Reviewed By: notanauthor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2011 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry but the grammar sucks this isnt original but if you put a bit more work into it then youll become alot better just develop your story a little more and itll become good and make the chapters longer yours is the first fanfiction ive read in years that only took me 5 minutes to read |
