Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ The Love Nest ❯ The work continues ( Chapter 15 )

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Love Hina those rights belong solely to those who own the licenses for the storyline. This storyline however is mine I would greatly disapprove anyone who perjured it. Constructive criticism is to be greatly appreciated as I do read any and all comments. Also I am looking for a good beta reader, so if anyone would like the job send me an e-mail to graybear32@yahoo.com telling me how to go about it and I will work with you. Now that the legal mumbo jumbo is taken care of…ON WITH THE STORY.

Keitaro and Naru joined the others in the foyer area to great their guest. When he saw them enter Mr. Jeffries quickly stood up and walked over to them.
“Keitaro my boy it’s good to see you. And this little lady must be the fiancée that your aunt was telling me about. She was right nothing should come between a man and so charming a lady. Now your lawyer should be commended he drew up some top-notch forms here. I haven’t seen form this fair in quite a while. Now if we can get down to business what all do you need done?”
“Introductions must come first, Mr. Jeffries. This beautiful woman standing next to me is as you guessed my fiancé Narusagawa, Naru.”
“Very pleased to meet you little lady. You lucky man here saved me a couple of thousand dollars a day for a year when on of my construction sites found some old temple in the states. So I am glad to meet you indeed if there’s anything at all I can do for you don’t hesitate to ask.”
Naru blushed as she accepted his hand and replied “Mr. Jeffries my Keitaro has been doing things like that since I have known him so what you tell me doesn’t surprise me and thank you for you kindness.”
Keitaro then continued with the introductions "The girl standing next to the television set is Aoyama, Motoko the finest swordswoman that you will ever meet.”
Mr. Jeffries bowed to her “Sorry ma'am I ask you to please forgive my American rudeness, but are you a student of Kendo?”
“I am a student of the Aoyama-ryu style of swordsmanship Mr. Jeffries which is far more advanced than mere Kendo I assure you. And as to your manners you are, forgive the term giajin or outsider so you have never really learned proper decorum, so there is nothing to forgive.” Motoko replied returning his bow.
“Mr. Jeffries I would like you to meet one of the finest cooks in the whole of Japan Maehara, Shinobu.”
“A distinct pleasure little lady.”
“The girl in the easy chair is Otohime, Mutsumi.”
“Delighted.”
“The Girl next to the radio is Konno, Mitsune.”
“Nice to meet you. Don’t you go to the club downtown?”
“I used to.” Mitsune replied smiling slightly, “But I am no longer in the mood to frequent clubs and bars it has been very telling on my health.”
“Good for you young lady. Too many of my own family overindulge and now they are paying for it in their old age. And who is this charming young lady?”
“This charming young lady is my adopted sister Kanako Mr. Jeffries.”
“You, young lady are one of the most beautiful women I have ever met. You might want to think about traveling to You would become famous, I would bet on it.”
Kanako just smiled and nodded.
“And last but not least this is our resident genius and all around inventor Kaolla-Su first princess of Molmol.”
“Very pleased to meet you, your highness.” Mr. Jeffries said bowing again.
“Now that you have met everyone properly Mr. Jeffries shall we get to work?” Keitaro asked as he and Naru moved towards the smaller couch.
“If you insist son, where shall we begin?”
“These young ladies are my best friends in the world and they wanted to help me complete the renovations. For the next week or so I think we should go out and actually visit the outer building sites to see what needs to be done for them.”
“Sounds reasonable to me.” Mr. Jeffries said grinning. “But why do we have all of these beautiful ladies present? Not that I mind, but I have never been one for distractions son.”
“Well sir, these young ladies are going to help the architects redesign the buildings. They will be working closely with your construction teams. They will be overseeing the completion of each of the buildings and report to me if there are any problems. Then if anything arises they will report it to me and I will, in turn take it to you and the city counsel.”
“You have the most beautiful overseers that I have ever had the pleasure to work with then. Now what Building are we going to start with today?”
“Do you have your architect or artist with you?”
“I never go anywhere without him my boy. This guy has been designing everything from Buildings to space stations since he was twelve. He is the best boy, the very best.”
“Good. If the rest of you girls would like to take the rest of the day for yourselves Mr. Jeffries, Naru and I will be going over to the annex. We will probably be back shortly after supper so leave us something to eat, Ok Kaolla.”
