Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ Love Hina: Confessions ❯ Dates and Surprises. ( Chapter 3 )
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By: Havoc80 
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Anime/Manga: Love Hina Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 06.07.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.4K | Visits: 1.4K | Status: Work In Progress
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Anime/Manga: Love Hina Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 06.07.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.4K | Visits: 1.4K | Status: Work In Progress
Confessions.
A/N I do not own Love Hina or anything from it, only Ken Akamatsu owns it and all its characters.
*side note* sorry it has been so long since I updated, with the hoidays and also work, it has been hard to find the time to write, but don't worry I am back and ready to give you guys more.
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' Mitsune...?..why do I let you talk me into these things?' Keitaro thought to himself as he looked himself over on the full body mirror he had on his bedroom wall.
A few minutes later there was a knock at his door, one Shinobu Maehara announced that dinner was ready. Keitaro gave his reply and mentally steeled himself for what he knew was probably the worse possible night of his young adult life, although at the sametime, he was quite excited, or at least very deep down he was, for on the surface he was shaking like a leaf.
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Dinning room.
Everyone was seated at there usual spots, Shinobu was bringing in the food like she noramly did, but if you looked close enough, you would notice that she was not totally concentrating on serving dinner. Part of her mind was still focusing on what she had heard earlier. Mitsune on the other hand had a slight smile on her face, it was not uncommon for her to have such a smile, but this smile was just a little bit different.
' I know I shouldn't do this but......I can't help it!' she exclaimed with glee inside her own head.
" So Motoko, how is your train....ing...." but Naru was cut off as she saw Keitaro enter the room.
He entered the room not wearing his normal clothes that most were accumstomed to seeing him in. Instead he came in sporting a tailored suit complete with shoes and a gold watch. needless to say that everyone's eyes flew open wide, including Mitsune's, and all mouths had hit the top of the table, they were all stunned to say the least.
Keitaro himself was embarrased and yet felt a bit of pride at seeing the reaction he got by them all, he looked over to Mitsune and saw the expression on her face and it made his pride and ego swell up to levels that he never thought were possible, as she was the one that suggested he wear such attire.
' ok, now its time.' he said to himself.
" Mitsune 'Kitsune' Konno...would you do me the honor of going out on a date with me tonight?" he asked her with as much confidence as he could muster, which wasn't much.
They all just sat there staring at him not really hearing the words that had just come out of his mouth. Mitsune especially was having trouble composing herself at the sight of the young man that she had not just mere hours ago confessed her love to. she knew what he was going to be wearing when he asked her on this date, but yet she never took the time to see what he would look like in the suit that she had given him(A/N how she knew his measurements the world may never know.)
" well Mitsune...will you go out with me?" he was starting to get worried, because even though she was looking at him with an awe expression on her face, she had yet to answer him, and don't forget the fact that the more time that passed, was more time that Naru would realize what he was asking, and go on a rampage and punch him into the stratusphere. Finally he saw Mitsune snap out of her revere.
" o-of course Keitaro, I would be happy to." she said with the still look of awe on her face.
" Sempai...?...so you and Mitsune-sempai will not be home for dinner?" Shinobu said, after she finally came out of her own shocked state.of course she knew this was going to happen, but it didn't lessen the impact it had on her, nor the fact that her Sempai was dressed in the way that he was and looking to her anyway, like the fabled White Knight.
" No Shinobu, it doesn't look like we will be." he said with a smile tugging at his lips, but his eyes were still fixed on Naru, for he feared that would soon enact some sort of punishment she thought he would deserve.
" when do you want to leave Keitaro?" she asked while getting up from her seat.
" as soon as possible." he whispered to her. She laughed a little at his comment, she knew why he was so eager to get moving.
As the two walked out of the room, there was a noticable change in temperature, as it became very cold all of a sudden and the sounds of cracking wood could be heard.
Naru was sitting there finally coming out of her own stunned state, she looked at the door as the two would be lovers walked out of it, her grip on the table was so strong that it was groaning in protest.
' THAT PERVERT!' was her only thought. as she got up, she took part of the table with her in each hand. not noticing this, she walked out of the room intent on doing Keitaro bodily harm.
--------------------------------------------------------------- 30 minutes later.
Keitaro and Mitsune had arrived at an exclusive reasturaunt, Keitaro had already known about this place as he had previously landed..or more to the point went through the roof, after one of Naru's and/or Motoko's many pervert bashing phases.
Mitsune herself again for the second time that night, was in a state of awe. if you would have told her just yesterday that Keitaro would bring her to such and exclusive place as this, she would have laughed you right out of the buidling for even suggesting such a thing. And yet here she was standing in front of such a place, with Keitaro no less, not that she was complaining of course.
