InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ Sesshoumaru's Demand and Makoto's Mistake ( Chapter 10 )
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By: GoldenEyedGirl 
Sesshoumaru demands Makoto to do something. Will she do it and what was her mistake?
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 173 | Status: Work In Progress
Sesshoumaru demands Makoto to do something. Will she do it and what was her mistake?
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 173 | Status: Work In Progress
Hey everyone, I am a bit down that hardly anyone is reviewing. No reviews is bad for the authors ego here. I feel as if I am going no where with this story and going no where fast. I will complete this story though. I promised friends I would, but that doesn't mean the rest of this will be any good.
I will try my best though, for my friends sake and also if there actually anymore readers who just sit on their butt and read with no feedback. NO OFFENCE TO ANYONE... I am just a lil down because no one is really reviewing. I understand because school and all but the Three reviewers who have been with me throughout all of this have school also. I just don't understand. If you have time to read this story, why not take two more seconds to tell me what you think? Its not hard you know.
I am truely sorry for my ranting and raving but I am sure all you authors out there who read this understand my sentiments exactly. It really is hard to keep the story good when there are so few people who tell me what they think. I would love to thank those three people who have kept me going. Thank you IcyAsh, drk-bandit14 and Sesshy's koi. Thanks to you three I have kept my story going. Without you there would be no story. I suppose thats enough ranting for now. On with the show. Loves to all.
Disclaimer: I don't own it, If I did I wouldn't be here, now would I?
Chapter Nine: Sesshoumaru's Demand and Makoto's Mistake
Her eyes widened about what he was about to do. Sesshoumaru's head bent to her neck, his fangs elongating. She closed her eyes for the pain that was sure to come. Her fear built up by the second, her energy gathered around her and all of a sudden Sesshoumaru's weight was gone. She opened her eyes to find Sesshoumaru about twenty feet away from her.
She looked like a mess. She stood and went to him slowly as to make sure his inner beast was calmed. She noticed that he was still alive and breathing, she let out the breath she didn't know she had been holding. She took a tentive step forward but stoped suddenly when Sesshoumaru rasped out....
" Stop!"
She gazed at the fallen lord and watched him warily as he stood. He brushed off his clothing and turned to her. Amazing eyes back to their normal honey gold. She stood rigid as he came toward her. At this very moment she felt like prey being stalked by the preditor. She took a step back without realizing it.
He looked into her eyes and realized they were now a beautiful deep saphire blue. Weren't they silver? Then he thought that they must change with her emotion, maybe that is the way to tell what she is feeling. He stopped when he reached her.
His hands shot out at an amazing speed and gripped her shoulders. He stared into her eyes once more and realized they had again changed color. They were the color of the cresent moon that adorned his forehead.
" You will come with me." he said as he started to form his cloud.
" I will NOT go with you." she said as he brought her closer to him.
" You will until I can figure out what it is about you that does this to me." he said through cleenched teeth.
She let it drop at that. She knew that it would be no good to fight. Yes, she was made for it but she did not know her capture good enough and had never seen his fighting style, if she knew all this she was sure she would be able to observe and finally best him at it.
They flew over the tree tops at an alarming rate, she knew where they were going but she did not know what would become of her.
' What did he mean about me doing something to him. I have done nothing to that arse-rag of a Lord. Maybe I can get more from his thoughts.'
Sesshoumaru: ' Once we get back to the castle I will try my theory, I will finally find out if she is THE one. She better have an answer for me if it is either true or false. I have to find out why I react to her like this. There has to be some reason. Jaken, he would know. He should know, and if he does not, he will find the answer.'
She looked at him then and saw he was deep in thought. She decided not to talk to him them, because it was still fresh in her mind what had happened the last time she did. She gazed at his porcelien like face. He had a small frown on his brow. The only emotion to ever actually show on his face without him knowing.
Just then he looked at her and she looked away quickly. Causing a desturbence in the weight. She was about to form her cloud and fly herself but before she could, Sesshoumaru held her more tightly and brought her closer still. At this close contact between them Makoto's breath hitched and she tensed.
He knew her reaction was instant. He looked down at her and saw that she looked up at him with wide, suprised eyes, and he then knew that she had felt the jolt of electricity that had seemed to pass through them both. He leaned down to her ear and said....
" I will not bite, you know."
' At least not yet.' was his thought but he thought it best not to repeat the last of it.
She then looked at him with a shocked expression and then he remembered about her mind reading talent. He berated himself for not remembering sooner. He shook his head trying to dislogde thoughts of her beneath him.
She of course knew where his thoughts were going and quickly disengaged from his mind. She blushed knowing what he was thinking still because his scent became a little muskier. He did try to hide it well but still failed miserably. Him sensing her gaining heat, looked down at her to see her blushing face.
She tried to hide her face from him but he took a clawed finger and brought it to her face. Lifting her face to meet his eyes, he raised a brow in question. She just shook her head and said that they were coming up to his castle.
Sesshoumaru passed over the gates and landed softly in the court yard. The cloud that they were on completely vanished but still he held her tight. She looked up to him and said that he could let go now. Which he only responded to by raising his famous brow and losened his grip, not totally letting go.
