| "Love Hina: Confessions" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Notjustmeoryou On: April 26, 2008 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY hope you plan to add more to this wonderful tale.. and that you do not just leave it where you have!! PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE.
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Reviewed By: Meeks On: August 01, 2007 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic and I'm hoping to see it continued. The idea of all the girls confessing their true feelings to Keitaro all being started by Kitsune is original. Hopefully you will continue this soon here or at fanfiction.net. If its here could you let me know at dragon_cloud16@yahoo.com or if your going to upload it to fanfiction.net.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Nysk01 On: July 03, 2007 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work here, i do hope you will post more sometime soon.
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Title: do it
Reviewed By: aaron mourner On: June 04, 2007 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i have to say is make the next few chapters dont leave me hanging
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Title: a nice start
Reviewed By: z-ro On: May 06, 2007 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This two chapters are an interesting start. Kitsune as a character can change from story to story easily, but you keep her in a playful banter that keeps her in character with the limited information your story gives. You dont spend much time with the other characters but a glimpse of Shinobu and Naru push the story along and the plot is able to spread out in any direction at the end of chapter 2. Its very nice.
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