InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Not my Fiancé ❯ Not my Sesshoumaru ( Chapter 1 )

Chapter 1 Revision Completed

Hi everybody, whoa how long has it been since I actually updated something? Around a month, I think. But then again how long has it been since I actually finished this story. Well some of you remember (and some of you don't) that I promised to go over this story and juice it up. And since my muse quit and moved to Jamaica (she's such a bitch), I decided to work on something that was already typed and the idea just needed to be tweaked.

So I'm revising the story, editing, adding a few steamy scenes and making sure that I actually answered the questions (the sane one's anyway) that I placed at the end of each chapter. I'm also going to be adding in a couple of chapters (making them shorter too but only because I want them to be equally spaced), make Rin and Sesshoumaru have an affair, adding breaks (because I can bitch!) and adding more Inu Yasha Kagome action. But basically it's the same storyline with better twist and correct English (Star is asking for a Beta for this revision!). Then hopefully when I'm done, I'll be inspired to start back up on Not my Fault which gave me a headache because I couldn't figure out what to type. And here's the revision of the first chapter.

~Breaker Breaker One~

“I can't believe you're letting him do this…”

“He's a grown man and can make his own decisions.”

“That's a complete load of bull!” Sango yelled at the smaller girl in front of her. Her large stomach moving as she talked.

“Sango whisper someone might hear you.” The smaller girl said placing her hand on her friend's obviously pregnant belly.

“Yeah, like I already haven't. But, you know that should be you getting ready down there.” Kagome added as she walked into the conversation.

“…”

“Rin, do you hear me?” Kagome asked.

“I am going down there, to be the hostess at my best friend's wedding.”

“Correction, your lover's wedding, I can't believe this…”

“Sango you promised you wouldn't say anything.” Rin almost whined. “I knew I should have never told you about it…”

“What are you embarrassed? Is that why you have to say it?” Sango said getting quite pissed. “What you two were doing is completely natural…”

“Sango…” Rin sighed out as she became quickly weary of this whole day. She figured she'd have plenty of conversations like this before the end of the day. “Not when he's engaged…” She muttered rubbing her temples.

“What would have happened if I hadn't walked in last night Rin? And you are still going to allow him to walk down that aisle?” Kagome asked. “After all that crap you two went through together?”

“It was a close call and a mistake… I know it and he knows it, now you two need to accept it.”

“I refuse to. That bitch ain't got nothing on you. Just march up to him, tell him to cancel the wedding and then tell him to lick your shoes for good measure…”

Rin's eyes popped out of her head for a moment before she decided to ignore Sango's comment. “Sango you have to promise to not say anything…” She sighed out again as her eyes continued to be drained of life. “…for the sake of all the people who have sanity hanging on this.”

“Fine my lips are sealed, but don't think that I'm going to let you off the hook. What you two think about doing and actually do behind closed doors is completely up to you. But I can't believe you are letting him marry some hooker like that!”

“Sango!” this time it was Kagome. “Well you've heard about how those lovely hormones work when you're pregnant and apparently Sango needs some time out to balance them out. See yah in the chapel Rin!” Kagome said towing Sango away before she could cause any more confusion in Rin's life.

`No one understands, it is not my decision…' Rin thought as she turned the corner with her bangs covering her eyes. `Not my decision, not my marriage, not my… uff…' Rin thought as she felt gravity pull down on her body. `Damn, just what I need to walk into a wall.' She thought frantically. `I'm sure now everyone will fall for the `Rin is so happy for him' thing now, NOT! Life's a bitch.'

Out of nowhere an arm reached out, grabbed her, and pulled her up swiftly. “Oh hi Rin, I'm sorry have you seen the Prince of Ice?” Inu Yasha asked.

There was a time that he actually remembered having the hots for this small petite girl in front of him. But then they became close enough for him to realize they weren't compatible romantically. And then she had introduced him to Kagome. Oh gods how he loved her for that small act of human kindness.

