| "Not my Fiancé" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Title: Please!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 23:25 CDT
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You are one of my favorite writers and I would be honored if you would post your work on my site. This site is completely new and I wanted have many authors sharing there fanfiction and poetry. There is absolutely no plagiarism and no fee to join or view the site. Please email me at nahaujaret@yahoo.com.
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Title: *claps hands*
Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 10:44 CDT
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Bravo! A nice ending to your fic! I REALLY can't wait until the sequal...really...I CAN'T! But I have to, still, congrats on a wonderful story!
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Title: perfect!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: May 14, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your ending .....I can't wait until the sequel!!!!!!!!!keep up the good work......
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:21 CDT
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I started readding this fic today and I have read all 19 chapters and let me say that the you have a talent to you, keep it up. PS: I love the poetry at the ending of each chapter. Is it your original work? (may sound stupid but sometimes betas or other people can help) also the ending music you choose from blues clues and disney I love it. (im ashamed cause im 21 and i like dora, blue, the box people, rollie pollie ollie, and our puerto rican favorite "burbujita" (dont ask)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:20 CDT
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I started readding this fic today and I have read all 19 chapters and let me say that the you have a talent to you, keep it up. PS: I love the poetry at the ending of each chapter. Is it your original work? (may sound stupid but sometimes betas or other people can help) also the ending music you choose from blues clues and disney I love it. (im ashamed cause im 21 and i like dora, blue, the box people, rollie pollie ollie, and our puerto rican favorite "burbujita" (dont ask)
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: April 24, 2005 17:22 CDT
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I just love how you have Sesshomaru so evil when he's about to kick some ass.....anything theathe said to some thugs was funny as hell....I love it...but, only two more chapters left I don't know what to do ....I going to really miss this updates........Keep writing please.....
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Reviewed By: DragonGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH Please have a sequel. I wanna know how what's going to happen to that evil bitch Kagura. *Eyes glowing red* I HOPE SHE DIES AND ROTS IN HELL!! *Shaking head and taking deep breaths* Ok ok i'm good, i'm ok, it's alright now. But yeah anyway, great chappies. Love your writing and the story is awesome, please update soon. I wanna know what happens next with Sesshy (Ohh he's so HOT)*fangirl screech* and Rin. Great job!!
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Title: Love Ya
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it is awesome. Lately I've been reading without leaving a review and I would like to apologize for that. As a writer myself I love for people to leave me reviews. I was reminded when I was checking the reviews for my work and saw you name. I said, "Oh my goodness...I love that writer!!" So It's only right for me to leave you some feedback. Please, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: inufreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 14:33 CST
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actually i think that you should do everything possible to hurt kagura! rape, murder, torture, everything! i know, i am evil but that is just how it has to be. so, i hope that you can just deal with it!
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Reviewed By: inufreak(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 11:04 CST
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it is really good so far and i think that you should have to "guys" that kagura hired kill kagura off instead of rin...after the fact of his "game"
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Reviewed By: animegirl007( not logged in) On: March 31, 2005 01:58 CST
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I would like that bitch rape, tortured, and then killed!!!!!!!! How dare she have Rin killed!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
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Title: cool beans
Reviewed By: ~anime fan~ On: March 30, 2005 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okies, well u asked what should happen. i dont think kagura should die. she should live with her consequences. ... "sometimes the punishment worse then death is to live". also...the rape/torture thing is an idea to be considered. not many stories out there with that. not many authors with a stomach to write them, i guess. if u can write it u should. when u say "she leave Sessh" u mean kagura right? cuz NOT rin. argh. rin should be with Sessh...end of rant. haha. oh... just to add... very good chappies. way to go. ~Anime Fan~ =^~.-^=
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Reviewed By: demon of hell On: March 22, 2005 18:51 CST
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i love it keep up the good job. u jus hafta update more. plz.
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Reviewed By: angelic demon of h&h On: March 22, 2005 18:49 CST
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Reviewed By: DragonGrl0701 On: March 17, 2005 16:37 CST
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OMG!!!I NEED MORE!!! Your story is sooo awesome!! I LOVE IT!!! Update as soon as possible, i'm close to a nervous breakdown. Ok, well maybe not but still UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007( not logged in) On: March 17, 2005 02:19 CST
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Keep going I need more!!!!!!
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! great chappie! i luv hyper Rin's. there are never enough out there!! hurry up and update! as for gifts... they have some awesome suger shops in DW!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: March 02, 2005 01:44 CST
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Damn should is to much!!!!Will all hell break loose or what?????? I just need to know ...update ....
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:35 CST
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Very good. You're telling us more about the characters in each chapter, but the suspense continues and doesn't feel artificial.
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. The plots so original. And the characters aren't ooc or anything. It has humour, and angst. Everything a great story needs! Please, write more.
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 16:21 CST
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Very good! I hope you continue and update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: February 28, 2005 14:55 CST
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I need longer chapters!!!!!!!! This is too much I'm suffering!!!update
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: February 23, 2005 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey just found your story.....GOOD!!!! I can't wait for more...update soon
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 14:56 CST
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Intruging, you must continue and update soon, I like your style of writing
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 09:53 CST
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Very interesting. You're showing different sides of the characters' personalities than one usually sees; I like it. I'm also happy that your spelling and grammar are quite good. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Double Di On: January 27, 2005 19:09 CST
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nice so far wonder who sess' fiance is?!!!
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