" Keitaro...this...this is wonderful." was all she could say, as she gazed upon just the door to the building.
" well..you haven't seen anything yet." he said while smiling at his date for the evening. they walked in and was immediately approached by a waiter.
" Ahhh..Mr. Urashima!, its so nice to see you again." the waiter said with a smile that looke like it was splitting his face apart.
" Hello Mako, its good to see you again as well." Keitaro said as politely and smile driven as the waiter before him.
" so I take it this is the lady friend you said you would be bringing here to dine with you tonight?" Mako said while nodding his approval to Keitaro, to which only made Keitaro blush.
" yeah." was his only reply.
" well then, how about I seat you then yes?" the waiter didn't wait for an answer, but instead walked away with the couple in tow towards a table that was in a cornor away from most people and was shadowed over by the lights over head only being at half, there was a single tall candle in the middle of the table that suggested that this table was only reserved for special occasions, and to Keitaro..this was a special occasion.
Time seemed to stop for Mitsune. She had never been taken to a place like this before, oh sure she had been on dates before, and even then they only consisted of going to the bar and having several drinks before they attempted to grope her or proposition her into doing things that your parents attempted to explain to you when you were at a very young age. Now Mitsune had an unsavory reputation of being somewhat lose, but in no means was she. In fact, she was by all rights a virgin, with a vow to herself to stay that was until she felt that the person and the time were right for such a big step. Mitsune so far had never felt any real attraction to any guy before, maybe except for Seta at one point in her life, but she knew now that was just a teenagers crush on an older man, Now she felt that Keitaro was the right guy for her and she had no regrets about confessing her feelings to him, no regrets at all.
" Ketiaro...?" she said his name in a tone that suggested she was eager to say something to him.
" hmmm?" was his reply to her.
" Thank you for bringing me to such a beautfiul place." she said to him with the most sincerest honesty that she had ever known.
" Your very welcome Mitsune Konno." he said to her while looking straight into her eyes.
It was that simple sentence, that made Mitsune's heart flutter like a butterfly on steriods, as noone had made her feel this way ever. To say that Mitsune was in love at this moment would be an understatement of the century, again time stopped for Mitsune Konno, all she saw in her world was Keitaro, the man that she for the first time in her life, was truely in love with.
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After Dinner.
For Keitaro and Mitsune it was proably the most pleasureable experience any of them had in their entire lives. Keitaro thought so because for once he was not being accused of being a pervert, being punched by Naru or having one of Motoko's Ki attacks thrown at him for him just being plain clumsy..well, most of the time. But as the old saying goes *All good things must end*, and for Keitaro that could never be more truer.
" YOU PERVERT!!" was the only thing he heard before he was once again launched into orbit around the earth, courtesy of Naru Air.
" NARUSEGAWA!!...WHY!!" it was the voice that brought Naru out of her muderous gaze.
" huh..?...what?" was her intelligent response.
" WHY!!..WHY!! DID YOU HIT HIM THIS TIME!!" Mitsune had ceased to exist and Kitsune had taken over and was extremely angered at her best friend for knocking her date into earth's orbit.
" what do you mean Mitsune?" was the innocent reply from Naru.
" do you hate me that much Naru?" Kitsune's tone dropped to a dangerously low tone.
" of course I don't hate you Mitsune, but he was acting like a PERVERT again." she said the word pervert with a bit more venom in her voice.
" and how may I ask, was he being a pervert?" Kitsune's tone was still low and becoming more dangerously so, a fact that did not go un-noticed by Naru.
" w-w-well..ummm..I-I.." Naru was stuttering all over the place.
" don't know?" she asked her supposedly best friend, but yet she couldn't help feel amused at her friend's reaction.
" no..I don't" was Naru's short reply.
" thats what I thought, have you ever stopped to think things threw before you act, or do you always just shoot first and ask questions later?" Kitsune was in full swing at this point, and she fully intended on giving Naru what she so richly deserved.
" I'm..sorry Mitsune, I-I just felt...jealous." it was the first time Naru had ever admitted that she might have a semblence of feelilngs for the 3rd year ronin. This however would not deter Kitsune from her ultimate goal, and that was being with Keitaro.
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A/N well here it is, chapter 3, I hoped you enjoyed it, and thanks to my beta-reader Major Mike Powell III I think you will, on another note, I have removed the entire story and reposted it, as I felt with the changes that my beta-reader did for me it would only seem right to give everyone that has already read the story and also new readers the benefit of better grammar and flow of the story, considering that I think Fanfiction has some trouble transfering doc's and the reason why I say this is because even though I have a good beta-reader some people still found spelling errors, so I don't know, well enjoy.