With that they walked out into the muggy summer afternoon.
On the way there Mr. Jeffries made small talk about the weather and the state of things in the world in general. But Keitaro never paid much attention he was thoroughly engrossed with just enjoying the walk and holding hands with Naru. It was bringing him a measure of peace that he had never known just to be walking close to her today.

Naru was thinking along different lines. Although she was thoroughly enjoying her walk with Keitaro she was highly aggravated about what this business had interrupted. She was supposed to get to have her way with Keitaro. She did not want to be walking out to a nearly collapsed building just to make a list of necessary repairs.
The old man that had joined them shortly after leaving the apartments seemed to be more of a walking art store than anything else Naru surmised. He had a bag of different colored chalks in one hand and a bag of rulers, different sized t-squares and pencils in the other. He had an easel strapped to his back that held at least five reams of paper. When he had first joined them he reminded her of those old American cartoons that showed people pulling all sorts of stuff out of unlikely places. They were told his name was Jeremiah Dogel and that he was born in during the big war, but Naru suspected that he was even older than that.
As they approached the nearly collapsed building though Mr. Dogel seemed to come alive he quickly set up his supplies and started asking questions of Naru.
“Do you think that the original building’s foundation size is going to be large enough miss?”
“I was just informed what building I was in charge of this morning Mr. Dogel.” Naru replied “but I think, all things considered that it will have to be larger again by half, or even two thirds.”
“That’s very good. You never know what you are going to need if you have any children. Now in the front entryway or foyer how do you see it?”
“Solid wood with a place large enough for at least twenty-five pairs of shoes.”

“Ah yes, a traditional style Japanese entryway, very apropos What king of lighting would you like in there?”
“I think four small candle lamp type brackets would be lovely. Possibly in a silver type material or brass if the wood used is darker, say mahogany.”
‘You have good taste madam. Now this building original first area, or greeting room was done in wood. Do you want to continue with wood or go with a little carpet?”
“I think I would rather continue with wood, but with a large rug or carpet in the center of the room.”
“As you have chosen mahogany miss might I choose the color? I think red or a burgundy would definitely highlight the darker wood floors.”
“I agree. Now the entryway should enter into another room what do you think it was, sir?”
“It was probably the formal dining room. How do you want it to look madam?”
“I think lighter wood floors, like maybe birch or pine with a traditional low table in dominating the center. It should be surrounded by padded benches. I would like it have enough space for at least thirty or forty people just in case we will have to throw a formal party or something.”
On and on they went, room by room. Sometime the old man’s face would light up and he would make a quick suggestion. Other time he would just sit there and draw furiously.
Keitaro watched as his Beautiful bride to be worked with the artist. He could not remember ever seeing her so animated. He was brought back to reality but a light tap on his shoulder.
“Huh? Oh sorry Mr. Jeffries I was just watching your artist work, he is very good.”
“I told you he is the best son. Now once he is finished I will have the real architects draw up the official blueprints. The only thing I suggest is that I be allowed to restore the clock tower, if your young lady doesn’t mind, of course.”
“That would be alright with me sir. How much longer do you think they are going to be at it? I have never had to do anything like this before.”

“Knowing Dogel the way I do I believe he should be just about done. Do you want me to customize the landscaping as well or do you want me to leave that up to your lady friend as well?”
“Not to undermine you or your artist sir but I was planning on doing that part myself. Although the small hot spring in the back could use some work that will probably require some heavy equipment work.”

“Then I will leave that part up to you. It looks as though they are finished so I will be getting back to the office. I have to get these drawings of his to the architects. If all goes well we should be ready to start construction on this site within the month.”
With that the American went over to his artist and they began talking between them, as they wandered back to the main building.
Naru walked over to Keitaro, her face glowing with excitement breathing heavily.
“I never thought that it could be so exciting to design our home. I hope that I didn’t go overboard on materials though I know that the project funds are kind of limited.”
“Naru, anything that you have chosen will be just fine. This is going to be our home and I want you to be happy here.”
“Oh Keitaro, I love you so much.”
