Kingdom Hearts Fan Fiction ❯ The Unfolding of a Feline's Past ❯ Chapter 1(If you, the reviewers, have any ideas, let me know what you think.) ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: Jackietara 
Begins with telling you a bit about Jackietara, and how she belongs, or not, in the world she's stuck in. Enjoy! Done in notepad. Edits might be often.
Non Anime: Kingdom Hearts Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Fantasy / Adventure | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.16.2007 | Updated On: 12.19.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 271 | Status: Completed
Begins with telling you a bit about Jackietara, and how she belongs, or not, in the world she's stuck in. Enjoy! Done in notepad. Edits might be often.
Non Anime: Kingdom Hearts Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Fantasy / Adventure | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.16.2007 | Updated On: 12.19.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 271 | Status: Completed
The Unfolding Of a Feline's Past
Jackietara: Jackie doesn't own anything but me. We are both the same person, so if you talk to one, you talk to both. I know, confusing.
Axel: Was that the Disclaimer?
Jackietara: Yes. Why do you ask?
The two start fighting.
Nihi the Cat: On with the story
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CRASH!!!!!!!!!SMASH!!!!!!!!!!BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! (SOUND EFFECTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOT!!!!!!!!)
"hey look, talking"
hey look, a flashback, dream, and telepathic conversation
"HEY LOOK, YELLING"
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Running down a path was a 17-year-old wearing faded denim blue jeans, brown leather boots, a black tank top, and a soft black leather choker collar with a
silver bell on it. Her bell jingled with each stride she took. Her eyes were as blue as ice, hair as dark brown as bitter chocolate, and skin as white as cream.
She had four claws on each hand, and each were made of silver titanium with a sprinkle of diamond dust inside each claw, a scar on her right eye like Scar
from The Lion King, and she also had two cat ears and a white tiger tail. Her name was Jackietara, but she was always called Jackie by her friends and
family. Behind her were Shadows, the lowest form of Heartless. As she ran, she saw that each half of the path was to either half of her heart. One half was
bright as day, while the other half darker than night itself. When she reached the middle.....
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Waking up with a start was me, Jackietara (or Jackie as I'm often called), and I'm a Neko-Shapeshifter. Sweat was rolling down my neck, as if my room were
hot. My room was as cold as a winter day, but it never bothered me. It was my own climate that I lived in, and not one person in my family really worried
about my health. I was wearing a dark blue sports bra as well as matching dark blue boxers. "Man", I said, "It ended as all my dreams do, but this time it
was different." I couldn't hide the fact that the dream surprised me, but the creatures looked exactly like the Heartless in my Kingdom Hearts II game. Also,
I'm half a Nobody and half a Somebody. This is because a Heartless fucked up and ended up scratching at my right eye and taking half of my heart, the left
half.
I glanced at my alarm clock and it said 4:58 a.m. I usually woke up at 5:31 a.m., but I was no longer tired. My hair was shoulder length, and my bangs
were two inches long. This didn't bother me because I ruffled my bangs all the time, and I had grown my bangs to hide the scar on my right eye.
(Jackietara: I'm actually the alter ego of Jackie Dusenburry, but I can only show myself in her stories.)
I weigh 110 lbs. even and I'm 5'2". I quickly got dressed into the clothing that was from my dream. I was outside at 6:00 a.m. with a cell phone at my
waist and a water bottle in my right hand. My aunt always worried about me, and I knew why.
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I walked to the woods that were in the back of where my family and I lived, but I never went in. I streched for a while when I heard a twig break just three
feet from where I was standing. "Who's there", I asked with not even a hint of fear in my voice, "Because that twig you stepped on wasn't very quiet." I
knew alot about stealth, and that was because I had the qualities of a stealthy feline.
"Strange", the person said sounding like Xaldin from Kingdom Hearts II, "I wanted you to know that I was here." At that statement, an ice cold shiver ran
up and down my spine. "Wh-who are y-you", I asked as I tried desperately to get rid of the feeling, but couldn't. "Strange", he said, "From sounding like
a ferocious tiger, you go to sounding like a helpless kitten."
He was apparently faster than me because he ran towards me, summoning a lance, and swept it under my legs at the back side, making me fall hard on my
back, and making me loose my breath. I tried to get up quickly, but he was faster. He stepped on my chest, limiting my breaths. "What's you're name", he
asked me in the simplest terms.
