Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ Keitaro and Motoko Love Story ❯ The Girl's Dorm ( Chapter 2 )
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By: killerman83ca 
I would like to thank Spartan429 for his work on helping with this story
Anime/Manga: Love Hina Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.31.2007 | Updated On: 02.12.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.5K | Visits: 2.5K | Status: Work In Progress
I would like to thank Spartan429 for his work on helping with this story
Anime/Manga: Love Hina Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.31.2007 | Updated On: 02.12.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.5K | Visits: 2.5K | Status: Work In Progress
Author Note: I don’t own Love Hina. I am using the characters from the story in mine. This story doesn’t follow the Anime or the Manga it happens in a different time line.
Please be nice if I might make a mistake and I will fix them.
I am going to be using different typing to tell everyone what is going on with everyone. Like when it is in Italic it will mean thinking when it is in bold it mean upset about something.
When I put 888888, it means a Flashback.
There is some swearing in this chapter
His mom smiled and said, “You take care of yourself when you are there.” He hugged her and then said, “You know I will.” His dad didn’t say anything but looked at him. So he gave him a hug also then left. As his parents watch him leave with his bag over his shoulder he was happy to be on the move again.
He looked at the inn and said, “It sure hasn’t changed from the last time I saw it. I might as well go and talk to Haruka for a bit.” He walked over to the tea shop and walked in. Haruka was reading the paper because the rush was over for the time begin. When she heard the bell ringing as someone walked in. She stood up and said, “How can I help you.” She turned around and saw a person standing there with a bag over his shoulder. The person dropped their bag and said, “Haruka. Tell you haven’t forgotten me all these years.” She said, “Keitaro. Is that you?” Keitaro fixed his hair and said, “Who do you think it would be. Your knight in shining armor?” She removed a fan from her pocket and bonked him on the head with it. He smiled and said, “How I miss you bonking me on the head.” She put her arms around him and said, “Keitaro. What are you doing here?” She lead him over to a empty table and they sat down. He looked at her and said, “I moved out. But don’t worry they know. It was hard for me to go to school from home. So I thought I would live here with Grandma for a bit then find a place of my own.”
Haruka smiled and thought, ‘I forgot how cute he looks. Besides there is Motoko who has taking his heart. I would like to know if he still remember’s here?’
Keitaro touched Haruka on the shoulder and said, “You all right? You were gone there for a moment?” Haruka smiled and said, “I am fine. Thinking that is all.” Keitaro touched her on the shoulder and said, “You know you weird.” Then she bonked him on the head again for the second time today. He smiled at her and said, “Sorry. But it is true.” She rolled her eyes at him and said, “So. How has your training coming alone?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Better. But slow. I don’t know why but I can’t focus on my training anymore. After that day she left. I promise I would protect everyone I still don’t know.”
Haruka smiled and said, “You don’t have to worry. You can rest and train here if you want?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You mean that Haruka. You will let me stay here and train.” She nodded her head and thought ‘He is going to be upset about this but I have to tell him about her not being here. And she turned it into a girl’s dorm.’ Haruka smiled at him which made him tilt his head to one side and said, “What is going on?” She reached into her apron and removed a cigarette and lighted it. She took drag of it and said, “Granny isn’t here. She went on a trip around the world.” Keitaro leaned back and said, “Now I know where I get it from. I don’t like being in one place too long.” Haruka said, “Keitaro. You have to understand that she isn’t here anymore but I am.” He closed his eyes and said, “Haruka. May I stay?” She shook her head and said, “I don’t know. You being who you are and everything?” Keitaro reached into his bag and said, “Then you might not want these then?” Showing her a pack of smokes he picked up for her. She looked at him in the eyes and said, “You little bastard. You know my one weakness. Also I know yours?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You are not going to say it are you?”
She smiled and said, “You have a crush?” He turned bright red and said, “You a pain.” She nodded her head because it was true. She shook her head and said, “How about we go and visit the dorm and I will introduce you to everyone there.” Keitaro looked at her and said, “I would like a cup of tea you use to make for me when I was here?” She looked at him and said, “You are the real pain.” She got up and walked to the kitchen to do up his tea for him.