She wrapped her arms around him and began kissing him. His was taken aback by the suddenness of her response but soon he was kissing her just as fiercely as she was kissing him. Time seemed to stand still as they began to devour each other in their passion. Caressing each others backs the heat of their mutual desire fueled them on. And when Keitaro began to caress her buttocks through her skirt she mewled in response and pressed herself up against him even tighter.
Egged on by her positive response Keitaro lifted her skirt out of his way and began to stroke the firm globes of her nether cheeks with just the satin of her panties between his groping hands and her skin. When she began to squirm against his groping fingers he thrust his hands inside her panties to fondle her skin directly. But he thought he had gone too far when she suddenly stepped back away from him.
Naru smiled at the confused look on her lover’s face when she pulled away from him. Smiling sweetly she took another step back and watched his expression shift from one of fear and confusion to one of pure lust as she lifted her skirt even higher so that she could hook her thumbs onto the waistband of her satin undergarments and pulled them down and tossed them away. His face looked heated enough to burn her as she stepped in close once again.
Once again their tongues began to entwine in that ancient dual of passion. Hands roamed and fondled with even more freedom than before. Naru gasped when she felt his strong hands slide between her butt cheeks into the crevasse of her now bare ass. Arching her hips against him she leaned back and violently tore the shirt from him body.
Keitaro was in heaven the woman he loved so very dearly was kissing and caressing him and he was caressing her. Her buttocks felt warm and firm his hands, but he wondered if she was ready for more. Sliding his hands upwards he drew her blouse before them. She stepped back and allowed him to draw it over her head. He could only stare for a moment as her bare breasts came into view. But then she dragged his head back down to hers for another bout of kissing.
Naru felt as if she were on fire. The heat she felt in her belly was making her slightly dizzy and a damp feeling was coming from between her legs. Unused to the most primal of urges she began rubbing her crotch against his legs trying desperately to cure the sudden itch that had developed there. The heat flared even higher when she felt his hands start to gently cup and mold her breasts. Yet she was still unknowing what she truly wanted or how to go about getting it she reached down and unfastened the opening of his trousers and pulled them down.
When Naru dropped to her knees as she pulled his pants down he thought he was going to loose it right there. He might have lost his virginity to his aunt Haruka the night before but he was still quite inexperienced in the art of making love. Lying down he pulled his legs from his trousers and than began to free himself from his boxer shorts, when Naru slapped his hands gently.
After she slapped his hands to keep him from stripping himself bare Naru had to swallow a lump that had developed in her throat. She had never thought that she would be going this far with any man, much less Keitaro. But she knew now that she was very much in love with him and she wanted to prove it. For years she had given him the label of ‘hentai’ now she was the one being a hentai deliberately egging him on to suit her own developing urges. Caressing the swelling staff of his member through his shorts she could feel her heart’s already erratic, pace quicken even more. Reaching inside his shorts through the flap she pulled his now engorged member free of them. She only stared for what seemed like an eternity at the impressive man flesh before her. Reaching out she touched it again and hearing her lover moaning in obvious pleasure she wrapped her fingers about it and gently moved them up and down instinctively. Soon she noticed that he was leaking a slightly clear fluid from the purple tip of his glans. Knowing what she was about to try and do was scaring her nearly to death but she steeled herself and reached out with her tongue and lapped the fluid into her mouth. Finding the taste to be not unpleasant she began lapping again and again at his dribbling phallus. Steeling herself once more she opened her mouth a little wider and…
Feeling her tongue on his shaft had felt amazing but when she closed her lips around the head of his cock Keitaro thought he was going to loose his mind. She began slowly which was alright by him but it was also driving him crazy. Haruka must have known something like this was going to happen and tried to prepare him for it. He was trying valiantly to control himself but his body wasn’t paying attention to his foggy mind as his hips began to buck upwards seeking even more pleasure. He was relieved when she didn’t get angry with him although she had to reposition her body to better control the way he way thrusting up at her. Ever so slowly she began to work him even deeper into her throat. He was surprised when she started taking him deeper into her mouth but when he felt the head of his cock slip actually slip into her throat he started to see spots. After about ten minutes of delightful torture he could feel that awesome release building deep within his body. Trying to pull her off seemed to aggravate her though so he whispered “Naru I…I think I’m about to come.” He was shocked when she took him even deeper into her tightly sucking mouth. He had just about reached the brink when she pulled off of his cock and took a deep breath. Sighing with relief he stroked her soft hair but he quickly knew it was all over when she guided him back into her mouth and forced his shaft deep into her throat.
