Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ The Love Hina Heartbreak ❯ Keitaro Urashima's Grand Plan Part 2 ( Chapter 11 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

I do not own Love Hina.  It is owned by Ken Akamatsu

WARNING!  The following contains heartbreak, break ups, sex, and other Hentai scenes.  If this isn't your type of story at all, or you're too young to be reading this...turn back now.
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The night was still young, and everybody was rather excited about fixing up the inn.  Keitaro decided to leave the garden where it was.  He knew that Mutsumi really loved fresh-grown watermelons..or any grown watermelons  Su's lab was going to go by the wayside.  She ended up taking out all of the equipment.  She reasoned that she probably can use her powers for good instead of evil  Motoko would finally get a chance to be a contributing member of society.  She's even asked Keitaro to show her how to make basic repairs.  Kitsune still has her job at the tea shop...but now, she's turning in written assignments for the local paper.  She's also working hard on her creative writing courses.  It seems everybody, but Naru, as moved on.  Her day was about to get a lot worse.  Haitani got to Shirai, and he canceled the date.  He heard from Keitaro who was talking to Haruka about it off-handed.  Naru was beyond reproach.  

"Motherfucker!  There's no way this could be happening!" Naru cursed.

"There's no way what could be happening," Kanako asked seriously.

"It's none of your business!" she hissed.

"Drop the attitude," she ordered.

"What's going on," Tsuruko asked.  

"We are having a discussion on why Shirai canceled," Kanako answered.  "Yes...everybody knows."

"How...did everybody find out?" Naru then asked...nearly ready to punch a hole in the wall.

"That's rather blatantly obvious," Kanako said.  "You know Haitani and Shirai won't keep quiet about it."

"Really, this is interesting," Tsuruko added.

The two left Naru who was in an obvious lurch.  She really didn't know what was going on.  However, it appears that her world was about to come crumbling down.  Meanwhile, Keitaro decided he was going to leave the layout as it was.  It would had been way too expensive to tear it down, and then rebuild.  He also wanted to keep the hot springs as it was.  He reasoned it would be the most prominent feature.  Hina saw his plans to modernize, and she nodded.

"You know..." she started, "if you can get a good bid, you can get a quality job."

"That's true, but I don't want to be taken for a ride."

"Don't be crude," she barked, "ask for references!"

"Oh yeah, they have to keep that on file!" He then said. "I'll make an inventory of what needs to be done."

"From there you can get an estimated cost and put in for bids."

"This will have to include the tea shop," Haruka said interrupting.  

"I didn't forget about you," he then said.

"Good, now the way I see it...everything is starting to work out," Haruka smiled.

While that was going on, Keitaro decided he was going to go get rest.  He was quite drained from the planning that has happened.  He couldn't tell how things were going to go.  He decided he was going to lie down to get some sort of sleep.  He has been up most of the day.  Before he could even think about it...he heard a very loud crash.  He shot up and ran into the direction where it came from.  He didn't even bother to stop for Hina who didn't even know what was going on.   He ran in, and he saw Naru just on the floor.  She had a black eye...and the nominally nicer Shinobu standing over her.  He had to hold everybody back.  Particularly since it could had gotten nasty.  It did.  Naru tried to pop Shinobu to the stratosphere  Amazingly, she dodged, ducked, and decked Naru dead on her non-blacked eye.  This caused her to fall down again.  Motoko stepped in to stop everything.  Amazingly, Shinobu stopped.  She pushed her aside to give Naru a piece of her mind.

"Naru...you really do suck," Shinobu said.  "You're acting like an asshole."

"Shinobu, you don't know what you're saying," Naru tried say.

"Now...you do not come into my room and act like a bitch...ever."

Keitaro knew enough was enough.  Tsuruko got Naru out of the way before damage really could be done.  He took Shinobu aside and asked her exactly what was going on.  She then explained that in the time where Naru and Motoko were messing about, she took the opportunity to go to self-defense classes.  He saw a red face, and a few scratches.  He didn't even need to ask who started.  The fight, was Keitaro's last straw.  He went down to Naru and handed her a pair of sunglasses, and money.  

"Naru...just go to a hotel room, or go home to your family while renovations are complete," he said.

"Why are you taking her word over mine?" she whined.

"That is precisely why," he said.  "Just be grateful I'm not throwing you out."

