him without him knowing.' she thought as she taped into his thoughts.
Naraku: ' Gods, that little tryst I just had, has worn me out. She was a good lay I must say. She is beautiful beyond compare. Well Makoto and her are both beautiful but I am more attracted to Sakuya. She could make a fine mate.' at that thought his eyes widened fractionally before returning to normal.' What the hell! I need to dispose of the little slip of a girl, staying in my chambers, but not until I have had my fill of the little philly. Makoto sounded true when she spoke, but we shall see. I will have Kagura follow her for the next couple of days. This will truely prove interesting.'
" My lord, Master Naraku, If I may ask. How is Sakuya doing? She was supposed to bathe and come join me in the gardens but never made it." Makoto stated cutting off from his thoughts.
" She exausted herself and is in bed, sleeping." was his simple answer.
" Sorry for asking, my lord." she said bowing her head.
Naraku turned on his heal and left her where she stood. Her eyes lowered into slits at remembering what Naraku was going to do. Have Kagura follow her.
' I don't think so, she will not be able to follow me, or at least she will think she is following me when it will just be a copy of me. I know I can do it.' she thought slowly, to make sure she had everything figured out.
' It will be dusk soon.' she thought as she proceaded to make an exact copy of herself.
She stood and looked at her copy. She then turned and comanded her cloud to come to her. She took off, to the place they were to meet. Heading toward the Western Lands by the healing spring. Before she was out of range she tapped into Kagura's thoughts.
Kagura: ' So, that bastard Naraku wishes me to follow that bitch, Makoto. Find and dandy with me. As long as she stays away from Sesshoumaru.'
Makoto hmphed and speed away. Finding the clearing not long after she touched down. Looking around her surroundings and scanning to make sure she was alone, which she was. She then errected a powerful barrier that would only allow Sesshoumaru to pass through. She felt herself relax and wait for Lord Sesshoumaru to show up.
She then felt a powerful precence and knew it was him. Lord Sesshoumaru had shown up early. She looked to the skies and saw nothing, so she stared at where the aura was and out stepped Sesshoumaru in all his glory. Silver hair flowing and tail flapping in the wind. ( I know what it is, but I want it as a tail for my story)
She stood slowly and bowed to him making a welcome. Lord Sesshoumaru saw this and inclined his head slightly showing he saw her and understood. She walked to were he had stopped and looked up into his beautiful amber eyes. They were cold, yes, but beautiful none the less.
" Have you came to a decision?" he asked coldly.
" I have been thinking long and hard, there have been some complications, Naraku has ordered the wind witch, Kagura to follow my every move."
At this he looked around and finally felt the strong barrier errected around them. He looked to her and raised a perfectly shaped eyebrow. Seeing this she told him about her copy and about the barrier she had errected as soon as she arrived.
It only allowed him in because she had set it that way. He looked at her and she thought she had saw amusement and something else in his eyes. It was gone to quick for her to really have any idea what it was. She was built for war and was uncomfortable and uncertain with emotions.
" I have to say, I am impressed. You were early and errected a powerful barrier."
" Thank you, Lord Sesshoumaru of the Western Lands." she said bowing.
" Stop the pleasantries, they don't suit you." he stated.
She looked at him with malice and amusement.
" Is that right, Lord Sesshoumaru?"
" Why, yes it is. This Sesshoumaru is never wrong."
" Is that so? Well maybe one of these days I will be able to prove you wrong."
" Unlikely." he stated flatly.
' What is it about her?'
" Lord Sesshoumaru, are you ok? You looked as if you were deep in thought."
" Bitch!" he said and lunged for her.
Seeing this she quickly moved out of the way. She turned and looked at him. He had THAT look in his eyes again. She slowly backed away trying to reason with him. Calling his name and trying to get him to go back to normal. The only thing he could say was ' Run'. This startling her, she had never delt with this yet. She had been trained for it yes, but nothing compared to reality.
Seeing the look in his eyes, she new that standing still and kissing him again would not and I repeat NOT work this time. She tried to think quickly but he lunged at her again. She moved to the side and he lunged again. She knew only one possiblity, she turned and ran as fast as she could. She knew not which way she was going but she had to get away from him. There was something about him that she knew would not calm until he got ahold of her.