When His ejaculate burst into her throat Naru thought she was going to vomit at first. The amount of semen that was forced directly into her awaiting stomach was overwhelming. Pulling back slightly the next burst struck the top of her mouth and she tasted him for the first time. His jism tasted sweet, yet slightly salty and definitely pungent. She found the flavor to her liking and continued to swallow as three more shots of his seed flooded her mouth. After he was finished she looked up to gaze into his eyes lovingly and saw them burning with an emotion she had never seen in him before.
Keitaro loved this impetuous woman. She had just taken his cock down her throat and swallowed his cum. But now it was his turn to give her pleasure. Remembering what Haruka had done last night he pulled her up to him in a firm embrace. Then he rolled her over and began kissing her. He knew what she had just done to him but it didn’t matter to him. He was going to give her the same pleasure even if it killed him. Once again he began to fondle and caress her breasts as he continued kissing her as passionately as he could. Then he began to kiss his way downward pausing at the nape of her neck to nibble and suckle there. When he heard her start to moan and gasp in her own pleasure he continued on to her breasts. Her breasts weren’t the largest of the hinata girls but they were large enough for him. He found that he could spend all day lapping and sucking her taut brown nipples. He couldn’t think of any better way than to spend the afternoon than listening to her gasp as he suckled at her breasts again and again. After spending several minutes on each of her breasts Keitaro continued sliding a hand down her body, reviling in the taste of her skin as he did so. When he finally closed his hand over her burgeoning womanhood he heard her gasp with pleasure as her body arched into his. Continuing to lick and nibble at her heaving breasts he once again slipped his hand lower to rest on the thatch of brown hair between her thighs. Rubbing in slow circles he found that she was damp and ready. Removing his mouth from her breasts he began trailing kisses farther down her writhing body over her stomach until at last he planted his first kiss on the damp curls guarding her womanhood. He then forced her thighs apart and shifted his eyes so that he could gaze at the innermost part of her, her very core. Her labia looked red and swollen and juices were pouring from her innermost core. Unwilling to give her time to think about what he was about to do he dipped his head and…
When he planted that first kiss on her mound of venus Naru thought that she was going to go insane. Then she felt his tongue reach out and lap at the outer folds of her sex and she shot straight into the stratosphere. It was as if she had been hooked up to a continuing electrical current. His tongue and lips were playing havoc with her system. All she could do was buck and writhe with intense pleasure and he worked his probing tongue ever deeper into the depths of her womanhood. Then her clitoris made its first appearance and she felt him immediately take it between his lips. It was if her battery had suddenly charged to full power. She began to violently buck a squirm as he continued his unrelenting assault on the most delicate part of her. Then it hit her like a freight train. All she was capable of was screaming. Her body snapped taut with pleasure and she was overcome with a sudden bout of fatigue. Then when the waves of pleasure finally subsided she looked up at the man she loved. She knew he might not be the most handsome guy around but he was hers. And even though she had agreed to share him with the other girls she knew she was the one in charge. This was her man and if anyone else tried anything she would have their guts for garters. She finally understood that there was no way on earth she was ever going to be able to let him go. Reaching up she pulled him up until he was lying on top of her and gripped him tightly in her arms.

When Naru reached over and pulled him on top of her Keitaro knew that he had given her what she had given him. He held her and stroked her hair, kissing her all the while. Their kissing soon led to the partial revival of his erection. So Keitaro made sure the area on which they were laying was soft enough for her finding the area well padded as he wedged his legs in between her thighs and resumed kissing her. Once again he stared massaging her breasts eliciting another soft moan of pleasure. When he though it was safe enough to do so Keitaro slipped a hand in between their bodies and began to rub and tease at her vaginal opening finding her slick he grasped his throbbing member and guided it towards her dripping cleft. Her moans increased in intensity as he rubbed it back and forth over her swollen labia. Then guiding it once more he began pressing it into her.