“Nope, I think he's been avoiding me…” Rin said forcing a smile. `I would avoid me too if I had made out with me the day before my wedding and then got caught… wait, what the hell?' Rin thought as her brain confused itself. `Too many references to me in one sentence…'

`That is probably because it will force him to think this whole thing over. He's such an idiot…' Inu Yasha thought. “Rin, are you okay with this?”

Rin's relationship with Sesshoumaru before this lovely little incident could be described as interesting to say the least. They were so close that Rin could actually second guess Sesshoumaru's thoughts and often get it right. Inu Yasha had been sure that Sesshoumaru would have married Rin. Actually that night he had seen the ring Sesshoumaru had, he had been pretty damn convinced that it belonged to Rin. Oh how he and Kagome had been slapped royally in the face when Sesshoumaru had announced his engagement to the evil wench.

Things Inu Yasha would prefer not to have in his family, Sesshoumaru and his fiancée. At least if Sesshoumaru had been marrying Rin he would have claimed her and continued to ignore the blood that ran through both his and his brother's veins. Now he had to totally isolate himself from even the thought that they were related. Not that he hadn't been doing that since the moment he was born anyway…

“I'm fine, my best friend is getting married… why wouldn't I be okay? I am completely and utterly happy. I have never been this enthusiastic about anything but gifts on Christmas.” Rin said forcing the smile even more to the point that it actually hurt her cheeks. `Why do they keep asking? It's not my decision, not my marriage, he's not my…'

“Hey Sesshoumaru…” Inu Yasha called out finding the `Prince of Ice' walking down the hall having his ear talked off by Jaken. He looked pissed, annoyed, sleep deprived and absolutely done for. And when he looked up and saw Rin it seemed as though he had aged 20 centuries in a matter of seconds.

That's when she realized it wasn't a dream. Her best friend was leaving her behind for a complete stranger. He was marrying a woman he had known for all of 11 months. What the hell was she chopped liver? Did he really hate her enough to take that woman over her? It was hurting her so bad inside and she felt her heart stop for a full three seconds, a bad omen, said to take a decade off one's life.

 

~Save a Horse~

If there ever was a time

That my heart completely stopped

But I continued to live and breathe

And the whole weight of the world

Conveniently dropped upon my chest

Which was already filled with unshed tears

Because the golden sun

Forgot the silver moon

And what was mine is now another's to have

And the whole of the Milky Way

Knows of this great pain

The only one ignorant is you

~Ride a Cowboy~

 

So how do you like it? I like it then again it is my story… Now here are the cliffy hangers… Dun, dun, dun… Who is Sesshoumaru's fiancée? How many months pregnant, really is Sango? What does everyone know about Rin and Sesshoumaru that he seems (word of mouth wise) to be clueless about (since he's still getting married and all)? What rated PG-13 to rated R thing did Rin and Sesshoumaru do right before his wedding day? Are Inu Yasha and Kagome together in this fic? (Well duh!)

 

Not my Fiancé

Now this might be somewhat slow but I put the summary at the end of the chapter just in case the whole thing didn't come up… (I know for a fact it didn't)

 

“You know that should be you walking down that aisle…”
“When he looks at you, he realizes it was a big mistake.”

“Because the only one he really loves is you.”
Leading up to and after the marriage of her best friend all Rin Tenshi heard were comments like these. And when an unexpected night leads to a steamy love affair, can she really win back what she let walk away? Or does she even want it back now?

 

Newer Comments: In the end the plot went away from this but I'm in the process of tweaking it to the point that it leans back into this. I totally forgot about the love affair until the ending was in sight so that mucked it up. Besides I wanted a lemon in this story really bad and when I finished and couldn't figure out where to squeeze the juice out of one I was completely pissed. I figure in about the next couple of revisions it'll be hard to follow the storyline if you read past the parts I'm revising. I'll tell you at the top of the chapter if it's revised yet or not. Tomorrow (I ain't promising shit) I should have the second chapter up (once again Star can never be held accountable for such things.) Please review and ask me what the hell is my problem. Alright kiddies, love yah peace out.