InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ Makoto's Experience ( Chapter 11 )
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By: GoldenEyedGirl 
All I can say so that it won't be given away is... Whoops!
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 166 | Status: Work In Progress
All I can say so that it won't be given away is... Whoops!
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 166 | Status: Work In Progress
Hey ya'll... back again.. woohoo.... Ok I have had someone complain about my grammar. I am sorry if I have any mistakes but I don't check for spelling errors and such. I am sorry but I have no way to do that right now. I will truely try to fix that but right now there is nothing I can do about it. As long as you can read it and understand it does it matter? I do mean no one is perfect and they are allowed mistakes... Thank you all for your lovely reviews. I loved every single one of them. Please if you have any questions or comments or suggestions, email me or review please. On with the show I suppose..... here goes.....
Disclaimer: I don't own it... geez.
Chapter Ten: Makoto's Experience
Makoto looked up into the golden molten lava stare of Sesshoumaru. He moved towards her slowly and reached out to her with his left hand. Brushing a small lock of hair out of her face. She let out a breath she had been holding since he had made that little comment.
' Maybe this isn't such a good idea after all. I mean I don't understand him. It was just a simple question. No one would want to mark/mate something that isn't truely real, would they?' Makoto thought as she backed up further.
He was hearding her and she knew it. There was nothing she could do. She couldn't run, hide or scream. This is His territory, she had no idea where to do and what do to. She backed up some more. With every step she took back he took two more forward. He was gaining on her and she didn't like the look in his eyes. He was up to something and she would bet she would not like the outcome.
" Why look so scared, Makoto. I won't hurt you, I just wish to show you what I see." he leaned in huskily.
She shivered as he leaned in closer and took her shoulders in his hands firmly and brought her slowly to him in a soft embrace. He bent his head to her ear and told her in that sexy voice of his......
" I can show you many things, Makoto. I can show you why and how I could and would mark you. It would be very enjoyable. That I can promise you."
She fought another shiver and turned her head to see his once golden eyes turn red once more. The scent of her fear brought him in more to her. She closed her eyes and tried to calm herself. He would not hurt her, he would not claim her and he would not... and I mean absolutely would NOT mate her.
But at this moment in time she had no clue as to if that was true or not. She had no idea if he would do any of those things. Either to prove he would and could or because of this whole " I dunno why I want to mark you" bit. She felt him lean closer and nuzzle her neck, sniff her hair and finally pressed his body closer to hers.
Her back was against the wall with Sesshoumaru pressed against her body. She couldn't think striaght anymore. She had no idea what this is doing to her.
' What in the hell is happening.' she thought in a panic. ' What in the world is this feeling? Why is he doing this?'
She was affraid and he knew it. He could smell the fear in her scent. He inhaled it deeply, enjoying the scent that was Makoto. He didn't know how else to put it. Yes it was roses and berries, a new and wonderful scent but also the scent of just Makoto. There was something hidden there. Something that was not known to anyone or anything. More then likely Makoto herself didn't know.
Sesshoumaru ran his hand up her shoulder to her neck and pressed lightly where her neck and shoulder met. At the noise she made he got a little carried away. He pressed a bit harder and drew blood. He bent his head to the wound he had caused. He licked at the wound at first and then started to suck at it. Her blood was wonderful. Sweet and potent, you could taste the power in her blood. It was intoxicating and addicting.
Her wound was healing fast and Sesshoumaru didn't like it, didn't like it one bit. He wanted more, he had to have more! Not caring the concequinces he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder and ran to his room as fast as he could. He burst into his room, shut and locked the door and tossed her onto the bed.
She looked up at him with fear in her eyes, but there was also curiousity there. His eyes held blood lust in them.... He jumped up into the air and landed on Makoto. What he did next was unexpected.....
With Seiya and Eesu
" Did you feel that, my love?"
" Yes, Eesu I did. Our lord is having some difficulties."
" You know what it is?"
" It could have something to do with the other aura here."
" Don't you rememeber that aura, thats the aura of Makoto."
" Eesu, I know it. I ain't stupid, but what is she doing in the castle and so close to our lord anyway?"
" That, my dear, Seiya I have no clue how to answer. He hasn't called for us but he could be in danger."
