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Title: Good
Reviewed By: BNPeanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2011 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this fanfic a lot. I love the story, the characters aren't too OOC, and I hope you keep this going. |
Title: sad
Reviewed By: kaore [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2010 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love everything about the fanfic... the only reason I gave a 5 for the overall rating... i because you stopped updating.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Nothost On: April 29, 2010 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothost here, and I'm an author and fanfiction, and usually go here to check out some stories that arn't on fanfiction. Anyway, nice work you've done here. The characters arn't too OOC, even during the lemons, which are the best I've seen in a long time. Keep it up, my fellow writer!
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Reviewed By: Nothost On: April 29, 2010 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothost here, and I'm an author and fanfiction, and usually go here to check out some stories that arn't on fanfiction. Anyway, nice work you've done here. The characters arn't too OOC, even during the lemons, which are the best I've seen in a long time. Keep it up, my fellow writer!
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Reviewed By: Nothost On: April 29, 2010 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothost here, and I'm an author and fanfiction, and usually go here to check out some stories that arn't on fanfiction. Anyway, nice work you've done here. The characters arn't too OOC, even during the lemons, which are the best I've seen in a long time. Keep it up, my fellow writer!
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Reviewed By: Nothost On: April 29, 2010 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I'm known on fanfiction and some other small communities on Nothost, and I have to say, nice job. Seriously best lemon's that I have ever read; you didn't do a half-ass job on it. And you managed to write them without getting the characters too OOCed, which is impressive in of itself. They are a few things I find slightly annoying about the story, such as how serious a tone it has recently acquired, but other then that, it's very entertaining, but very unlikely to happen to anyone. lol. Keep it coming. It's nice to read good work from a fellow writer.
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Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 22:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, then ending was good and enjoyed it and hope to see more
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Reviewed By: newogre On: August 28, 2009 04:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOW... That has got to be the greatest harem fic ever. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crowd: *gives a standing ovation* That was epic, awesome, and really good! You can't pay to find good Shinobu/Keitaro couplings like that. I was in awe. Not to mention the rest of the chapter was spot on as well. Something Keitaro said seemed like a shout-out to Please Teacher. All in all, by the by, chapter and story, you're doing a great job. I can't help but check weekly for new updates.
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Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 17:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter and hope to see more
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Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 08:20 EDT
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last chapter have been great and the use of each girls backgrounds is very good. The interrogation part was also done well. The assault seen was done very well. Everything has been done very well so far. You are a great storyteller and I wait to hear more. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: anima constrictor On: May 14, 2009 00:15 EDT
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nice fight scene. oh and a stupid question one of the "extras" that you used was called ling, is she supposed to be foreign? stupid i know, just curious
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Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter-wise i'm a day late and several dollars short. But, this story is still as great as ever. You're an awesome author.
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Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 02:52 EDT
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great updates, but what happen to the intro where the grandmother makes the letters.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 17:32 EDT
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At last these strange strangers come into play. And Naru/Motoko action is always appreciated. Good update.
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