Makoto's thoughts.........
' Why is he doing this? I am just a creation. I do not understand why he wishes me here. He won't let go either which is suprising. He didn't even get mad at me when I blasted him across the field. What am I to do? What will Naraku do when he finds that I am no longer in the castle. I wonder what Kanna knows that we all don't? Will she help me? Is Sesshoumaru a friend or foe? Will her hurt me? What will happen now that I am here? What did he mean when he thought THE one? I am so confused, and what theory is he going on about?' all these questions and more were going through her head.
She looked at her surroundings now, she looked at everything in awe. She couldn't believe she was here, and she thought that Naraku's palace was pretty. This was beyond words. It was absolutely gorgeous, she will be staying here? She couldn't believe her luck but also at the same time she thought of it as a curse. What was with these demons. I mean come on. Why on earth would he want her here.
She looked up to him and was about to ask him that same question but was interupted by a sqeeky.....
" Lord Sesshoumaru, you have came back, and so soon! That awful child has tormented me, mi lord. That dirty, smelly, ungrateful, no goo...."
Sesshoumaru got tired of hearing those words about his ward. He kicked Jaken all the way to the other side of the court yard. Makoto almost giggled at this sight but quickly stiffled it. Her face regaining its silky stone look. Sesshoumaru looked to her and made the gesture for her to follow him into the castle.
He looked behind him to see how she was coming along and noticed that she would pause every now and then to take in her surroundings.
" Impressed are you?" he said with slight amusement in his voice.
" Yes, My Lord, very." she stated distractedly.
' It is very beautiful here, maybe now that we are somewhat alone, I can ask him why he brought me here.'
" Lord Sesshoumaru, why did you bring me here to stay with you?" she asked softly walking behind him.
" I have to know why I react to you the way I do, What you did earlier was a big mistake. I take it you ran, instead of standing still."
" I had no choice.... I could feel it in your aura, nothing would have stoped you." she said looking squarly into his eyes.
Normal POV
Sesshoumaru thought on this for a moment or two, looking down into her eyes. They were silver once again with the small specks of blue and black. He griped her by her upper arm and dragged her down the halls.
" None-the-less, We are going to find out what it is about you that compails me to mark you as my mate."
All she could do was star at him and try to think of something to say. She stands alittle straighter and walks a little more rigid and asks him....
" Why would you want to mark an abomination like me?"
" Do you really want to know the answer to that question. I am sure you could read my mind and figure it out." he said giving her his arward winning, sexy, famous smile of his.
Hey Well thats it.... Hope you like... lemme know.... kk... bye... REVIEW... ITS THE LITTLE BUTTON AT THE BOTTOM LEFT HAND SIDE OF THE SCREEN!!! PUSH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GoldenEyedGirl
Ja Ne!
I will try my best though, for my friends sake and also if there actually anymore readers who just sit on their butt and read with no feedback. NO OFFENCE TO ANYONE... I am just a lil down because no one is really reviewing. I understand because school and all but the Three reviewers who have been with me throughout all of this have school also. I just don't understand. If you have time to read this story, why not take two more seconds to tell me what you think? Its not hard you know.
I am truely sorry for my ranting and raving but I am sure all you authors out there who read this understand my sentiments exactly. It really is hard to keep the story good when there are so few people who tell me what they think. I would love to thank those three people who have kept me going. Thank you IcyAsh, drk-bandit14 and Sesshy's koi. Thanks to you three I have kept my story going. Without you there would be no story. I suppose thats enough ranting for now. On with the show. Loves to all.
Disclaimer: I don't own it, If I did I wouldn't be here, now would I?
Chapter Nine: Sesshoumaru's Demand and Makoto's Mistake
Her eyes widened about what he was about to do. Sesshoumaru's head bent to her neck, his fangs elongating. She closed her eyes for the pain that was sure to come. Her fear built up by the second, her energy gathered around her and all of a sudden Sesshoumaru's weight was gone. She opened her eyes to find Sesshoumaru about twenty feet away from her.
She looked like a mess. She stood and went to him slowly as to make sure his inner beast was calmed. She noticed that he was still alive and breathing, she let out the breath she didn't know she had been holding. She took a tentive step forward but stoped suddenly when Sesshoumaru rasped out....
" Stop!"
She gazed at the fallen lord and watched him warily as he stood. He brushed off his clothing and turned to her. Amazing eyes back to their normal honey gold. She stood rigid as he came toward her. At this very moment she felt like prey being stalked by the preditor. She took a step back without realizing it.
He looked into her eyes and realized they were now a beautiful deep saphire blue. Weren't they silver? Then he thought that they must change with her emotion, maybe that is the way to tell what she is feeling. He stopped when he reached her.
His hands shot out at an amazing speed and gripped her shoulders. He stared into her eyes once more and realized they had again changed color. They were the color of the cresent moon that adorned his forehead.
" You will come with me." he said as he started to form his cloud.
" I will NOT go with you." she said as he brought her closer to him.