" I see your point, lets go check it out."
They both ran hand in hand into the castle. They were in the gardens because Seiya had wanted to relax and enjoy the day. The took the many twists and turns and stoped dead in their tracks when they came to the place were Makoto and Sesshoumaru once stood, where he caused the small wound and where he let his blood lust take over.
They slowly walked in a circle around where Sesshoumaru and Makoto once stood. Eesu stoped and stood where Sesshoumaru once stood, facing the smell of Makoto's blood, he knew what had happened. He turned to Seiya and they shared a look that clearly said that they both knew that their lord went into a blood lust. They nodded and headed straight for the master chambers, knowing they had to stop it before it was too late.
As soon as they neared his chamber door they knew it was too late for they heard the one thing that they knew was coming but was hoping to stop. ( wowie.. that was a weird sentence, ne?) There was a piercing scream of pure pain. Then all was quiet, they decided to investigate. They quietly walked to the chamber door and listened to the noises that were going on.
Sounds of silk being shifted, light breathing and thier lord opening the door. He looked at Seiya first and then Eesu. They noticed the small amount of blood at the corner of his mouth. What had happened? Why was he looking so calm.
" Seiya, wait for her to wake and then take her to the springs. Eesu, you are to guard this very door. NO one is to enter or exit without my permission. When Seiya takes Makoto to the springs, you follow and guard that door. Do not let anyone see her."
He said and walked away, toward his study. Turning his head to Eesu, he gave his most trusted 'friend' a slight nod and then walked on. Thinking what a BIG mess he is in now. Eesu turned to Seiya who had just come out of the room with wide, shocked eyes.
" What happened....?"
" He..... He........"
With the Inu gang
" Inuyasha! You can't stop me damnit! I am going home." Kagome said as she ran towards the well.
" NO YOUR NOT, WENCH! I WON'T LET YOU. YOUR NOT GOIN' RIGHT NOW. YOU HAVE TO COLLECT JEWEL SHARDS FIRST, THEN GO!" Inuyasha demanded.
" Inuyasha, when are you going to learn my friend?" Mirokue smirked.
" Oh boy, we all know whats coming don't we?" Sango said with a laugh.
" Inuyasha." Kagome said sweetly, looking and Inuyasha turn to her and look at her with wide eyes.
" Yes, Kagome?" He said trying to be nice.
" Inuyasha.......... sorry.............................................. SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT..... I have to go home.. byeeeeeeeeeee" she said as she jumped into the well with flash was gone.
" I do believe, my dear Sango, that Inuyasha will never learn to not piss her off." Miroku said.
" I know, poor Kagome." Sango snickered.
Inuyasha glared up at Sango and Miroku from the Inuyasha-shaped crator Kagome had created with an Inuyasha cookie-cutter.( More like Inuyasha crator-maker. lol) Shippou of course was having a blast laughing at Inuyasha's pain.
With Naraku, Kagura and Kanna
" Kanna, tell me.... is there a way to get Makoto away from that bastard dog?"
" No, master Naraku, there is no way to get her away from him, unless you kill him or her."
" Hn, well I do believe I will have to come up with a plan to retreave our lost property."
" Master Naraku, why don't you just kill the girl and get it over with?" Kagura asked with a sneer.
" Because you idiot, we need her. She is powerful and is our tool. She can get us anything we wish. We will just have to kill of dog boy."
" NOOO! You can't do that. He is MINE! I can figure something out though." Kagura whined.
" Kagura, do not pressume to tell me what to do and what our plans will be.... I am master here and I am your lord. I have the brains and you don't. I have ways to end this and you don't... I don't have any weaknesses.... you DO. One by the name of Lord Sesshoumaru." Naraku sneered.
Kagura narrowed her eyes at her lord and bowed. She left the room with Kanna and headed to their separate rooms. She had to come up with a way that Lord Sesshoumaru wouldn't be hurt. Getting an idea she sought out the only person she thought could help in this situation. Sakuya had somehow found her way into the hanyou's good graces'.