She was clearly very far ahead of him and slowly to take some deep breaths and think some more when she heard it. There was a loud growl right behind her. She didn't dare turn, instead she just ran again, but the bad part is, he caught her in his talons and threw her to the ground. Lowering himself down to her level, he pinned her and stated in only the language of Inu-Youkai...
:: I win! ::
Her eyes widened at what he was about to do................
Okay thats it for now... hope you like.... lemme know.... Loves to Icy, Ace, and Sesshy's koi.
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!
Disclaimer: Nope don't own it.. duh.
Warning: There is a mild Lemon ahead..... I will mark where it begins and ends.
Chapter Eight: The First Sunset
Naraku sat in his bedroom contiplating the recent events of the castle. He started to think about Sakuya, the newest member staying in the castle. She had a cheery spirit, and to be honest, it annoyed the hell out of him, but on the other hand it kinda made him want to smile. There was something about her that made him want to actually be nice to her. She would be staying here, for how long, he didn't know.
Naraku got up from his sitting posistion and got dressed. He would go see Makoto this morning and ask her about her little chat with the arrogent Demon Lord. She better not betray him. He would be severly pissed. He would have to find out soon. He will have to make a plan to make sure she stays with him, and not go and betray him.
' She better know where her loyalty lies. I will force her if I have to but she will stay here and be my war toy. She will be the one that gets me everything I wish. She will befriend the half-breed and his gang, then steal the shards for me when they least expect it.' As Naraku finished that thought he laughed evilly.
Naraku finished dressing and steped through his door in search of Makoto. He would make sure to find out exactly what happened. He would then know what to do. Walking at his normal pace down the hallway, he took the many stairs to Makoto's chambers. Coming to her door, he knew by scent she wasn't there. He then followed that scent to the hotsprings and who he found there made his jaw drop. Well at least for a moment or two before he caught himself.
' She is more beautiful then I thought. More beautiful then Kikyou even. I never thought I would see the day when I thought someone would be better then her.' he thought as he watched the girl bathe.
" I know your there, either come in and join me , leave or state your business here. I am bathing you know." she said breathlessly.
' It is kind of exciting knowing he is watching me.' she thought.
" I have come to find Makoto. Where is she?" he asked, his eyes still glued to the woman bathing.
" She left as I got here, I believe she said she was going into her gardens." she said seriously.
" Oh, I have no idea why she wishes to keep those dreadful things here."
" Because, my lord, they are beautiful and they calm the senses."
WARNING... LEMON STARTS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
" I do believe I will take you up on your offer and join you." Naraku said smirking as he smelt her aroused state.
He slowly undressed and stepped toward the steaming water. Slipping into the honey and vanilla scented water. He took a deep breath and realized that he loved her scent. It was heady and intoxicating, if he wasn't careful he would really start liking it.
He slip deeper into the water and carefully made his way to Sakuya. Sakuya noticed this and of course allowed it to happen, she really did like him, for some unknown reason. She felt as if she could see right through the evil in him and know what he really was about. She looked over at him and started into his blood red eyes, just captured in them. He slid his arm around her and brought her close to him.
This was unlike him, being gentle and all, but he didn't want to scare her away, at least not quite yet. He bent his head to hers and captured her lips in a gentle yet demanding kiss. This was getting a little much for her and she went to move away, but two strong arms stoped her from going anywhere. He broke off the kiss and said to her....
" Uh uh, not going somewhere are we?" he asked huskily.
Hearing these words come from his sweet, sexy mouth she couldn't help but shiver with anticipation. She slowly shook her head no, with seeing that Naraku smiled lustfully. He then bent his head again but this time the kiss wasn't so gentle. It was crushing and she loved it. She couldn't believe he was here, in her bath, naked and kissing her. She moaned at the thought of what she knew would happen and she couldn't wait.