" You will until I can figure out what it is about you that does this to me." he said through cleenched teeth.
She let it drop at that. She knew that it would be no good to fight. Yes, she was made for it but she did not know her capture good enough and had never seen his fighting style, if she knew all this she was sure she would be able to observe and finally best him at it.
They flew over the tree tops at an alarming rate, she knew where they were going but she did not know what would become of her.
' What did he mean about me doing something to him. I have done nothing to that arse-rag of a Lord. Maybe I can get more from his thoughts.'
Sesshoumaru: ' Once we get back to the castle I will try my theory, I will finally find out if she is THE one. She better have an answer for me if it is either true or false. I have to find out why I react to her like this. There has to be some reason. Jaken, he would know. He should know, and if he does not, he will find the answer.'
She looked at him then and saw he was deep in thought. She decided not to talk to him them, because it was still fresh in her mind what had happened the last time she did. She gazed at his porcelien like face. He had a small frown on his brow. The only emotion to ever actually show on his face without him knowing.
Just then he looked at her and she looked away quickly. Causing a desturbence in the weight. She was about to form her cloud and fly herself but before she could, Sesshoumaru held her more tightly and brought her closer still. At this close contact between them Makoto's breath hitched and she tensed.
He knew her reaction was instant. He looked down at her and saw that she looked up at him with wide, suprised eyes, and he then knew that she had felt the jolt of electricity that had seemed to pass through them both. He leaned down to her ear and said....
" I will not bite, you know."
' At least not yet.' was his thought but he thought it best not to repeat the last of it.
She then looked at him with a shocked expression and then he remembered about her mind reading talent. He berated himself for not remembering sooner. He shook his head trying to dislogde thoughts of her beneath him.
She of course knew where his thoughts were going and quickly disengaged from his mind. She blushed knowing what he was thinking still because his scent became a little muskier. He did try to hide it well but still failed miserably. Him sensing her gaining heat, looked down at her to see her blushing face.
She tried to hide her face from him but he took a clawed finger and brought it to her face. Lifting her face to meet his eyes, he raised a brow in question. She just shook her head and said that they were coming up to his castle.
Sesshoumaru passed over the gates and landed softly in the court yard. The cloud that they were on completely vanished but still he held her tight. She looked up to him and said that he could let go now. Which he only responded to by raising his famous brow and losened his grip, not totally letting go.
Makoto's thoughts.........
' Why is he doing this? I am just a creation. I do not understand why he wishes me here. He won't let go either which is suprising. He didn't even get mad at me when I blasted him across the field. What am I to do? What will Naraku do when he finds that I am no longer in the castle. I wonder what Kanna knows that we all don't? Will she help me? Is Sesshoumaru a friend or foe? Will her hurt me? What will happen now that I am here? What did he mean when he thought THE one? I am so confused, and what theory is he going on about?' all these questions and more were going through her head.
She looked at her surroundings now, she looked at everything in awe. She couldn't believe she was here, and she thought that Naraku's palace was pretty. This was beyond words. It was absolutely gorgeous, she will be staying here? She couldn't believe her luck but also at the same time she thought of it as a curse. What was with these demons. I mean come on. Why on earth would he want her here.
She looked up to him and was about to ask him that same question but was interupted by a sqeeky.....
" Lord Sesshoumaru, you have came back, and so soon! That awful child has tormented me, mi lord. That dirty, smelly, ungrateful, no goo...."
Sesshoumaru got tired of hearing those words about his ward. He kicked Jaken all the way to the other side of the court yard. Makoto almost giggled at this sight but quickly stiffled it. Her face regaining its silky stone look. Sesshoumaru looked to her and made the gesture for her to follow him into the castle.
He looked behind him to see how she was coming along and noticed that she would pause every now and then to take in her surroundings.
" Impressed are you?" he said with slight amusement in his voice.
" Yes, My Lord, very." she stated distractedly.
' It is very beautiful here, maybe now that we are somewhat alone, I can ask him why he brought me here.'
" Lord Sesshoumaru, why did you bring me here to stay with you?" she asked softly walking behind him.
" I have to know why I react to you the way I do, What you did earlier was a big mistake. I take it you ran, instead of standing still."
" I had no choice.... I could feel it in your aura, nothing would have stoped you." she said looking squarly into his eyes.
Normal POV
Sesshoumaru thought on this for a moment or two, looking down into her eyes. They were silver once again with the small specks of blue and black. He griped her by her upper arm and dragged her down the halls.
" None-the-less, We are going to find out what it is about you that compails me to mark you as my mate."
All she could do was star at him and try to think of something to say. She stands alittle straighter and walks a little more rigid and asks him....
" Why would you want to mark an abomination like me?"
" Do you really want to know the answer to that question. I am sure you could read my mind and figure it out." he said giving her his arward winning, sexy, famous smile of his.
Hey Well thats it.... Hope you like... lemme know.... kk... bye... REVIEW... ITS THE LITTLE BUTTON AT THE BOTTOM LEFT HAND SIDE OF THE SCREEN!!! PUSH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GoldenEyedGirl
Ja Ne!