Okay... thats it for now... lmao.... hope you like... the next will be better... maybe.... Loves to Icy, Ace and Sesshy's koi for bein with me through thick and thin. thanks guys.... I need to know if my chapters are confusing.. if they are I promise to fix them and straighten everything out... if you are confused please write me and email about which chapter what part etc... and I will personally help you out here lol.. thanks... again...
Thanks to:
IcyAsh
drk-bandit14
Sesshy's koi
Kikyo17
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Midget
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Thank you all who reviewed.. Loves ^_^
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!
Disclaimer: I don't own it... geez.
Chapter Ten: Makoto's Experience
Makoto looked up into the golden molten lava stare of Sesshoumaru. He moved towards her slowly and reached out to her with his left hand. Brushing a small lock of hair out of her face. She let out a breath she had been holding since he had made that little comment.
' Maybe this isn't such a good idea after all. I mean I don't understand him. It was just a simple question. No one would want to mark/mate something that isn't truely real, would they?' Makoto thought as she backed up further.
He was hearding her and she knew it. There was nothing she could do. She couldn't run, hide or scream. This is His territory, she had no idea where to do and what do to. She backed up some more. With every step she took back he took two more forward. He was gaining on her and she didn't like the look in his eyes. He was up to something and she would bet she would not like the outcome.
" Why look so scared, Makoto. I won't hurt you, I just wish to show you what I see." he leaned in huskily.
She shivered as he leaned in closer and took her shoulders in his hands firmly and brought her slowly to him in a soft embrace. He bent his head to her ear and told her in that sexy voice of his......
" I can show you many things, Makoto. I can show you why and how I could and would mark you. It would be very enjoyable. That I can promise you."
She fought another shiver and turned her head to see his once golden eyes turn red once more. The scent of her fear brought him in more to her. She closed her eyes and tried to calm herself. He would not hurt her, he would not claim her and he would not... and I mean absolutely would NOT mate her.
But at this moment in time she had no clue as to if that was true or not. She had no idea if he would do any of those things. Either to prove he would and could or because of this whole " I dunno why I want to mark you" bit. She felt him lean closer and nuzzle her neck, sniff her hair and finally pressed his body closer to hers.
Her back was against the wall with Sesshoumaru pressed against her body. She couldn't think striaght anymore. She had no idea what this is doing to her.
' What in the hell is happening.' she thought in a panic. ' What in the world is this feeling? Why is he doing this?'
She was affraid and he knew it. He could smell the fear in her scent. He inhaled it deeply, enjoying the scent that was Makoto. He didn't know how else to put it. Yes it was roses and berries, a new and wonderful scent but also the scent of just Makoto. There was something hidden there. Something that was not known to anyone or anything. More then likely Makoto herself didn't know.
Sesshoumaru ran his hand up her shoulder to her neck and pressed lightly where her neck and shoulder met. At the noise she made he got a little carried away. He pressed a bit harder and drew blood. He bent his head to the wound he had caused. He licked at the wound at first and then started to suck at it. Her blood was wonderful. Sweet and potent, you could taste the power in her blood. It was intoxicating and addicting.
Her wound was healing fast and Sesshoumaru didn't like it, didn't like it one bit. He wanted more, he had to have more! Not caring the concequinces he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder and ran to his room as fast as he could. He burst into his room, shut and locked the door and tossed her onto the bed.
She looked up at him with fear in her eyes, but there was also curiousity there. His eyes held blood lust in them.... He jumped up into the air and landed on Makoto. What he did next was unexpected.....
With Seiya and Eesu
" Did you feel that, my love?"
" Yes, Eesu I did. Our lord is having some difficulties."
" You know what it is?"
" It could have something to do with the other aura here."
" Don't you rememeber that aura, thats the aura of Makoto."
" Eesu, I know it. I ain't stupid, but what is she doing in the castle and so close to our lord anyway?"
" That, my dear, Seiya I have no clue how to answer. He hasn't called for us but he could be in danger."
" I see your point, lets go check it out."
They both ran hand in hand into the castle. They were in the gardens because Seiya had wanted to relax and enjoy the day. The took the many twists and turns and stoped dead in their tracks when they came to the place were Makoto and Sesshoumaru once stood, where he caused the small wound and where he let his blood lust take over.