He smiled and said, “I miss her. I would like to know that I keep on thinking about her but I don’t know what she looks like anymore. All I could remember was her hair that is all.” Haruka smiled and said, “Don’t worry it will come back to you.” A couple of minutes later the Tea was ready and she brought it out for him. Then the door open again and a girl in her early teens looked around until she saw Haruka. She came over and said, “Haruka-san. I need some advice.” Keitaro got up and said, “I will be outback if you need me. Aunt Haruka.” He started to run when a tray was thrown at his head. He heard it hit the wall and then raspberry her. Haruka said, “You are going to get it later mister. Now what is wrong Shinobu?” Shinobu sat down and said, “Naru. She told me that the cooking wasn’t right. But I tried my best.” She started to cry so Haruka put her arms around her and said, “It is all right Shinobu. Let is all out.” Keitaro who was standing out back heard the talking going on inside her the young girl telling what is going on. He heard her name was Shinobu. Keitaro sat down and thought, ‘I was like that once. Crying on Haruka’s shoulder. But that day when I put my life on the line for her was the best thing I have done. I would like to know if she still remember’s me?’
Haruka said, “Shinobu. You want me to talk to Naru for you?” She nodded her head and said, “Ok. Keitaro?” Keitaro poked his head in and said, “Yes.” Haruka saw that he was worried about the young girl and said, “This is Shinobu. Shinobu this is Keitaro my Nephew.” Keitaro walked up to her and said, “Nice to meet you. I am honored to meet someone like you.” Shinobu blushed and said, “I am sorry abut I over heard you two talking in here. Shinobu. You want to walk around town with me while Haruka talks to Naru?”
Shinobu smiled and said, “You don’t mind?” She walked up to her and touched her head and said, “I don’t’ mind besides I would like to know you better and Haruka knows I wouldn’t do anything to someone like you.” Haruka nodded her head and said, “Ok. She is in your care for the time begin Keitaro.” He nodded his head and removed something from his bag and said, “Don’t worry. I will protect her.” Then he saw the young girl smile at him and then he said, “Who are you?” She smiled at him and said, “You have to find out.” Shinobu touched his arm and said, “You alright?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Remembering something that is all.” Haruka nodded her head and said, “Ok. You two have some fun.” Keitaro put his arm out and said, “May I?” Shinobu put her arm around his and they walked into town.
Haruka smiled and walked over to the dorm where she saw Naru on the couch reading a book. Haruka walked up to her and said, “I heard what you said to Shinobu.” Naru looked up and said, “I didn’t mean to say something like that.” Haruka took Naru’s book from her and said, “She was crying. Next time I am not going to be nice to you.” Then Haruka walked out. Naru moaned and said, “Like I care.” Keitaro looked at Shinobu and said, “You feeling better?” Shinobu looked at him and said, “You know I am having a great time with you.” Keitaro saw a toy store and said, “You want to do some shopping?” He pointed to the toy store. Shinobu smiled and said, “You don’t mind shopping with me?” Keitaro shook his head and said, “I don’t mind. I will pay for anything you pay for.” She kissed his cheek when he started to blush. Then he remember the girl from his pasted kissed him on the same cheek. Shinobu said, “Sempai?” He smiled at her and said, “Sorry about that. I didn’t mean too. Shinobu-chan.” It was her turn to blush he smiled at her and said, “I didn’t know you would brush that much when I call you it.” She rubbed her cheeks to get the redness down. He took her by the hand and lead her in.