A/N I do not own Love Hina or anything from it, only Ken Akamatsu owns it and all its characters.
*side note* sorry it has been so long since I updated, with the hoidays and also work, it has been hard to find the time to write, but don't worry I am back and ready to give you guys more.
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' Mitsune...?..why do I let you talk me into these things?' Keitaro thought to himself as he looked himself over on the full body mirror he had on his bedroom wall.
A few minutes later there was a knock at his door, one Shinobu Maehara announced that dinner was ready. Keitaro gave his reply and mentally steeled himself for what he knew was probably the worse possible night of his young adult life, although at the sametime, he was quite excited, or at least very deep down he was, for on the surface he was shaking like a leaf.
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Dinning room.
Everyone was seated at there usual spots, Shinobu was bringing in the food like she noramly did, but if you looked close enough, you would notice that she was not totally concentrating on serving dinner. Part of her mind was still focusing on what she had heard earlier. Mitsune on the other hand had a slight smile on her face, it was not uncommon for her to have such a smile, but this smile was just a little bit different.
' I know I shouldn't do this but......I can't help it!' she exclaimed with glee inside her own head.
" So Motoko, how is your train....ing...." but Naru was cut off as she saw Keitaro enter the room.
He entered the room not wearing his normal clothes that most were accumstomed to seeing him in. Instead he came in sporting a tailored suit complete with shoes and a gold watch. needless to say that everyone's eyes flew open wide, including Mitsune's, and all mouths had hit the top of the table, they were all stunned to say the least.
Keitaro himself was embarrased and yet felt a bit of pride at seeing the reaction he got by them all, he looked over to Mitsune and saw the expression on her face and it made his pride and ego swell up to levels that he never thought were possible, as she was the one that suggested he wear such attire.
' ok, now its time.' he said to himself.
" Mitsune 'Kitsune' Konno...would you do me the honor of going out on a date with me tonight?" he asked her with as much confidence as he could muster, which wasn't much.
They all just sat there staring at him not really hearing the words that had just come out of his mouth. Mitsune especially was having trouble composing herself at the sight of the young man that she had not just mere hours ago confessed her love to. she knew what he was going to be wearing when he asked her on this date, but yet she never took the time to see what he would look like in the suit that she had given him(A/N how she knew his measurements the world may never know.)
" well Mitsune...will you go out with me?" he was starting to get worried, because even though she was looking at him with an awe expression on her face, she had yet to answer him, and don't forget the fact that the more time that passed, was more time that Naru would realize what he was asking, and go on a rampage and punch him into the stratusphere. Finally he saw Mitsune snap out of her revere.
" o-of course Keitaro, I would be happy to." she said with the still look of awe on her face.
" Sempai...?...so you and Mitsune-sempai will not be home for dinner?" Shinobu said, after she finally came out of her own shocked state.of course she knew this was going to happen, but it didn't lessen the impact it had on her, nor the fact that her Sempai was dressed in the way that he was and looking to her anyway, like the fabled White Knight.
" No Shinobu, it doesn't look like we will be." he said with a smile tugging at his lips, but his eyes were still fixed on Naru, for he feared that would soon enact some sort of punishment she thought he would deserve.
" when do you want to leave Keitaro?" she asked while getting up from her seat.
" as soon as possible." he whispered to her. She laughed a little at his comment, she knew why he was so eager to get moving.
As the two walked out of the room, there was a noticable change in temperature, as it became very cold all of a sudden and the sounds of cracking wood could be heard.
Naru was sitting there finally coming out of her own stunned state, she looked at the door as the two would be lovers walked out of it, her grip on the table was so strong that it was groaning in protest.
' THAT PERVERT!' was her only thought. as she got up, she took part of the table with her in each hand. not noticing this, she walked out of the room intent on doing Keitaro bodily harm.
--------------------------------------------------------------- 30 minutes later.
Keitaro and Mitsune had arrived at an exclusive reasturaunt, Keitaro had already known about this place as he had previously landed..or more to the point went through the roof, after one of Naru's and/or Motoko's many pervert bashing phases.
Mitsune herself again for the second time that night, was in a state of awe. if you would have told her just yesterday that Keitaro would bring her to such and exclusive place as this, she would have laughed you right out of the buidling for even suggesting such a thing. And yet here she was standing in front of such a place, with Keitaro no less, not that she was complaining of course.
" Keitaro...this...this is wonderful." was all she could say, as she gazed upon just the door to the building.