Thinking that he wasn't going fast enough for her taste, she wound her arms around his neck and pressed her naked body to his hot flesh. She then knew he wanted her as much as she wanted him. Feeling his need she increased her pressure on him and nibbled on the tongue in her mouth. Naraku feeling her do this, Naraku became more excited at the possiblity that lay before him.
He removed her arms from around his neck and folded them behind her, to were she couldn't move them. He bent his head further and started inhaling her scent of honey and vanilla with a strong hint of arousal. He then slightly nipped at her neck to were it brought a small amount of blood to the surface.
With her being a Miko, her blood had a taste to it that was addicting. It did try to purify him on contact but that small amount of pain got him going even more. He brought his head up to her ear and whispered ...
" I am going to move my hands, don't move yours from this spot or my dear you will NOT like the outcome."
She shivered again at the threat and kept still. He let his hands roam her body, every square inch. His hand stoped under the water at her womanhood and she moaned at contact. She sliped a clawed finger inside and knew then, she was a virgin. Grinning, showing his fangs, he was delighted. He slowly moved his finger to get her used to the felling. This being her first time he would try to keep some control over his demon instincts.
When he felt that she was ready he slipped another finger in to losen her up for him, he knew it was going to be a bumpy experience for her. One he knew she wouldn't forget any time soon, hopefully ever. She moaned, straining to stay still as he asked, but when he bent his head and took in a pink nipple, that was it. She lost it, she grabbed a hand full of his long, beautiful hard and shoved her body closer.
His eyes widened, he told her to stay still, his eyes started glowing a more dangerous red then before and he couldn't help but allow it to take control. He took her hands out of his hair and pinned them behind her. Her eyes widened in shock and then she realized what happened, she had moved.
She then felt his desire as it probed her entrence. Her eyes widened even more as she prepared for pain. He bent his head once more and covered open mouth, he slamed his rock hard member into her willing body. She was shocked to say the least and screamed with all her might, but will his lips over her mouth, her scream didn't get to far.
Naraku stilled so she could get comfortable and get used to him. She relaxed slowly and wrapped her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck, signalling she was ready. Him groaning and finally being able to move, rocked back and forth slowly at first, rapidly gaining speed and strength.
They both were in a state of pure pleasure. With the friction they were creating and water coming between them made the experience even more fullfilling. Both of them growling loudly as they finally climaxed together. Howling and growly could be heard throughout the castle. Pulling out of her and bringing her with him when he leaned back, he sighed and closed his eyes to rest. Noticing she was already sleeping on his chest.
Bringing them both out of the water, dried off and dressed, he took her to his room and left to find Makoto.
End of Lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makoto was seated on her normal bench, looking at the cool pond which lay ahead of her. Her thoughts of the previous day. Wondering what she should do, but she wasn't in so much deep thought that she didn't hear and feel Naraku approaching her. She stood and turned to her lord and master and bowed.
" Master Naraku, what do I owe this pleasure?"
" Now, now. We need not have such formalities, You by far are my best creation. I have come so that you could tell me what it is you and the TaiYoukai of the West had a little chat about." he said sneering thinking about Sesshoumaru.
" Oh, well I believe he was trying to gage my power, but I did control it. I concealed my true nature and my true power. He might have an idea that I am powerful but does not know its extent."
" Good girl, you have done well for me." he said walking to her and patting her head like a small child.
" Yes, master Naraku." she said bowing again.
Taking in his scent, she knew what all the noise was about a few minutes ago.
' Well at least he won't come to me to find amusement.' she thought. ' I wonder what he is thinking. I know I can read him without him knowing.' she thought as she taped into his thoughts.
Naraku: ' Gods, that little tryst I just had, has worn me out. She was a good lay I must say. She is beautiful beyond compare. Well Makoto and her are both beautiful but I am more attracted to Sakuya. She could make a fine mate.' at that thought his eyes widened fractionally before returning to normal.' What the hell! I need to dispose of the little slip of a girl, staying in my chambers, but not until I have had my fill of the little philly. Makoto sounded true when she spoke, but we shall see. I will have Kagura follow her for the next couple of days. This will truely prove interesting.'