Shinobu looked at all the toys. Keitaro walked over to some action figures. When one caught his eye. A warrior holding a sword in his hands with a female behind him. Shinobu was carrying about three teddy bears. She said, “There were some more over there. So I picked out the three I like.” Keitaro said, “I will be right back.” He run to the front and grabbed a shopping cart. He brought it back and said, “This way we can go shopping and our arms wouldn’t get sore from carrying all the toys.” He picked up the figurine he saw and put it into the cart alone with her toys. Keitaro removed a credit card and said, “I have paid this off which means I will be using it like crazy for a couple days.” Shinobu said, “I can put two of them back if you want?” He looked at her and said, “Sorry I was talking to myself. And besides I would like to see you happy.” She nodded her head and took the cart and started to walk again. Keitaro walked next to her but a step behind. They were going though all the toys the store has when Shinobu picked one up and said, “This one looks like you Sempai?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You are right. And this one looks like you.” He picked the one up that looked like her. They both laughed and they put them in to the cart. Forty-five minutes later they were done shopping. They had about five bags full of toys. Shinobu said, “I had a fun time. I don’t mean to call you ‘Sempai’ all those times.” He smiled and said, “Don’t worry about it. I do feel like an elder. You ready to head back now.” That is when someone jumped onto his back. Keitaro dropped the bags and got ready to attack the person when Shinobu said, “Su.”
Su climbed down Keitaro’s back and said, “Shinobu. What are you doing out here.” Keitaro turned around and looked at the girl over. He lowered his eyes and did a scan of her.
Target: Su
Threat: Unknown
Action: Find out who they are more
Shinobu said, “Keitaro. Please don’t.” Keitaro relaxed and said, “Sorry. She scared me that is all.” Shinobu said, “Su. What are you doing in town?” Su smiled and said, “Went shopping with Kitusne. When I saw you over here with this man.” Shinobu smiled and said, “This is Keitaro Urashima.” Keitaro lowered a bit when someone said, “Su, Shinobu.” Keitaro looked at the person as they got close. They were grinning for some reason. Shinobu smiled and said, “Kitsune.” Keitaro leaned up against the building when he saw the girl checking him out. Shinobu said, “How about all of us return to the Hinata House for something to eat.” Keitaro stood up and picked up the bags.
Kitsune walked up next to him and said, “So you are her grandson.” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Please don’t think about it.” Shinobu heard that and said, “Sempai. You all right.” He nodded his head and continue walking. Shinobu walked next to Kitsune and Su. Ten minutes later the dorm came into view.
I know this is short so please understand that I have three on the go at the moment and this is a new one to me about something’s so please be nice to me and tell me what I can to make it better.
Please be nice if I might make a mistake and I will fix them.
I am going to be using different typing to tell everyone what is going on with everyone. Like when it is in Italic it will mean thinking when it is in bold it mean upset about something.
When I put 888888, it means a Flashback.
There is some swearing in this chapter
Chapter 1 The Girl’s Dorm
The years went by and Keitaro had kept that promise to the girl but he forgotten her face and her name. All he could remember of her was her voice and hair. He was about 20 years old now. He moved out of his home with his parents because it was too hard on him to be so far from his school. He had to catch a bus to get there. About a year before he got a letter from his Grandmother saying she want’s to see him. So he was at school when the letter came thought the mail. When he got home his parents told him what is going on. He walked to his room and stayed in there for a few days. He didn’t cry for the longest time now. He would not show fear to anyone. He had made up his mind and told them that he is moving out. They didn’t mind because it was hard on him to train so far away from his school. He told them he would move in with grandma for a bit until he finds himself a place to stay.His mom smiled and said, “You take care of yourself when you are there.” He hugged her and then said, “You know I will.” His dad didn’t say anything but looked at him. So he gave him a hug also then left. As his parents watch him leave with his bag over his shoulder he was happy to be on the move again.
He looked at the inn and said, “It sure hasn’t changed from the last time I saw it. I might as well go and talk to Haruka for a bit.” He walked over to the tea shop and walked in. Haruka was reading the paper because the rush was over for the time begin. When she heard the bell ringing as someone walked in. She stood up and said, “How can I help you.” She turned around and saw a person standing there with a bag over his shoulder. The person dropped their bag and said, “Haruka. Tell you haven’t forgotten me all these years.” She said, “Keitaro. Is that you?” Keitaro fixed his hair and said, “Who do you think it would be. Your knight in shining armor?” She removed a fan from her pocket and bonked him on the head with it. He smiled and said, “How I miss you bonking me on the head.” She put her arms around him and said, “Keitaro. What are you doing here?” She lead him over to a empty table and they sat down. He looked at her and said, “I moved out. But don’t worry they know. It was hard for me to go to school from home. So I thought I would live here with Grandma for a bit then find a place of my own.”