Naru had zero choice.  She packed about a month's worth of clothing, and went to the nearest motel.  Keitaro then after, got the final cost estimate.  This was definitely within budget, and he wanted to do the best job he could.  He also decided he'd better go pay for his own materials.  He knew he's have to go take Su with him.  He had heard that once the materials were brought from his own pocket, he'd know exactly what's happening.  Once the work started, everybody was excited.  Kitsune stuck around, and wrote down exactly how to remodel a kitchen.  She also had done some research, and actually helped in some of the jobs.  In fact, everybody, except Naru helped out.  The crew was thankful.  About a month, or so later, everything was finished.  Naru returned...she was in definite awe.  The inn was better, than before.  At this time the rest, except for Kanako, had returned home.

"Welcome back," Haruka said, "I take it you were forced out by orders."

"Yeah," Naru then said, "I was."

"I'll level with you...you ain't been a saint here."

"What do you mean?" Naru asked, genuinely confused.

"I have let you run around with zero consequences..."

"What are you saying?"

"Let me be honest, you are the cause of everything that has happened."

Naru felt like she was punched in the stomach.  Haruka was right.   Naru could have done a lot more to make the place a very pleasant dorm to stay.  She went in, and she went into her bedroom.  It was just as everybody else's.  She looked around, and everything was just where she had it.  She then sighed, and sat down on her desk.  She felt that even Haruka was against her.  She also didn't know that Shinobu could throw hard fists for an often gentle girl.  She opted to not let the events of last month bother her...until...

"Naru," Kitsune said, "You have a phone call...it's your sister, Mei."

"I'll get it," she said.  

"It definitely is a nicer place...even the springs were updated to be more efficient," she then said wistfully

"I'll check it out later," she said.  

She went to the phone to talk to her sister.  She was checking to see if she was alright.  She also was trying hard to get Naru to come home, to deal with her problems.  Naru declined saying she was busy.  Mei apologized for bothering her, and hung up.  The conversation took all of ten minutes.  Mutsumi then saw what happened.  She wanted to talk, but Naru gave her the brush off...now she was beginning to see Keitaro's point of view.

"You really are mean," Mutsumi said.  "I'm not your friend anymore."

"Wait, I didn't mean to..." Naru tried.

"You shouldn't have treated your sister like that!" she said, with tears streaming from her eyes.  "Kanako and Keitaro even made right!"

"Don't bring up that dork!"

"HE'S NOT A DORK!"  

That sent Mutsumi running upstairs, crying.  That exchange was seen by Motoko who had finished her homework.  She shook her head.  Before Naru could say anything...Motoko did something she really should have done in the first place.  She had walked calmly up to Naru and slapped her clear across the face.  

"Now...I see why he broke up with you," Motoko said.

"You're going to take the word of a pervert?" Naru hissed.

"I will," Motoko then said, "even if he was a pervert, he still Didn't deserve what he's received."

"He deserved everything he has got!"

"No...he has exactly what he deserves...a family who loves him...also new friends to back him up."

Motoko walked away before Naru could whine some more.  She gave her a look of regret.  That meant she regretted everything that she has done with Naru...including being her toy.  She decided that she's had enough with Naru.  She went to speak with Keitaro who was about to go on his digs.  She saw a very rather dejected Mutsumi who was crying in the corner of his bedroom.  He decided that he needed help.  Hina has long left...and of course...he decided to ask his parents for help!  He made the call, and his mom was more than willing.  She was going to be there after he had left.  

"Where did Keitaro go?" Su asked.

"Oh, he had to go on a dig with Seta," Shinobu answered.

"I wonder if he'll have fun," she said quite happily.

"I think he will, though it's quite hard work."

"Is it harder than math?"

"It is," Shinobu said with a chuckle, "it's a lot harder, since they have to do a lot of research."

"It isn't like Indiana Jones?"

"I'm afraid not, he's been at the library doing a lot of research."

"I wonder what I'll do when I go to college..."

"That's something to think about...especially since we have to take the entrance exams."

"I hope I don't fall into the traps..." Su said quite dully.

"I think we've learned our lessons from Keitaro and Naru."

"I also learned my lesson from you...you hit hard!"

"I hope I never have to do that again."

"Maybe you can take up an art," Su suggested.

"Yeah, I'll ask Motoko about that," Shinobu agreed.

"Ask me about what?" Motoko asked.  She was quite lost.

"Oh, I was figuring I'd take a martial arts class."

"I think there's a spot open in my class, you are welcomed to join," Motoko then said.

Shinobu smiled. She knew she'd make a lot more friends if she'd get out more.  The girls have been getting to know each other.  However, it seems that Naru is still stuck in her behavior...from a year and a half ago.  As they were thinking about things...Keitaro was on his plane to Peru.  He was thinking about how he was going to change himself.  He wanted to change himself even more.  His personality was better...but his looks...well...he reasoned he did not want to be a Seta-clone.  He looked in the reflection in the glass...and decided, the first thing he was going to do was get rid of his blocky glasses.
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