They slowly walked in a circle around where Sesshoumaru and Makoto once stood. Eesu stoped and stood where Sesshoumaru once stood, facing the smell of Makoto's blood, he knew what had happened. He turned to Seiya and they shared a look that clearly said that they both knew that their lord went into a blood lust. They nodded and headed straight for the master chambers, knowing they had to stop it before it was too late.
As soon as they neared his chamber door they knew it was too late for they heard the one thing that they knew was coming but was hoping to stop. ( wowie.. that was a weird sentence, ne?) There was a piercing scream of pure pain. Then all was quiet, they decided to investigate. They quietly walked to the chamber door and listened to the noises that were going on.
Sounds of silk being shifted, light breathing and thier lord opening the door. He looked at Seiya first and then Eesu. They noticed the small amount of blood at the corner of his mouth. What had happened? Why was he looking so calm.
" Seiya, wait for her to wake and then take her to the springs. Eesu, you are to guard this very door. NO one is to enter or exit without my permission. When Seiya takes Makoto to the springs, you follow and guard that door. Do not let anyone see her."
He said and walked away, toward his study. Turning his head to Eesu, he gave his most trusted 'friend' a slight nod and then walked on. Thinking what a BIG mess he is in now. Eesu turned to Seiya who had just come out of the room with wide, shocked eyes.
" What happened....?"
" He..... He........"
With the Inu gang
" Inuyasha! You can't stop me damnit! I am going home." Kagome said as she ran towards the well.
" NO YOUR NOT, WENCH! I WON'T LET YOU. YOUR NOT GOIN' RIGHT NOW. YOU HAVE TO COLLECT JEWEL SHARDS FIRST, THEN GO!" Inuyasha demanded.
" Inuyasha, when are you going to learn my friend?" Mirokue smirked.
" Oh boy, we all know whats coming don't we?" Sango said with a laugh.
" Inuyasha." Kagome said sweetly, looking and Inuyasha turn to her and look at her with wide eyes.
" Yes, Kagome?" He said trying to be nice.
" Inuyasha.......... sorry.............................................. SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT..... I have to go home.. byeeeeeeeeeee" she said as she jumped into the well with flash was gone.
" I do believe, my dear Sango, that Inuyasha will never learn to not piss her off." Miroku said.
" I know, poor Kagome." Sango snickered.
Inuyasha glared up at Sango and Miroku from the Inuyasha-shaped crator Kagome had created with an Inuyasha cookie-cutter.( More like Inuyasha crator-maker. lol) Shippou of course was having a blast laughing at Inuyasha's pain.
With Naraku, Kagura and Kanna
" Kanna, tell me.... is there a way to get Makoto away from that bastard dog?"
" No, master Naraku, there is no way to get her away from him, unless you kill him or her."
" Hn, well I do believe I will have to come up with a plan to retreave our lost property."
" Master Naraku, why don't you just kill the girl and get it over with?" Kagura asked with a sneer.
" Because you idiot, we need her. She is powerful and is our tool. She can get us anything we wish. We will just have to kill of dog boy."
" NOOO! You can't do that. He is MINE! I can figure something out though." Kagura whined.
" Kagura, do not pressume to tell me what to do and what our plans will be.... I am master here and I am your lord. I have the brains and you don't. I have ways to end this and you don't... I don't have any weaknesses.... you DO. One by the name of Lord Sesshoumaru." Naraku sneered.
Kagura narrowed her eyes at her lord and bowed. She left the room with Kanna and headed to their separate rooms. She had to come up with a way that Lord Sesshoumaru wouldn't be hurt. Getting an idea she sought out the only person she thought could help in this situation. Sakuya had somehow found her way into the hanyou's good graces'.
Okay... thats it for now... lmao.... hope you like... the next will be better... maybe.... Loves to Icy, Ace and Sesshy's koi for bein with me through thick and thin. thanks guys.... I need to know if my chapters are confusing.. if they are I promise to fix them and straighten everything out... if you are confused please write me and email about which chapter what part etc... and I will personally help you out here lol.. thanks... again...
Thanks to:
IcyAsh
drk-bandit14
Sesshy's koi
Kikyo17
kasusander-jie
Midget
sweetsnow654
Thank you all who reviewed.. Loves ^_^
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!