Haruka smiled and thought, ‘I forgot how cute he looks. Besides there is Motoko who has taking his heart. I would like to know if he still remember’s here?’
Keitaro touched Haruka on the shoulder and said, “You all right? You were gone there for a moment?” Haruka smiled and said, “I am fine. Thinking that is all.” Keitaro touched her on the shoulder and said, “You know you weird.” Then she bonked him on the head again for the second time today. He smiled at her and said, “Sorry. But it is true.” She rolled her eyes at him and said, “So. How has your training coming alone?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Better. But slow. I don’t know why but I can’t focus on my training anymore. After that day she left. I promise I would protect everyone I still don’t know.”
Haruka smiled and said, “You don’t have to worry. You can rest and train here if you want?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You mean that Haruka. You will let me stay here and train.” She nodded her head and thought ‘He is going to be upset about this but I have to tell him about her not being here. And she turned it into a girl’s dorm.’ Haruka smiled at him which made him tilt his head to one side and said, “What is going on?” She reached into her apron and removed a cigarette and lighted it. She took drag of it and said, “Granny isn’t here. She went on a trip around the world.” Keitaro leaned back and said, “Now I know where I get it from. I don’t like being in one place too long.” Haruka said, “Keitaro. You have to understand that she isn’t here anymore but I am.” He closed his eyes and said, “Haruka. May I stay?” She shook her head and said, “I don’t know. You being who you are and everything?” Keitaro reached into his bag and said, “Then you might not want these then?” Showing her a pack of smokes he picked up for her. She looked at him in the eyes and said, “You little bastard. You know my one weakness. Also I know yours?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You are not going to say it are you?”
She smiled and said, “You have a crush?” He turned bright red and said, “You a pain.” She nodded her head because it was true. She shook her head and said, “How about we go and visit the dorm and I will introduce you to everyone there.” Keitaro looked at her and said, “I would like a cup of tea you use to make for me when I was here?” She looked at him and said, “You are the real pain.” She got up and walked to the kitchen to do up his tea for him.
He smiled and said, “I miss her. I would like to know that I keep on thinking about her but I don’t know what she looks like anymore. All I could remember was her hair that is all.” Haruka smiled and said, “Don’t worry it will come back to you.” A couple of minutes later the Tea was ready and she brought it out for him. Then the door open again and a girl in her early teens looked around until she saw Haruka. She came over and said, “Haruka-san. I need some advice.” Keitaro got up and said, “I will be outback if you need me. Aunt Haruka.” He started to run when a tray was thrown at his head. He heard it hit the wall and then raspberry her. Haruka said, “You are going to get it later mister. Now what is wrong Shinobu?” Shinobu sat down and said, “Naru. She told me that the cooking wasn’t right. But I tried my best.” She started to cry so Haruka put her arms around her and said, “It is all right Shinobu. Let is all out.” Keitaro who was standing out back heard the talking going on inside her the young girl telling what is going on. He heard her name was Shinobu. Keitaro sat down and thought, ‘I was like that once. Crying on Haruka’s shoulder. But that day when I put my life on the line for her was the best thing I have done. I would like to know if she still remember’s me?’
Haruka said, “Shinobu. You want me to talk to Naru for you?” She nodded her head and said, “Ok. Keitaro?” Keitaro poked his head in and said, “Yes.” Haruka saw that he was worried about the young girl and said, “This is Shinobu. Shinobu this is Keitaro my Nephew.” Keitaro walked up to her and said, “Nice to meet you. I am honored to meet someone like you.” Shinobu blushed and said, “I am sorry abut I over heard you two talking in here. Shinobu. You want to walk around town with me while Haruka talks to Naru?”
Shinobu smiled and said, “You don’t mind?” She walked up to her and touched her head and said, “I don’t’ mind besides I would like to know you better and Haruka knows I wouldn’t do anything to someone like you.” Haruka nodded her head and said, “Ok. She is in your care for the time begin Keitaro.” He nodded his head and removed something from his bag and said, “Don’t worry. I will protect her.” Then he saw the young girl smile at him and then he said, “Who are you?” She smiled at him and said, “You have to find out.” Shinobu touched his arm and said, “You alright?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Remembering something that is all.” Haruka nodded her head and said, “Ok. You two have some fun.” Keitaro put his arm out and said, “May I?” Shinobu put her arm around his and they walked into town.