" My lord, Master Naraku, If I may ask. How is Sakuya doing? She was supposed to bathe and come join me in the gardens but never made it." Makoto stated cutting off from his thoughts.
" She exausted herself and is in bed, sleeping." was his simple answer.
" Sorry for asking, my lord." she said bowing her head.
Naraku turned on his heal and left her where she stood. Her eyes lowered into slits at remembering what Naraku was going to do. Have Kagura follow her.
' I don't think so, she will not be able to follow me, or at least she will think she is following me when it will just be a copy of me. I know I can do it.' she thought slowly, to make sure she had everything figured out.
' It will be dusk soon.' she thought as she proceaded to make an exact copy of herself.
She stood and looked at her copy. She then turned and comanded her cloud to come to her. She took off, to the place they were to meet. Heading toward the Western Lands by the healing spring. Before she was out of range she tapped into Kagura's thoughts.
Kagura: ' So, that bastard Naraku wishes me to follow that bitch, Makoto. Find and dandy with me. As long as she stays away from Sesshoumaru.'
Makoto hmphed and speed away. Finding the clearing not long after she touched down. Looking around her surroundings and scanning to make sure she was alone, which she was. She then errected a powerful barrier that would only allow Sesshoumaru to pass through. She felt herself relax and wait for Lord Sesshoumaru to show up.
She then felt a powerful precence and knew it was him. Lord Sesshoumaru had shown up early. She looked to the skies and saw nothing, so she stared at where the aura was and out stepped Sesshoumaru in all his glory. Silver hair flowing and tail flapping in the wind. ( I know what it is, but I want it as a tail for my story)
She stood slowly and bowed to him making a welcome. Lord Sesshoumaru saw this and inclined his head slightly showing he saw her and understood. She walked to were he had stopped and looked up into his beautiful amber eyes. They were cold, yes, but beautiful none the less.
" Have you came to a decision?" he asked coldly.
" I have been thinking long and hard, there have been some complications, Naraku has ordered the wind witch, Kagura to follow my every move."
At this he looked around and finally felt the strong barrier errected around them. He looked to her and raised a perfectly shaped eyebrow. Seeing this she told him about her copy and about the barrier she had errected as soon as she arrived.
It only allowed him in because she had set it that way. He looked at her and she thought she had saw amusement and something else in his eyes. It was gone to quick for her to really have any idea what it was. She was built for war and was uncomfortable and uncertain with emotions.
" I have to say, I am impressed. You were early and errected a powerful barrier."
" Thank you, Lord Sesshoumaru of the Western Lands." she said bowing.
" Stop the pleasantries, they don't suit you." he stated.
She looked at him with malice and amusement.
" Is that right, Lord Sesshoumaru?"
" Why, yes it is. This Sesshoumaru is never wrong."
" Is that so? Well maybe one of these days I will be able to prove you wrong."
" Unlikely." he stated flatly.
' What is it about her?'
" Lord Sesshoumaru, are you ok? You looked as if you were deep in thought."
" Bitch!" he said and lunged for her.
Seeing this she quickly moved out of the way. She turned and looked at him. He had THAT look in his eyes again. She slowly backed away trying to reason with him. Calling his name and trying to get him to go back to normal. The only thing he could say was ' Run'. This startling her, she had never delt with this yet. She had been trained for it yes, but nothing compared to reality.
Seeing the look in his eyes, she new that standing still and kissing him again would not and I repeat NOT work this time. She tried to think quickly but he lunged at her again. She moved to the side and he lunged again. She knew only one possiblity, she turned and ran as fast as she could. She knew not which way she was going but she had to get away from him. There was something about him that she knew would not calm until he got ahold of her.
She was clearly very far ahead of him and slowly to take some deep breaths and think some more when she heard it. There was a loud growl right behind her. She didn't dare turn, instead she just ran again, but the bad part is, he caught her in his talons and threw her to the ground. Lowering himself down to her level, he pinned her and stated in only the language of Inu-Youkai...
:: I win! ::
Her eyes widened at what he was about to do................
Okay thats it for now... hope you like.... lemme know.... Loves to Icy, Ace, and Sesshy's koi.
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!