" well..you haven't seen anything yet." he said while smiling at his date for the evening. they walked in and was immediately approached by a waiter.
" Ahhh..Mr. Urashima!, its so nice to see you again." the waiter said with a smile that looke like it was splitting his face apart.
" Hello Mako, its good to see you again as well." Keitaro said as politely and smile driven as the waiter before him.
" so I take it this is the lady friend you said you would be bringing here to dine with you tonight?" Mako said while nodding his approval to Keitaro, to which only made Keitaro blush.
" yeah." was his only reply.
" well then, how about I seat you then yes?" the waiter didn't wait for an answer, but instead walked away with the couple in tow towards a table that was in a cornor away from most people and was shadowed over by the lights over head only being at half, there was a single tall candle in the middle of the table that suggested that this table was only reserved for special occasions, and to Keitaro..this was a special occasion.
Time seemed to stop for Mitsune. She had never been taken to a place like this before, oh sure she had been on dates before, and even then they only consisted of going to the bar and having several drinks before they attempted to grope her or proposition her into doing things that your parents attempted to explain to you when you were at a very young age. Now Mitsune had an unsavory reputation of being somewhat lose, but in no means was she. In fact, she was by all rights a virgin, with a vow to herself to stay that was until she felt that the person and the time were right for such a big step. Mitsune so far had never felt any real attraction to any guy before, maybe except for Seta at one point in her life, but she knew now that was just a teenagers crush on an older man, Now she felt that Keitaro was the right guy for her and she had no regrets about confessing her feelings to him, no regrets at all.
" Ketiaro...?" she said his name in a tone that suggested she was eager to say something to him.
" hmmm?" was his reply to her.
" Thank you for bringing me to such a beautfiul place." she said to him with the most sincerest honesty that she had ever known.
" Your very welcome Mitsune Konno." he said to her while looking straight into her eyes.
It was that simple sentence, that made Mitsune's heart flutter like a butterfly on steriods, as noone had made her feel this way ever. To say that Mitsune was in love at this moment would be an understatement of the century, again time stopped for Mitsune Konno, all she saw in her world was Keitaro, the man that she for the first time in her life, was truely in love with.
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After Dinner.
For Keitaro and Mitsune it was proably the most pleasureable experience any of them had in their entire lives. Keitaro thought so because for once he was not being accused of being a pervert, being punched by Naru or having one of Motoko's Ki attacks thrown at him for him just being plain clumsy..well, most of the time. But as the old saying goes *All good things must end*, and for Keitaro that could never be more truer.
" YOU PERVERT!!" was the only thing he heard before he was once again launched into orbit around the earth, courtesy of Naru Air.
" NARUSEGAWA!!...WHY!!" it was the voice that brought Naru out of her muderous gaze.
" huh..?...what?" was her intelligent response.
" WHY!!..WHY!! DID YOU HIT HIM THIS TIME!!" Mitsune had ceased to exist and Kitsune had taken over and was extremely angered at her best friend for knocking her date into earth's orbit.
" what do you mean Mitsune?" was the innocent reply from Naru.
" do you hate me that much Naru?" Kitsune's tone dropped to a dangerously low tone.
" of course I don't hate you Mitsune, but he was acting like a PERVERT again." she said the word pervert with a bit more venom in her voice.
" and how may I ask, was he being a pervert?" Kitsune's tone was still low and becoming more dangerously so, a fact that did not go un-noticed by Naru.
" w-w-well..ummm..I-I.." Naru was stuttering all over the place.
" don't know?" she asked her supposedly best friend, but yet she couldn't help feel amused at her friend's reaction.
" no..I don't" was Naru's short reply.
" thats what I thought, have you ever stopped to think things threw before you act, or do you always just shoot first and ask questions later?" Kitsune was in full swing at this point, and she fully intended on giving Naru what she so richly deserved.
" I'm..sorry Mitsune, I-I just felt...jealous." it was the first time Naru had ever admitted that she might have a semblence of feelilngs for the 3rd year ronin. This however would not deter Kitsune from her ultimate goal, and that was being with Keitaro.
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A/N well here it is, chapter 3, I hoped you enjoyed it, and thanks to my beta-reader Major Mike Powell III I think you will, on another note, I have removed the entire story and reposted it, as I felt with the changes that my beta-reader did for me it would only seem right to give everyone that has already read the story and also new readers the benefit of better grammar and flow of the story, considering that I think Fanfiction has some trouble transfering doc's and the reason why I say this is because even though I have a good beta-reader some people still found spelling errors, so I don't know, well enjoy.