Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ Keitaro Secret ❯ The Smile ( Chapter 2 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
Author Note: I don’t own Love Hina. I’m using the characters from the story in mine. This story doesn’t follow the Anime or the Manga it happens in a different time line.
Please be nice if I might make a mistake and I will fix them.
I’m going to be using different typing to tell everyone what is going on with everyone. Like when it is in Italic it will mean thinking when it is in bold it mean upset about something.
When I put 888888, it means a Flashback.
There is some swearing in this chapter
Shinobu had caught up with Keitaro in the bathroom. She knocked on the frame of the door and said, “Keitaro.” He looked at her and said, “Shinobu-chan. What is up.” He grabbed some paper towel to wipe his hand then he felt his angry build up. He closed his hand into a fist and punched the mirror that was there. Shinobu saw the pain come across his face and said, “Keitaro?” He dropped his head and said, “Why. Why do I have to think about her?” Shinobu put her arms around him and said, “Talk to me?” He lowered his arm and said, “Shinobu. I am not being mean but please tell me that you trust me. And afterwards I would like to be alone with my thoughts?” She started to cry and said, “You big stupid idiot. I do trust you.” He smiled and turned on the water again to wash the blood from his hand again. Shinobu giggled and said, “Let me wrap your hand for you?” Before he could say anything she took his hand and started to wrap it. He smiled at her but inside he was upset. He was angry with himself for telling Haruka to bite him. After five minutes she was done and said, “There you do. I am going to leave you know.” She turned around and that is when Keitaro said, “Shinobu. Thanks?” She looked over her shoulder at him and said, “No problem.” Then she left him standing there with his wrapped hand. He looked at the mirror and saw the impact of his hand. He smiled and said, “I can’t wait to get this done and over with.”
Haruka leaned up against the wall and said, “So. What are you going to do now Keitaro?” All the colour from his face drained away and said, “Haruka. How long.” She walked in and said, “You know when I saw you leave I followed you with Shinobu. When she came out she nodded her head telling me that you were still there.” He looked at her and said, “Haruka. I need some help?” That is when Kitsune said, “Keitaro. Are you done in there?” He put his hand into his pocket and said, “Sure. I am going over to the Tea Shop to talk to Haruka for a bit.” Then he left her standing there. Haruka touched Kitsune on the shoulder and said, “Don’t worry. I will talk to him about something’s then he will be back to normal.” Keitaro walked down the stairs then out the front door. Motoko was watching t.v when she saw Keitaro walking past. She was going to say something but his aura was different. It was always blue but now it is changing. Haruka came down a few minutes later and said, “What is wrong Motoko?” Motoko stood up and said, “Keitaro’s aura.” Haruka removed her cigarette and said, “I know. The mood he has being in for the last three days. He hasn’t being himself.”
Keitaro removed his hand and said, “Shit. Why did I have to hurt myself like this over that damn dream. If I have another one like that I don’t know what to do.” He put his hand back into his pocket and went back walking over to the tea shop. Once there he sat down on a bench and waited for Haruka to show up. He dropped his head and waited. Haruka said, “Motoko. I am going to let him stay with me over there. Maybe that will help him with his problem.” Motoko smiled and said, “Ok. Please tell him that I will pray for him.”
This is my second story on this site so please let me know what you think of it so far. I would like someone to proof read it for me. I am going to try to make it better in later chapters.
Please be nice if I might make a mistake and I will fix them.
I’m going to be using different typing to tell everyone what is going on with everyone. Like when it is in Italic it will mean thinking when it is in bold it mean upset about something.
When I put 888888, it means a Flashback.
There is some swearing in this chapter
Chapter 2 The Smile
Keitaro rubbed the back of his head because he had the weirdest dream but he couldn’t understand it. Haruka saw him thinking about something when she said, “Keitaro. I would like to talk to you.” Keitaro looked up and said, “Sure.” Then he went back eating. Thirty minutes later Keitaro got up and said, “I am going to think for a bit.” Haruka said, “Keitaro. Over at the tea shop right now.” Keitaro looked at her and said, “Bite me.” He turned around and punched the wall. Shinobu saw his hand bleeding from the punch. She got up and followed him. Haruka sighed and said, “It is more bad then I thought. Keitaro must have a weird dream for him to act like this.” Motoko said, “When I saw him he looked scared for some reason of me.” Haruka smiled and said, “I might know but let me worry about it.”Shinobu had caught up with Keitaro in the bathroom. She knocked on the frame of the door and said, “Keitaro.” He looked at her and said, “Shinobu-chan. What is up.” He grabbed some paper towel to wipe his hand then he felt his angry build up. He closed his hand into a fist and punched the mirror that was there. Shinobu saw the pain come across his face and said, “Keitaro?” He dropped his head and said, “Why. Why do I have to think about her?” Shinobu put her arms around him and said, “Talk to me?” He lowered his arm and said, “Shinobu. I am not being mean but please tell me that you trust me. And afterwards I would like to be alone with my thoughts?” She started to cry and said, “You big stupid idiot. I do trust you.” He smiled and turned on the water again to wash the blood from his hand again. Shinobu giggled and said, “Let me wrap your hand for you?” Before he could say anything she took his hand and started to wrap it. He smiled at her but inside he was upset. He was angry with himself for telling Haruka to bite him. After five minutes she was done and said, “There you do. I am going to leave you know.” She turned around and that is when Keitaro said, “Shinobu. Thanks?” She looked over her shoulder at him and said, “No problem.” Then she left him standing there with his wrapped hand. He looked at the mirror and saw the impact of his hand. He smiled and said, “I can’t wait to get this done and over with.”
Haruka leaned up against the wall and said, “So. What are you going to do now Keitaro?” All the colour from his face drained away and said, “Haruka. How long.” She walked in and said, “You know when I saw you leave I followed you with Shinobu. When she came out she nodded her head telling me that you were still there.” He looked at her and said, “Haruka. I need some help?” That is when Kitsune said, “Keitaro. Are you done in there?” He put his hand into his pocket and said, “Sure. I am going over to the Tea Shop to talk to Haruka for a bit.” Then he left her standing there. Haruka touched Kitsune on the shoulder and said, “Don’t worry. I will talk to him about something’s then he will be back to normal.” Keitaro walked down the stairs then out the front door. Motoko was watching t.v when she saw Keitaro walking past. She was going to say something but his aura was different. It was always blue but now it is changing. Haruka came down a few minutes later and said, “What is wrong Motoko?” Motoko stood up and said, “Keitaro’s aura.” Haruka removed her cigarette and said, “I know. The mood he has being in for the last three days. He hasn’t being himself.”
Keitaro removed his hand and said, “Shit. Why did I have to hurt myself like this over that damn dream. If I have another one like that I don’t know what to do.” He put his hand back into his pocket and went back walking over to the tea shop. Once there he sat down on a bench and waited for Haruka to show up. He dropped his head and waited. Haruka said, “Motoko. I am going to let him stay with me over there. Maybe that will help him with his problem.” Motoko smiled and said, “Ok. Please tell him that I will pray for him.”
This is my second story on this site so please let me know what you think of it so far. I would like someone to proof read it for me. I am going to try to make it better in later chapters.