Haruka smiled and walked over to the dorm where she saw Naru on the couch reading a book. Haruka walked up to her and said, “I heard what you said to Shinobu.” Naru looked up and said, “I didn’t mean to say something like that.” Haruka took Naru’s book from her and said, “She was crying. Next time I am not going to be nice to you.” Then Haruka walked out. Naru moaned and said, “Like I care.” Keitaro looked at Shinobu and said, “You feeling better?” Shinobu looked at him and said, “You know I am having a great time with you.” Keitaro saw a toy store and said, “You want to do some shopping?” He pointed to the toy store. Shinobu smiled and said, “You don’t mind shopping with me?” Keitaro shook his head and said, “I don’t mind. I will pay for anything you pay for.” She kissed his cheek when he started to blush. Then he remember the girl from his pasted kissed him on the same cheek. Shinobu said, “Sempai?” He smiled at her and said, “Sorry about that. I didn’t mean too. Shinobu-chan.” It was her turn to blush he smiled at her and said, “I didn’t know you would brush that much when I call you it.” She rubbed her cheeks to get the redness down. He took her by the hand and lead her in.
Shinobu looked at all the toys. Keitaro walked over to some action figures. When one caught his eye. A warrior holding a sword in his hands with a female behind him. Shinobu was carrying about three teddy bears. She said, “There were some more over there. So I picked out the three I like.” Keitaro said, “I will be right back.” He run to the front and grabbed a shopping cart. He brought it back and said, “This way we can go shopping and our arms wouldn’t get sore from carrying all the toys.” He picked up the figurine he saw and put it into the cart alone with her toys. Keitaro removed a credit card and said, “I have paid this off which means I will be using it like crazy for a couple days.” Shinobu said, “I can put two of them back if you want?” He looked at her and said, “Sorry I was talking to myself. And besides I would like to see you happy.” She nodded her head and took the cart and started to walk again. Keitaro walked next to her but a step behind. They were going though all the toys the store has when Shinobu picked one up and said, “This one looks like you Sempai?” Keitaro looked at her and said, “You are right. And this one looks like you.” He picked the one up that looked like her. They both laughed and they put them in to the cart. Forty-five minutes later they were done shopping. They had about five bags full of toys. Shinobu said, “I had a fun time. I don’t mean to call you ‘Sempai’ all those times.” He smiled and said, “Don’t worry about it. I do feel like an elder. You ready to head back now.” That is when someone jumped onto his back. Keitaro dropped the bags and got ready to attack the person when Shinobu said, “Su.”
Su climbed down Keitaro’s back and said, “Shinobu. What are you doing out here.” Keitaro turned around and looked at the girl over. He lowered his eyes and did a scan of her.
Target: Su
Threat: Unknown
Action: Find out who they are more
Shinobu said, “Keitaro. Please don’t.” Keitaro relaxed and said, “Sorry. She scared me that is all.” Shinobu said, “Su. What are you doing in town?” Su smiled and said, “Went shopping with Kitusne. When I saw you over here with this man.” Shinobu smiled and said, “This is Keitaro Urashima.” Keitaro lowered a bit when someone said, “Su, Shinobu.” Keitaro looked at the person as they got close. They were grinning for some reason. Shinobu smiled and said, “Kitsune.” Keitaro leaned up against the building when he saw the girl checking him out. Shinobu said, “How about all of us return to the Hinata House for something to eat.” Keitaro stood up and picked up the bags.
Kitsune walked up next to him and said, “So you are her grandson.” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Please don’t think about it.” Shinobu heard that and said, “Sempai. You all right.” He nodded his head and continue walking. Shinobu walked next to Kitsune and Su. Ten minutes later the dorm came into view.
I know this is short so please understand that I have three on the go at the moment and this is a new one to me about something’s so please be nice to me and tell me what I can to make it better.