InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The End of His World ❯ Remembering the End ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
I have no memory of what happen or what I did to this chapter so I'm just gonna take down the old one and put up this one. Laterz.
REMEMBERING THE END
The sharp sound of metal striking metal rang out across the valley as swords clashed together, some striking their targets, others being batted aside with ease.
Inuyasha grunted as he swung his sword up in an arch, attemping to cut of Naraku's head, but to no luck. He jumped back out of Naraku's striking range and looked around to see how his friends were doing.
Miroku was guarding Sango's back, using his staff to cut demons in half. Sango's was using her hiriakuts to slice through the hordes of demons in front of her, and protecting herself with a katana while waiting for it to come back.
He looked over to where he had last sighted Kagome and breathed a silent sigh of relief when he saw he standing with Shippo and Kilala.
Shippo was using his fox magic to keep the demons at bay until either Kagome or Kilala could kill them, sometimes if the demons were weak enough he would even kill them himself. Kilala was protecting Shippo and Kagome with her body while killing demons with her fangs and claws.
Kagome was protecting both of them with a shield that kept out weaker demons, while killing the others with a purifying.
Inuyasha smiled slightly when he realized all his friends were fighting just as hard as he was. He focused back on Naraku's and ran forwasrd dodging the tentacles and acid shit Naraku sent his way. He jumped up and twisted his body to the right to avoid another tentacle before bringing his Tetsuiaga down and imbedding it in the ground by Naraku's feet, sending the wind scar flying towards him.
“Shit!”Inuyasha cursed, when all it did was cut off some of his tentacles and his arms, which regenerated almost instantly. A cry from behind him, senting him spinning around in the direction of Miroku and Sango.
Sango had been hit in the stomach by a orge demon, leaving behind a huge gaping wound that was gushing blood. Inuyasha watched as she fell backwards, only to have Miroku catch her and cradle her in his arms. She lifted her pale hand up to touch his cheek, her mouth forming words only Miroku could hear, before her eyes fluttered shut and her breathing stopped.
Inuyasha fell forward onto his knees and let his head hang, his heart heavy with the loss of Sango one of his few friends. He sat there for a moment, remourse coursing through him, until Naraku's evil chuckled pierced his senses.
“So the demon slayer has died? Oh well, no one will miss her. All her family has already died. In fact just the other day, I killed her brother again and took his jewel shard. Kukukuu!”he chuckled.
Inuyasha raised his head and looked directly at Miroku, who lifted his head to look when he felt someone staring at him. His eyes met Inuyasha's who burned with a angry fire which was just begging to be released. There was no sadness in them, and through them Inuyasha told Miroku exactly what he needed to know. Sango had died the way she would have wanted to. She had died in battle, protecting the ones she loved, like a true demon slayer.
Miroku nodded, his face set in a grim smile, and stood laying down Sango's body with gentleness used by loved ones. He prayed for her for a moment, blessing her body, before turning to confront the demons he had kept at bay with a prayer shield. In his eyes blazed a determination that had never been there before.
Planting his staff in the ground and with a yell tore the prayer beads off his right hand, unleashing his wind tunnel. Earlier in the battle it had been injured and the only reason he hadn't used it was because Sango had asked him not to, but now there was no reason not to.
Inuyasha stood up and whipped around at the same that Miroku let out his yell. He gripped the handle of his sword and with an identical yell, brought his sword around in a swing that cut Naraku right through the middle, halving him. “That's for Sango, you bastard. She did have family left, and your looking at them right now.”
Naraku smirked and looked down at Inuyasha, as he started to regenerate once again. “Take another look, Inuyasha. You're the only one she had left.”He told him, waving a arm to the battlegrounds around them.
With a distrustful glance at Naraku, Inuyasha turned to look at the battlefield. The world seemed to slow and grow silent when he saw that Miroku was being sucked into his wind tunnel.
“Miroku-!”He shouted, reaching out a hand to his best friend. Miroku turned to look at him and Inuyasha's words got stuck in his throat when he saw the smile on Miroku's face. It was a peaceful smile, that let Inuyasha know that Miroku had known all along what would happen when he opened his wind tunnel.
Inuyasha stared as his best friend finally disappeared, going to be his beloved once more. “Good luck my friend….”Inuyasha whispered, closing his eyes and turning away, his eyes filled with pain. “You're an asshole Naraku.”He stated.
“Yes, but it's not over. Your forgeting about your little priestess and the fox kit.”
“No!”Inuyasha whirled around, frantically searching for Kagome and Shippo. He let out a cry when he saw that Kagome had fallen to her knees and her shield had disappeared.
“NO!”he shouted, running as fast as he could trying to reach Kagome before the demon standing over her could bring down the sword he held in his hand.
“Kagome!”He yelled, leaping over dead corpses, ignoring the various demons that tried to stop him. “KAGOME!”he screamed, trying to fight back the tears that were threatening to fall down his cheeks. His next breath caught in his throat when she lifted her head and reached out a hand to him.
He was only a couple feet away, almost close enough to touch her, when she said, “Inuyasha-!”
“NOO!!!”he cried, falling to his knees in the middle of the blood soaked valley, reaching out to grab Kagome's hand. His fingers had just barely brushed hers when the demon brought down his sword and ended Kagome's life.
So that was my first chapter and I hope you like it. It took me a while to write because I really suck at battle scenes. L
I first started writing this at my friends house and while I was writing we got in a fight and I seriously considered quitting writing and deleting all my stories.L But when I tried I couldn't so I just decided to take and break and now I'm back and feeling better. It's taking some time for me to get back in the grove of writing so forgive me if my chapters come slwoer, and I mean really slower.
I'll be starting school again soon Land my mom made me try and get advanced English this year plus I'm mostly likely starting Spanish 1 and I really suck at it. Sadly enough I'm good at almost every other language except French and Spanish. Only reason I took Spanish was because my Aunt speaks Spanish fluently and I firgured I could just ask her if I was having trouble. And I just found out that my dad speaks some Spanish.J Hahaha that made me wanna laugh the first time I heard, cause he just doesn't look like the kind of person who would know Spanish.
Anyways please Review and I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can, but only if I get five reviews.(* that's the deal, take it or leave it.J I wanna know if you like it.) Oh, and I'm posting some pictures on deviantart.com when I can so go and look for `em if you like D.N.Angel stuff. J
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