"Why do you want to know", I growled. "Because", he said, "I need to find a girl that fits your description." While I was thinking it over as quick as I
could, he pressed harder on my chest, making me cry out in pain. Hot tears streaked down both sides of my head, and they were from the pain I was
enduring. "I'll tell you", I said, "It's Jackie."
"You're full name", he said. I had tried to trick him, but apparently it wouldn't work. "I'll only tell you when you let me up", I said gasping, "Because I
can barely breath." He let me up, but as soon as I was up, he grabbed me on my left upper arm, making me yelp in pain. "Now", he said, "Tell me your
name." "Okay", I said, "It's Jackietara, but I gave you my nickname earlier."
He grinned in a way that made me nervous, but I didn't know of why. He then said my name in a way that made me shiver. He felt me shiver, and
squeezed harder on my arm, making tears streak down the sides of my face.
"Hmm", he said to himself, "Should I tell her my name now, or just wait and see if she divulges information about what she knows of Kingdom Hearts.
Xemnas would be surprised if she did know anything, even of Ansem the Wise." I heard everything he said, and I knew he was up to something. I just
didn't know what.
I tried to think of a way to get out of his grasp when my cell phone went off. "What's that", he asked. "A text message", I said as I remembered the tone,
"Can I see it?" "Yes", he said.
'Watch out for Organization XIII. They will try to find you, so go into hiding.' There was no number or e-mail address after the text, and I didn't know of
who would try to warn me of Organization XIII. I had some sketched memories of them, other than that, my Kingdom Hearts II video game for Play Station 2
had the Organization in it.
"What did it say", he asked. I didn't answer, just shrugged my right shoulder. He manipulated the wind and made my bangs move from side to side,
making me giggle, and revealing my scar. He sort of laughed when he heard me laugh, as if he was having some amusement. "My name's Xaldin", he said,
"And I'm glad to say that you enjoyed my playful gesture." Several twigs snapped and Xaldin removed his hood.
Just then, another male voice appeared and said, "Why did you remove your hood, Whirlwind Lancer?" I cocked my head to one side, wondering who was
there. "She probably knows of us because of Axel", Xaldin said, "Do you know of how often he's on the nightly news? More than you are." The new guy
sounded like Xigbar from the Kingdom Hearts Game series, but I highly doubted these were the Braig and Dilan that I remembered and had pictures of in
my room.
I felt my vision fading, and my mind going dull. 'What's going on', I thought to myself.....
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Author Note: This is an edit to chapter 1. I'm trying to thing of a name for the chapter, but if you, the readers, have any idea for a name of the chapter, I would
be glad to hear you input.
Jackietara: Jackie doesn't own anything but me. We are both the same person, so if you talk to one, you talk to both. I know, confusing.
Axel: Was that the Disclaimer?
Jackietara: Yes. Why do you ask?
The two start fighting.
Nihi the Cat: On with the story
-----------------------------------------
CRASH!!!!!!!!!SMASH!!!!!!!!!!BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! (SOUND EFFECTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOT!!!!!!!!)
"hey look, talking"
hey look, a flashback, dream, and telepathic conversation
"HEY LOOK, YELLING"
---------------------------------------------
Running down a path was a 17-year-old wearing faded denim blue jeans, brown leather boots, a black tank top, and a soft black leather choker collar with a
silver bell on it. Her bell jingled with each stride she took. Her eyes were as blue as ice, hair as dark brown as bitter chocolate, and skin as white as cream.
She had four claws on each hand, and each were made of silver titanium with a sprinkle of diamond dust inside each claw, a scar on her right eye like Scar
from The Lion King, and she also had two cat ears and a white tiger tail. Her name was Jackietara, but she was always called Jackie by her friends and
family. Behind her were Shadows, the lowest form of Heartless. As she ran, she saw that each half of the path was to either half of her heart. One half was
bright as day, while the other half darker than night itself. When she reached the middle.....
------------------------------------------
Waking up with a start was me, Jackietara (or Jackie as I'm often called), and I'm a Neko-Shapeshifter. Sweat was rolling down my neck, as if my room were
hot. My room was as cold as a winter day, but it never bothered me. It was my own climate that I lived in, and not one person in my family really worried
about my health. I was wearing a dark blue sports bra as well as matching dark blue boxers. "Man", I said, "It ended as all my dreams do, but this time it
was different." I couldn't hide the fact that the dream surprised me, but the creatures looked exactly like the Heartless in my Kingdom Hearts II game. Also,
I'm half a Nobody and half a Somebody. This is because a Heartless fucked up and ended up scratching at my right eye and taking half of my heart, the left
half.