When Keitaro began to shove his ridged phallus into her Naru was seized by a sudden moment of fear. This was definitely what she was counting on. She was about to be claimed by the man she loved, but something inside began nagging at her. That voice was stilled though when he once again started kissing her passionately. Realizing that he was going to have a bit of trouble pushing his oversized cock into her virginal depths Naru drew her legs up towards her chest. That seemed to help for a moment when she felt him slip partially into the confines of her sopping channel, but he slipped back out again. She felt him raise himself up slightly and reposition himself at her opening and start pressing again. Looking up into his eyes she couldn’t remember the last time his face had flushed with this much concentration. His face was ruddy and covered with sweat and his eyes were narrowed to mere slits. Then she felt him enter her for real. The broad head of his phallus began to sink deeper and deeper within her tight confines. Naru watches as centimeter by centimeter his manhood plundered her of her virginity. She never imagined that she could feel so full there. She felt as if he were going to separate her into two different halves, like he was using his cock the way a logger would use a wedge. Then she felt him pressing against it the barrier that separated girls from women. She felt him start to withdraw and was about to tell him it was ok to go ahead and do it when he thrust violently forward piercing through the thin membrane and buried himself to the hilt in her overstuffed cunt.
When he finally managed to claim her virginal barrier Keitaro could feel Naru tense up suddenly. He held himself as still as he could while she adjusted to having something as large as his cock within her tight body. He could feel her clutching at him with her internal muscles, massaging him with her newly opened channel. He could tell by the look on her face that it had hurt terribly to loose her hymen in that manner but he didn’t know how else to go about it. When he felt her start to relax beneath him he pulled back slowly. When just the tip of his invading member was still within her he look down at her the ultimate question burning in his eyes. When she gazed back into his eyes and nodded he surged forward again, once again claiming her entirely. He soon built up a rhythm sometimes shallow other times deeper. He rocked in and out of her at a very slow pace, but nature had other plans for him. His pace quickened and he began to drive into her faster and faster until their bodies were slapping together violently. “That’s it Keitaro, fuck me.” He could hear her moan again and again into his ear. He might have been concerned at first, but when he tried to slow the pace back down Naru shoved her hips into his as if to urge him on to greater speeds. So instead of trying to control himself he turned himself loose and let her have it. Where their bodies were joined was making a wet squelching sound. The sound only increased in volume as he increased the tempo even further. He could feel the now recognizable need for release and he started to withdraw but Naru wrapped her legs firmly around him holding him within her so that all he could manage were short rapid thrusts until…
Naru was out of her mind with pleasure again. His large phallus felt too good to be true. He was pounding her insides without mercy. She had never known bliss such as this. She rode wave after wave of pleasure. The faster he thrust into her the faster she wanted it. She wanted to cry out to the Kami to never let this amazing feeling stop. She was so full of his manhood that she could literally feel him throbbing inside of her. She had notice that she had produced even more of the fluid that made her internal walls slick but now there was so much of it that it was being forced from her body and was now starting to run down the crack of her butt just to pool beneath her ass on the grass. She could hear his moans of pleasure as he plundered her depths again and again. What turned her on even more was the whisper she heard most even though he had probably been trying to keep it under his breath she heard him as plainly as if he were talking normally “Kami, I love this woman.” When she felt him starting to throb faster within her she knew he must be as close to coming as she was so as he started to withdraw she locked her legs firmly around his back. She knew that he might get her pregnant if he came inside her, but she was way beyond the point of caring. If that wonderful tasting stuff she swallowed made her feel good when it went down her throat she definitely wanted to know what it felt like to have it go where it was originally meant to.
Together they crashed though the gates of bliss. Six heavy shots of semen burst against Naru’s clutching cervix. They could only lie there together both too weak to move from the physical exertions they had gone through. Both of them let out primal screams as their mutual orgasms flooded their systems with endorphins. For what seemed like hours they rose on clouds of bliss but all too soon the feelings wore off. As their bodies separated Keitaro looked down at Naru with stars in his eyes.
Naru had never happier than she was right now of that she was sure. She had just made love to the one person that meant more to her than anyone else on earth. She had finally done what her heart had been telling her to do for months and she had been rewarded a thousand fold for it. Never again would she doubt her heart when it came to the wonderful man she had just given her body to.
Together they got their clothes back on. They both had multiple rips and snags in their respective outfits, and Keitaro’s shirt was missing more than a couple of buttons but nether one cared as hand in hand they strode back to the apartments for some well needed food and rest.