I glanced at my alarm clock and it said 4:58 a.m. I usually woke up at 5:31 a.m., but I was no longer tired. My hair was shoulder length, and my bangs
were two inches long. This didn't bother me because I ruffled my bangs all the time, and I had grown my bangs to hide the scar on my right eye.
(Jackietara: I'm actually the alter ego of Jackie Dusenburry, but I can only show myself in her stories.)
I weigh 110 lbs. even and I'm 5'2". I quickly got dressed into the clothing that was from my dream. I was outside at 6:00 a.m. with a cell phone at my
waist and a water bottle in my right hand. My aunt always worried about me, and I knew why.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------
I walked to the woods that were in the back of where my family and I lived, but I never went in. I streched for a while when I heard a twig break just three
feet from where I was standing. "Who's there", I asked with not even a hint of fear in my voice, "Because that twig you stepped on wasn't very quiet." I
knew alot about stealth, and that was because I had the qualities of a stealthy feline.
"Strange", the person said sounding like Xaldin from Kingdom Hearts II, "I wanted you to know that I was here." At that statement, an ice cold shiver ran
up and down my spine. "Wh-who are y-you", I asked as I tried desperately to get rid of the feeling, but couldn't. "Strange", he said, "From sounding like
a ferocious tiger, you go to sounding like a helpless kitten."
He was apparently faster than me because he ran towards me, summoning a lance, and swept it under my legs at the back side, making me fall hard on my
back, and making me loose my breath. I tried to get up quickly, but he was faster. He stepped on my chest, limiting my breaths. "What's you're name", he
asked me in the simplest terms.
"Why do you want to know", I growled. "Because", he said, "I need to find a girl that fits your description." While I was thinking it over as quick as I
could, he pressed harder on my chest, making me cry out in pain. Hot tears streaked down both sides of my head, and they were from the pain I was
enduring. "I'll tell you", I said, "It's Jackie."
"You're full name", he said. I had tried to trick him, but apparently it wouldn't work. "I'll only tell you when you let me up", I said gasping, "Because I
can barely breath." He let me up, but as soon as I was up, he grabbed me on my left upper arm, making me yelp in pain. "Now", he said, "Tell me your
name." "Okay", I said, "It's Jackietara, but I gave you my nickname earlier."
He grinned in a way that made me nervous, but I didn't know of why. He then said my name in a way that made me shiver. He felt me shiver, and
squeezed harder on my arm, making tears streak down the sides of my face.
"Hmm", he said to himself, "Should I tell her my name now, or just wait and see if she divulges information about what she knows of Kingdom Hearts.
Xemnas would be surprised if she did know anything, even of Ansem the Wise." I heard everything he said, and I knew he was up to something. I just
didn't know what.
I tried to think of a way to get out of his grasp when my cell phone went off. "What's that", he asked. "A text message", I said as I remembered the tone,
"Can I see it?" "Yes", he said.
'Watch out for Organization XIII. They will try to find you, so go into hiding.' There was no number or e-mail address after the text, and I didn't know of
who would try to warn me of Organization XIII. I had some sketched memories of them, other than that, my Kingdom Hearts II video game for Play Station 2
had the Organization in it.
"What did it say", he asked. I didn't answer, just shrugged my right shoulder. He manipulated the wind and made my bangs move from side to side,
making me giggle, and revealing my scar. He sort of laughed when he heard me laugh, as if he was having some amusement. "My name's Xaldin", he said,
"And I'm glad to say that you enjoyed my playful gesture." Several twigs snapped and Xaldin removed his hood.
Just then, another male voice appeared and said, "Why did you remove your hood, Whirlwind Lancer?" I cocked my head to one side, wondering who was
there. "She probably knows of us because of Axel", Xaldin said, "Do you know of how often he's on the nightly news? More than you are." The new guy
sounded like Xigbar from the Kingdom Hearts Game series, but I highly doubted these were the Braig and Dilan that I remembered and had pictures of in
my room.
I felt my vision fading, and my mind going dull. 'What's going on', I thought to myself.....
---------------------------------------------
Author Note: This is an edit to chapter 1. I'm trying to thing of a name for the chapter, but if you, the readers, have any idea for a name of the chapter, I would
be glad to hear you input.